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a story for the holy week....
hope you all like it?

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a married couple always wish for a baby girl and one day their wish came true, they named here sunshine pearl... one day when sunshine is 6 yrs. old, her parents started to quarrel... she was still little to understand and thought that because of her, her parents started to hurt each other... one day her mother were searching her daughter and thought that she was only playing hide ans seek but after a little while still no sign of her daughter, she became worried, she told this to her husband and they both search again around the house...

sunshine's mother was already crying and her father called the police station

"OUR DAUGHTER IS AT STAKE! SHE IS JUST 6 YEARS OLD! DO YOU THINK SHE COULD JUST SURVIVE OUT THERE NOT KNOWING ANY DANGER MAY COME AT HER!!!"

her father is both furious and worried, both of them ride in their car and started to search every single streets they come to

"its my fault" sunshine's father said
"no! its our fault" her wife said "we were to busy arguing to each other and didn't notice that we don't have anytime for her anymore" she added

3 months had passed, someone called to sunshine's parents, the police finally found their daughter

when her parents went to the station, they saw their daughter, her clothes were ragged and her body is full of marks of dirt and wounds... her mother run through her and embrace her tight, crying.

"where have you've? we were so worried about you"

sunshine wipe her mother's tears with her with her wounded hand

"don't cry mommy, you and daddy are not fighting anymore, right?" sunshine asked

"ofcourse, we've been sick and worried searching for you" her father said

"I'm sorry daddy, mommy, because of me, you were hurting each other" sunshine said, her mother was still crying but was shocked to what she have heard and also her father

"is that the reason you leave? why do you think its your fault?"
her daddy said, he can't stop his tears anymore and started to cry

" when mommy and daddy are fighting, i heard that, sunshine is bad luck, because of sunshine, daddy's job is gone" sunshine said crying, her parents were speechless and their tears are still falling

"when i'm gone, mommy and daddy were not arguing anymore, thats good, right?" sunshine ask

--------------------------------------------------------to be continue

I'm sorry that I have to cut that

I still need time to think and make it better

hope you all like it
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ok I like it ^_^
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thanksssssssssssss...................
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that was nice
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whoaaaa dat was kinda sad..........but nice story ^_^
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cool and sad it happened to me but i was only lost for 2 hours ehehe..
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ejchuibpogi wrote:

cool and sad it happened to me but i was only lost for 2 hours ehehe..


wow really? that is so cool... i want to be lost too... hehehehe my parents are too strict thats why it never happen to me....
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"I'm sorry daddy, mommy, because of me, you were hurting each other" sunshine said, her mother was still crying but was shocked to what she have heard and also her father

"is that the reason you leave? why do you think its your fault?"
her daddy said, he can't stop his tears anymore and started to cry

" when mommy and daddy are fighting, i heard that, sunshine is bad luck, because of sunshine, daddy's job is gone" sunshine said crying, her parents were speechless and their tears are still falling

"when i'm gone, mommy and daddy were not arguing anymore, thats good, right?" sunshine ask



nice one..
really love this part...
i'm think i'm gonna cry..

hope the part two is out...
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Posted 4/9/08

angel_prophecy wrote:


ejchuibpogi wrote:

cool and sad it happened to me but i was only lost for 2 hours ehehe..


wow really? that is so cool... i want to be lost too... hehehehe my parents are too strict thats why it never happen to me....


Hey Wanna make a runaway..nahh.just kiddding.my parents are strict too..but i got lost in the mall..a very big mall..
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Posted 4/10/08

ejchuibpogi wrote:


angel_prophecy wrote:


ejchuibpogi wrote:

cool and sad it happened to me but i was only lost for 2 hours ehehe..


wow really? that is so cool... i want to be lost too... hehehehe my parents are too strict thats why it never happen to me....


Hey Wanna make a runaway..nahh.just kiddding.my parents are strict too..but i got lost in the mall..a very big mall..


i was lost in the mall too..
i think i'm 3 yrs. old there..
my mom said that i followed the same shirt as my mom so i thought that was my mom..
good thing the cashier saw me...
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kawaiimayako wrote:


ejchuibpogi wrote:


angel_prophecy wrote:


ejchuibpogi wrote:

cool and sad it happened to me but i was only lost for 2 hours ehehe..


wow really? that is so cool... i want to be lost too... hehehehe my parents are too strict thats why it never happen to me....


Hey Wanna make a runaway..nahh.just kiddding.my parents are strict too..but i got lost in the mall..a very big mall..


i was lost in the mall too..
i think i'm 3 yrs. old there..
my mom said that i followed the same shirt as my mom so i thought that was my mom..
good thing the cashier saw me...



not fair! i want to be lost too.....

maybe i will be able to post the part two next... finallly monday, april 14! our last day of school... ahahaha free at last... then i will be able post my work here
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Posted 4/13/08

angel_prophecy wrote:


kawaiimayako wrote:


ejchuibpogi wrote:


angel_prophecy wrote:


ejchuibpogi wrote:

cool and sad it happened to me but i was only lost for 2 hours ehehe..


wow really? that is so cool... i want to be lost too... hehehehe my parents are too strict thats why it never happen to me....


Hey Wanna make a runaway..nahh.just kiddding.my parents are strict too..but i got lost in the mall..a very big mall..


i was lost in the mall too..
i think i'm 3 yrs. old there..
my mom said that i followed the same shirt as my mom so i thought that was my mom..
good thing the cashier saw me...



not fair! i want to be lost too.....

maybe i will be able to post the part two next... finallly monday, april 14! our last day of school... ahahaha free at last... then i will be able post my work here


ok ok.. i'll wait..
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hehehe sacrice part 2 already out
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