Episode 2, The Discovery
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Posted 3/18/08 , edited 4/5/08

(going to try to lengthen it)
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Posted 3/18/08
I see, he is starting to realize his own power. You might need to describe Sado a lil more
Posted 3/23/08
how about Rin Sorou?
is that a good last name?
i love it cant w8 for epi 3^^
hurry up man haha lolz jk take your time^^
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Posted 3/24/08
Can't wait for the next ,good job
It's really getting exiting now
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Posted 3/24/08
love it, love it, love it good job keep it cuming cant wait for the next episode
Posted 3/24/08
nice the things are starting to spice up... keep up the good work I also can't wait to see what's gonna hapen next!
another vampire... hmm.... I did mention this, did you planed to use the cather that I described you know Rin' older brother (I liked the name Ryuk, but you can call him whatever you want), after the scene that you described his personalitiy that I described does fit in, especialy in wish of killing Yyuusei... looking foward to do good action scene with two vampires fighting... and I agree with "harrisan123" you could describe a Sado, at least his personality...
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Posted 3/24/08

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nice the things are starting to spice up... keep up the good work I also can't wait to see what's gonna hapen next!
another vampire... hmm.... I did mention this, did you planed to use the cather that I described you know Rin' older brother (I liked the name Ryuk, but you can call him whatever you want), after the scene that you described his personalitiy that I described does fit in, especialy in wish of killing Yyuusei... looking foward to do good action scene with two vampires fighting... and I agree with "harrisan123" you could describe a Sado, at least his personality...


gotcha, i will. And yeah, this whole thing came outa your suggestion of her older brother. Thanks. =)
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Posted 3/28/08
I actually read this already. Looks good although it seems a bit short.
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