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Post Reply {Fanfic} Hitsugaya In Love???
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Posted 3/30/08 , edited 3/30/08
hahaz anyway fantasy4ever999 ur story i luv it so much ! i hope u can write more ... =] add oil and continue to write more ... hahaz...
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Posted 3/30/08 , edited 3/30/08
it's getting better and better ^_^
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cute story! keep it goin'.................
Posted 4/2/08 , edited 4/2/08
The Reason

Higurashi was talking with Byakuya when suddenly, she heard a noise coming from outside. She stood up and watched outside. What a surprise she got that the person she saw was Hitsugaya eavesdropping outside.
Hitsu: Ehhhhh!!!!!! (It’s bad, she found me)
Hitsugaya ran away when Higurashi discovered him.
Every time that Higurashi went to meet with Byakuya, Hitsugaya followed her and eavesdropped outside, and everytime was discovered by Higurashi. One day it happened the same, when Hitsugaya was discovered, Higurashi shouted at him.
Higu: It’s enough Taichou-sama, you shouldn’t listen to our private conversations! If you continue like that, I won’t talk to you anymore, got it?
Hitsu: Ehh? (She’s angry with me)
After Hitsugaya heard that, he left the room running with his head down.
Higu: Taichou..sama…
When she saw that Hitsugaya was upset she followed him. After a while she reached him.
Higu: Sorry Taichou-sama, I shouldn’t have shouted at him, sorry
Hitsu: It’s ok, I’m fine, you don’t have to apologize with me, I’m the one who should apologize with you, sorry
Higurashi was surprised because he was a person who seldom apologize with someone, when she saw him like that she decided to tell him the truth
Higu: you want to know what relationship do we have, right?
Hitsu: mm… but I know you won’t tell me
Higu: Ok, I’ll tell you
Hitsu: really?
Higu: Mmm… Actually he’s my brother
Hitsu: ehhh? Oey… if you don’t want to tell me, it’s ok, you don’t have to make an excuse like that
Higu: I’m telling you the truth. It was many years ago before he found Rukia-nee-chan. I was in Rukongai when I saw him for the first time. He saved me from some people that were attacking me. In that moment, he thought that I was Rukia-nee-chan, that’s why he saved me. He told me to become a Shinigami and then enter to 6th squad, but then he found Rukia-nee-chan, and he discovered that I wasn’t the person he was searching for, but anyway he accepted me as his sister, but only he and Rukia-nee-chan know about that. That’s why I don’t have Kuchiki as my last name. Nii-sama is a very kind person even he doesn’t look like as one, he protects me a lot.
Hitsu: Is it real? I can’t believe that you’re his sister ( I had thought that you were his girlfriend), the other day he glared at you.
Higu: Yeah, that’s because I didn’t enter to 6th squad, so he was angry with me.
Hitsu: But why are you telling that to me? Didn’t you say that it was a secret?
Higu: Yes, but I couldn’t help it, you were upset and I know that you won’t be happy if I don’t tell you. Now I’ve told you the secret, promise me don’t to tell to anyone, ok?
Hitsu: Mmm..
Hitsugaya felt relief when she told him that she was Byakuya’s sister.
Hitsu: So you were inspired by Byakuya to become a Shinigami?
Higu: Yeah, at the beginning, but then there was another person who inspired me more to become a Shinigami, that’s the reason that I worked so hard that everyone called me a genious
Hitsu: Ehh... I see. Who is that person?
Higu: Hey, you’re different today, why?
Hitsu: eh?? I’m the same
Higu: No, you’re not the same, today you’re talking too much, and you’re very curious about me, why?
Hitsu: It’s nothing, you’re thinking too much. Let’s go home
Higu: You’re sly, why can you ask me question and I can’t?
Hitsu: That’s because I’m you’re Captain, that’s all.
Higu: That’s the Captain that I know, hehe.

The final chapter is coming soon, I hope you will like it.
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Posted 4/2/08 , edited 4/2/08
I loved it *hugz u for making the story*
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Posted 4/4/08 , edited 4/5/08
woot ! nice nice ... last chapter is cumin up soon ! i am lookin 4ward to it ! =]
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Posted 4/4/08 , edited 4/5/08
Too bad the next one's going to be the last chapter... Oh well...update soon~!
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Posted 4/5/08 , edited 4/5/08
Loool^^, that's so funny and nice =)
*want to read the next* ^^
Too bad that this story is over next time.... =(
Posted 4/5/08 , edited 4/5/08
This is the first part of the final.

The person I love (Difficult To Say)

Higurashi was helping Hitsugaya with his work. At that moment she was thinking.
Higu: ( I’m very close to him right now (Hitsugaya), I want to call him by his name, but I’ve heard people saying that he doesn’t like people call him by his name, would he be angry with me? I don’t know.)
Higurashi took courage and tried to call his name.
Hitsugaya looked at her.
Higu: To...Torment
Hitsugaya: ah?
Higu: It looks like it’s going to have a torment..
Higurashi couldn’t say what she wanted to say, and continued working.
Hitsu: ah
After a while Higurashi left the room to go to make some cakes for Hitsugaya. When she came back...
Higu: To...To...
Hitsu: eh? What?
Higu: tomato, today I made a tomato cake
Hitsu: eh?? But this is strawberry
Higu: ah, strawberry, I think I made a mistake, jeje
Higu: To…to
Hitsu: what do you want to say this time?
Higu: tomodachi (friends), we’re tomodachi, right?
Hitsu: m…
Higurashi continued working and trying to say his name when she had the opportunity, but she couldn’t say it, because she was scared that Hitsugaya doesn’t like it.
That night she tried again..
Higu: To...To...
Hitsu: It’s ok
Higu: ehh? What?
Hitsu: My name, you want to call me by my name, don’t you?
Higu: Is it ok?
Hitsu: .m… I don’t mind.
Higu: To... Toushirou-kun, you can call my name, too.
Hitsu: ahh…
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Posted 4/5/08 , edited 4/5/08
ahhahahaa love it keep going
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Posted 4/5/08 , edited 4/5/08
aww its almost over
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Posted 4/7/08 , edited 4/8/08
kyaaaaaa! its so keeyoot! pleasae continue
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Posted 4/8/08 , edited 4/8/08
omg its cumin to an end ! moto moto ! ah... luv it so much ! =]
Posted 4/8/08 , edited 4/9/08
Omatase, here's the second part, the last part is coming soon.

The Person I love (Who’s The Person She Loves?)
Higurashi fell asleep after working a long time. She started dreaming, and calling a name...Hitsugaya was curious about what was she dreaming, but he couldn’t hear what she was saying, so he got close to her.
Higu: J...Juu...I like you. You…look…cool...with…your…white…hair
After he heard that, he was shocked, he knew that she was in love with another person.
Next day, Hitsugaya went to her room, and asked her to go to a place, but she said that she was busy. She had something to do. Hitsugaya thought that she was going to meet someone that day, so he followed her, and he found that she went to the kitchen to prepare a cake. He was happy , because he could eat cake today, but what a surprise when Higurashi entered the room with nothing in her hands. He was upset , because he thought that the cake she was making was for that person called Juu.
Higu: Toushirou-kun, can you come to my room, tonight? I have something to show you
Hitsu: eh? Mm...
That night Hitsugaya went to her room, but he wasn’t cheerful. When he came in, he heard…
Higu: Happy Birthday, Toushirou-kun.
Hitsugaya was happy when he saw the cake she was making that morning. Then he was upset again, and tried to leave the room, but suddenly Higurashi held his hand, and asked.
Higu: what’s wrong Toushirou-kun? Why are you upset? Tell me, please
Hitsu: I have a question
Higu: Ok, ask me, what do you want to know?
Hitsu: the person who inspired you to become a shinigami was Juu, right?
Higu: eh!!!! How did you know?
Hitsu: I knew it, so you’re in love with him, aren’t you?
Higu: Yeah.
Hitsugaya felt terrible when she said that.
Hitsu: does he know about your feelings?
Higu: I don’t know, maybe he has perceived it
Hitsu: I’ll go and ask him
Higu: Him? Who?
Hitsu: of course Ukitake
Higu: why? What relation does he have with what we’re talking about right now?
Hitsu: of course he has, he’s the man you like, isn’t he?
Higu: why? Why do you say he’s the man I like?
Hitsu: didn’t you say Juu? Juushirou. He’s Ukitake Juushirou, and he has white hair
Higu: ah, I see
Hitsu: ehh? What do you mean with that? Wasn’t he the man you were talking about?
Higu: No, he’s not the only one that is juu, and white hair
Hitsu: who else?
Higu: Y-O-U
Hitsu: eh??!! Me? Do I have juu? Juu, juu, ah! I see juu, juuban (10th squad)
Higu: It’s right. You’re Juu, the person I love
Hitsu: Why? Why you call me Juu?
Higu: That’s because I didn’t know your name when you went to make a demonstration in the academy, in that moment you had the kanji Juu (Ten) on your back, so since then I’ve called you Juu, until I entered to this squad, I could know your name.
Hitsu: Ehh??!!! So... I’m the person you like?
Higu: M... haha, you were jealous, weren’t you?
Hitsu: Of course not
Higu: ehhh?? Maybe I should go and ask him to have a date with me
Hitsu: Ehh?? You’re teasing me, right? Didn’t you say that you love me?
Higu: I did, but it looks like that I loved the wrong person
Hitsu: why do you say that?
Higu: because you haven’t told me that you love me
Hitsu: It’s true.
Higu: why don’t you give me a proof?
Hitsu: what kind of proof?
Higu: a kiss
Hitsu: KISS! What’s that?
Higu: this..
Higurashi showed him a magazine with a picture of a couple kissing.
Higurashi got close to him little by little
Hitsu: what? What are you doing, Yukiko?
Higu: I’m so happy, you called my name.
Higurashi was getting close to him little by little, they were about to kiss, when suddenly someone opened the door and shout loudly.
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Posted 4/8/08 , edited 4/9/08
ME: I love you Shiro ^_^
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