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I have this nightmare a week ago. Even though it's a bad dream it I think it's a good story. It's really a gory dream.

A 16 years old boy haven't seen the outside world for the whole years of his life. Since his childhood he was been keep in a huge building and never got outside. Why? He was being train and mold as a heartless human that won't have a second thought of killing people. There's many phychologist and soldiers that train him. He's grandfather is the one that hired them to train him to kill. At the age of 5 he already start killing people. They are prisoners that would be soon executed but they have brought to the boy to be killed on his own hands ( It so horrible when I dreamed how he killed them ) Everyday there's one person who die on his hands. Although he have been teach how to read and write, he was also been teached how to torture and to use anything as a weapon. He only watch gory movies, how to torture and killing peoples since he is a child. One day a horrible thing happens. He manage to escape from his room and slaughter all people in the giant building except one female psychologist to guide him on the outside world until he find his grandfather to kill him.
That's when I wake up. I just wondered then. How could he live in our world without being tempt to kill?
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I have this nightmare a week ago. Even though it's a bad dream it I think it's a good story. It's really a gory dream.

A 16 years old boy haven't seen the outside world for the whole years of his life. Since his childhood he was been keep in a huge building and never got outside. Why? He was being train and mold as a heartless human that won't have a second thought of killing people. There's many phychologist and soldiers that train him. He's grandfather is the one that hired them to train him to kill. At the age of 5 he already start killing people. They are prisoners that would be soon executed but they have brought to the boy to be killed on his own hands ( It so horrible when I dreamed how he killed them ) Everyday there's one person who die on his hands. Although he have been teach how to read and write, he was also been teached how to torture and to use anything as a weapon. He only watch gory movies, how to torture and killing peoples since he is a child. One day a horrible thing happens. He manage to escape from his room and slaughter all people in the giant building except one female psychologist to guide him on the outside world until he find his grandfather to kill him.
That's when I wake up. I just wondered then. How could he live in our world without being tempt to kill?


This is good stuff! It's something like Gunslinger Girl I suppose. It comes off a little like Urdumkeit when I think about it. Anyway, cool story.
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blckfox7 wrote:

I have this nightmare a week ago. Even though it's a bad dream it I think it's a good story. It's really a gory dream.

A 16 years old boy haven't seen the outside world for the whole years of his life. Since his childhood he was been keep in a huge building and never got outside. Why? He was being train and mold as a heartless human that won't have a second thought of killing people. There's many phychologist and soldiers that train him. He's grandfather is the one that hired them to train him to kill. At the age of 5 he already start killing people. They are prisoners that would be soon executed but they have brought to the boy to be killed on his own hands ( It so horrible when I dreamed how he killed them ) Everyday there's one person who die on his hands. Although he have been teach how to read and write, he was also been teached how to torture and to use anything as a weapon. He only watch gory movies, how to torture and killing peoples since he is a child. One day a horrible thing happens. He manage to escape from his room and slaughter all people in the giant building except one female psychologist to guide him on the outside world until he find his grandfather to kill him.
That's when I wake up. I just wondered then. How could he live in our world without being tempt to kill?


This is good stuff! It's something like Gunslinger Girl I suppose. It comes off a little like Urdumkeit when I think about it. Anyway, cool story.


Thanks but I'm not so good in story telling.
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*ahh, i should've fixed the writing* =_=

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just 1 lame idea ...........

a robot feel in love with human .normal right ,
make it vice versa
the robot is male and fallen love to a girl .

on a warzone
A battle android model cdx -2081 is programmed to only exterminate what within it breach ..however on a mission ,he encounter a civilian girl named Nadia .Nadia show him what means of humanity and love .Slowly the android started having emotion




p.s :the android have two modes combat mode and civilian mode to help him disguise
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Posted 5/17/08

blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


blckfox7 wrote:

I have this nightmare a week ago. Even though it's a bad dream it I think it's a good story. It's really a gory dream.

A 16 years old boy haven't seen the outside world for the whole years of his life. Since his childhood he was been keep in a huge building and never got outside. Why? He was being train and mold as a heartless human that won't have a second thought of killing people. There's many phychologist and soldiers that train him. He's grandfather is the one that hired them to train him to kill. At the age of 5 he already start killing people. They are prisoners that would be soon executed but they have brought to the boy to be killed on his own hands ( It so horrible when I dreamed how he killed them ) Everyday there's one person who die on his hands. Although he have been teach how to read and write, he was also been teached how to torture and to use anything as a weapon. He only watch gory movies, how to torture and killing peoples since he is a child. One day a horrible thing happens. He manage to escape from his room and slaughter all people in the giant building except one female psychologist to guide him on the outside world until he find his grandfather to kill him.
That's when I wake up. I just wondered then. How could he live in our world without being tempt to kill?


This is good stuff! It's something like Gunslinger Girl I suppose. It comes off a little like Urdumkeit when I think about it. Anyway, cool story.


Thanks but I'm not so good in story telling.


Why don't you try writing it? You never know until you try.
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a robot feel in love with human .normal right ,
make it vice versa
the robot is male and fallen love to a girl .


Isn't that just the same thing twice? A robot falling in love with a human.
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blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:

This is good stuff! It's something like Gunslinger Girl I suppose. It comes off a little like Urdumkeit when I think about it. Anyway, cool story.


Thanks but I'm not so good in story telling.


Why don't you try writing it? You never know until you try.


I guess so. Besides. No one might bother to read it.
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blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:

This is good stuff! It's something like Gunslinger Girl I suppose. It comes off a little like Urdumkeit when I think about it. Anyway, cool story.


Thanks but I'm not so good in story telling.


Why don't you try writing it? You never know until you try.


I guess so. Besides. No one might bother to read it.


Your wording leads me to believe that you thought I was discouraging you. Reread my post; I really want you to write it.
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blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:

This is good stuff! It's something like Gunslinger Girl I suppose. It comes off a little like Urdumkeit when I think about it. Anyway, cool story.


Thanks but I'm not so good in story telling.


Why don't you try writing it? You never know until you try.


I guess so. Besides. No one might bother to read it.


Your wording leads me to believe that you thought I was discouraging you. Reread my post; I really want you to write it.


Ok. I'll try.
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blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:

This is good stuff! It's something like Gunslinger Girl I suppose. It comes off a little like Urdumkeit when I think about it. Anyway, cool story.


Thanks but I'm not so good in story telling.


Why don't you try writing it? You never know until you try.


I guess so. Besides. No one might bother to read it.


Your wording leads me to believe that you thought I was discouraging you. Reread my post; I really want you to write it.


Ok. I'll try.


Hooray! I coerced someone into creative writing! My life is complete!
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The_8th_Sin wrote:


blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:

This is good stuff! It's something like Gunslinger Girl I suppose. It comes off a little like Urdumkeit when I think about it. Anyway, cool story.


Thanks but I'm not so good in story telling.


Why don't you try writing it? You never know until you try.


I guess so. Besides. No one might bother to read it.


Your wording leads me to believe that you thought I was discouraging you. Reread my post; I really want you to write it.


Ok. I'll try.


Hooray! I coerced someone into creative writing! My life is complete!


I'm not sure yet if I can finish it
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blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


blckfox7 wrote:

Thanks but I'm not so good in story telling.


Why don't you try writing it? You never know until you try.


I guess so. Besides. No one might bother to read it.


Your wording leads me to believe that you thought I was discouraging you. Reread my post; I really want you to write it.


Ok. I'll try.


Hooray! I coerced someone into creative writing! My life is complete!


I'm not sure yet if I can finish it


Don't believe in yourself! Believe in me, who believes in you!

Go beyond the impossible and kick reason to the curb!
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Posted 5/17/08

The_8th_Sin wrote:


blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


blckfox7 wrote:

Thanks but I'm not so good in story telling.


Why don't you try writing it? You never know until you try.


I guess so. Besides. No one might bother to read it.


Your wording leads me to believe that you thought I was discouraging you. Reread my post; I really want you to write it.


Ok. I'll try.


Hooray! I coerced someone into creative writing! My life is complete!


I'm not sure yet if I can finish it


Don't believe in yourself! Believe in me, who believes in you!

Go beyond the impossible and kick reason to the curb!


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OMG Your manliness have moved me. I'll write as soon as I can.
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lol, sorry to butt into the conversation, but u should deffintily try writing it, i am with 8th, i rlly want u to write it too
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