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Posted 3/18/08
A night so Dark, he didn't Stop to Scream
The walls were Closing him, he Didn't stop to Cry
All his family couldn't Believe It!!!.....Incredible!!!!

The Lightnings of the sky, didn't Stop to Sound
His mother so Scared, Wanted to Faint
To Give it Solution, an Expert they called......Was Anormal!!!!

While everybody Were looking to The Clock saying Tic-Tac...
the Expert Took the door 3 Times...
Bringing with Him First aid...
Anybody Couldn't Believe it!!!....It looked like a rag dolls Battle!!!

Was an Incredible Fight!!, A monster entered to Him
For a Defect He Had!!...he didn't Have the eyedlids,
The Pupils was Hidden!!...Tied to His bed with His blurry Eyes
and screams of pain!!!...of Desesperation!!!
Well with The Problem The Expert Was finishing!!!

The stars and the Moon, Could be aligned
to Made a Ritual That it Couldn't Fail!!
Or with Punchs and Kicks was going To Draw It...Inexhaustible

Well the things were drained, they didn't Have a Good Plan
The family In the House were Walking desesperated
Suddenly anohter Guy Enter to The house and That made Them Stop!!...Too Appalling!!!

While The guy was Climbing the stairs...
Everybody notes his Rejection...
However he enter Nothing Appalling...
Anybody Couldn't Believe it!!!....It looked like a rag dolls Battle!!!

The cross was in his chest, and in the moment it broke in 2 Parts...
The Devil appears!!!....and he Dissapeared!!!...Maybe To Look for its next Victim
or it was destroyed!!!...Nobody knew!!!...

But was a Good and Excelent Fight!!!!...'cuz With the Problem the Expert put Over!!!!!





This isn't a real history!!!...i created!!!...
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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW. that is really great!!!! and awesome!!!! XD I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job there david!!!!! te aventaste!!!! (or so that's how they say, right? lol)
Posted 3/18/08
Awesome poem David! great job!!
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Oooooh....that's really interesting ><
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fullnarumetal wrote:

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW. that is really great!!!! and awesome!!!! XD I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job there david!!!!! te aventaste!!!! (or so that's how they say, right? lol)


Yes it is Marcela!!!...Thanks!!!

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kagura4 wrote:

Awesome poem David! great job!!


Thanks Kagura!!!...but why the tounge?
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why you're very welcome!!!!!!
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moonwarrior485 wrote:

Oooooh....that's really interesting ><


Thanks!!!...that's good to read!!!...=)
Posted 3/20/08

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kagura4 wrote:

Awesome poem David! great job!!


Thanks Kagura!!!...but why the tounge?


Srri I just liked the smiley face X3
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