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Posted 5/18/08

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blckfox7 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


blckfox7 wrote:


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Thanks but I'm not so good in story telling.


Why don't you try writing it? You never know until you try.


I guess so. Besides. No one might bother to read it.


Your wording leads me to believe that you thought I was discouraging you. Reread my post; I really want you to write it.


Ok. I'll try.


Hooray! I coerced someone into creative writing! My life is complete!


I'm not sure yet if I can finish it


Don't believe in yourself! Believe in me, who believes in you!

Go beyond the impossible and kick reason to the curb!


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OMG Your manliness have moved me. I'll write as soon as I can.


You know how I started writeing the story? I had a dream to
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i got some... but kinda lazy to put it here...xD
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Posted 5/25/08

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This is where you can post an idea for you're story so we can make a forum for it. We can't wait to see what you all got so please join in the forum. At least post a basic plot summary for you're story.





my idea is about a kid (Age unknown) named Tsubasa.
he is goofy and a bit like naruto, and can be deadly serouis sometimes when friends in danger and so on.
he goes to a fighting acadamy with his friends and wields a large sword with a powerfull water god/demon housed in it.
he is half semi were-wolf.
when he phsicaly tastes blood in his mouth he turn werewolf for a period of time.
when normal he is a fairly average fighter but he strikes up a friendship with the demon in his sword.the demon can manipulate water and has a bond with water dwelling creatures.
Tsubasa has odd comersations with his sword.he also a 3 very good friends who also go to the acadamy

in this world there are :
weoponmasters-use weopans, ninja's-use stealth and speed, mages-use spells,hand signs and scrolls , alchemists-use spells,summoning circles (for demons).

Weaponmasters are very strong and specialise in weopans,some magical
Ninja's are speedy quiet and use concealed weapons
Mages have a high spiritual energy and can learn medical and illusionary spells.
Alchemists are banned and use dark magic.

the acadamy is for teachin the basics of all above (including basic alchemy) and each student goes to a specialist class.
Tsubasa has yet to choose a specialist style,and is still in 1st year basics.
the acadamy is for trainig up proctecters of villages,against magical creature enmies and such.
4 protecters per village or clan.
the acadmy likes to haave veriation of styles for the 4 village protecteors.
those who dont pass the last year test join the army.
a requirement of the acadamy is that u can use some level of magic even if very low level magic,like basic healing.

normal soldiers and swordsmen despise people who go to the acadamy.



Do we need to make a character?(like draw one and post it up)
Posted 5/25/08

itachi643 wrote:


kungpowshorts wrote:



This is where you can post an idea for you're story so we can make a forum for it. We can't wait to see what you all got so please join in the forum. At least post a basic plot summary for you're story.





my idea is about a kid (Age unknown) named Tsubasa.
he is goofy and a bit like naruto, and can be deadly serouis sometimes when friends in danger and so on.
he goes to a fighting acadamy with his friends and wields a large sword with a powerfull water god/demon housed in it.
he is half semi were-wolf.
when he phsicaly tastes blood in his mouth he turn werewolf for a period of time.
when normal he is a fairly average fighter but he strikes up a friendship with the demon in his sword.the demon can manipulate water and has a bond with water dwelling creatures.
Tsubasa has odd comersations with his sword.he also a 3 very good friends who also go to the acadamy

in this world there are :
weoponmasters-use weopans, ninja's-use stealth and speed, mages-use spells,hand signs and scrolls , alchemists-use spells,summoning circles (for demons).

Weaponmasters are very strong and specialise in weopans,some magical
Ninja's are speedy quiet and use concealed weapons
Mages have a high spiritual energy and can learn medical and illusionary spells.
Alchemists are banned and use dark magic.

the acadamy is for teachin the basics of all above (including basic alchemy) and each student goes to a specialist class.
Tsubasa has yet to choose a specialist style,and is still in 1st year basics.
the acadamy is for trainig up proctecters of villages,against magical creature enmies and such.
4 protecters per village or clan.
the acadmy likes to haave veriation of styles for the 4 village protecteors.
those who dont pass the last year test join the army.
a requirement of the acadamy is that u can use some level of magic even if very low level magic,like basic healing.

normal soldiers and swordsmen despise people who go to the acadamy.



Do we need to make a character?(like draw one and post it up)


Well Itachi I wrote that marked red. As it says. Also it's not nesecery to draw a charachter if you don't know how to draw it good. Also if you wish you can just post a inspirational picture from the web, to help you what shoudl your charachter look like. If you don't have picture just describe him/her whit words. For charachters for your story visit "Make you charachter here" Forum here in making anime. Thanks for joining by the way
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Posted 5/25/08

RihgisKhan wrote:


itachi643 wrote:


kungpowshorts wrote:



This is where you can post an idea for you're story so we can make a forum for it. We can't wait to see what you all got so please join in the forum. At least post a basic plot summary for you're story.





my idea is about a kid (Age unknown) named Tsubasa.
he is goofy and a bit like naruto, and can be deadly serouis sometimes when friends in danger and so on.
he goes to a fighting acadamy with his friends and wields a large sword with a powerfull water god/demon housed in it.
he is half semi were-wolf.
when he phsicaly tastes blood in his mouth he turn werewolf for a period of time.
when normal he is a fairly average fighter but he strikes up a friendship with the demon in his sword.the demon can manipulate water and has a bond with water dwelling creatures.
Tsubasa has odd comersations with his sword.he also a 3 very good friends who also go to the acadamy

in this world there are :
weoponmasters-use weopans, ninja's-use stealth and speed, mages-use spells,hand signs and scrolls , alchemists-use spells,summoning circles (for demons).

Weaponmasters are very strong and specialise in weopans,some magical
Ninja's are speedy quiet and use concealed weapons
Mages have a high spiritual energy and can learn medical and illusionary spells.
Alchemists are banned and use dark magic.

the acadamy is for teachin the basics of all above (including basic alchemy) and each student goes to a specialist class.
Tsubasa has yet to choose a specialist style,and is still in 1st year basics.
the acadamy is for trainig up proctecters of villages,against magical creature enmies and such.
4 protecters per village or clan.
the acadmy likes to haave veriation of styles for the 4 village protecteors.
those who dont pass the last year test join the army.
a requirement of the acadamy is that u can use some level of magic even if very low level magic,like basic healing.

normal soldiers and swordsmen despise people who go to the acadamy.



Do we need to make a character?(like draw one and post it up)


Well Itachi I wrote that marked red. As it says. Also it's not nesecery to draw a charachter if you don't know how to draw it good. Also if you wish you can just post a inspirational picture from the web, to help you what shoudl your charachter look like. If you don't have picture just describe him/her whit words. For charachters for your story visit "Make you charachter here" Forum here in making anime. Thanks for joining by the way


Oh Thnxs for the help...now to think about what kind of anime to make...
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How about he has some sort of secret connection with the sword. Such as: He is a fallen water demon/god; the demon/god in the sword ate part of his soul in order to work with him; the demon/god in the sword saved him when he was about to die by sharing his life- possessing him sometimes and draining his life energy.
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Posted 5/27/08

Lanavis wrote:

How about he has some sort of secret connection with the sword. Such as: He is a fallen water demon/god; the demon/god in the sword ate part of his soul in order to work with him; the demon/god in the sword saved him when he was about to die by sharing his life- possessing him sometimes and draining his life energy.


At what story are you directing that comment?
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Posted 5/27/08

RihgisKhan wrote:


itachi643 wrote:


kungpowshorts wrote:



This is where you can post an idea for you're story so we can make a forum for it. We can't wait to see what you all got so please join in the forum. At least post a basic plot summary for you're story.





my idea is about a kid (Age unknown) named Tsubasa.
he is goofy and a bit like naruto, and can be deadly serouis sometimes when friends in danger and so on.
he goes to a fighting acadamy with his friends and wields a large sword with a powerfull water god/demon housed in it.
he is half semi were-wolf.
when he phsicaly tastes blood in his mouth he turn werewolf for a period of time.
when normal he is a fairly average fighter but he strikes up a friendship with the demon in his sword.the demon can manipulate water and has a bond with water dwelling creatures.
Tsubasa has odd comersations with his sword.he also a 3 very good friends who also go to the acadamy

in this world there are :
weoponmasters-use weopans, ninja's-use stealth and speed, mages-use spells,hand signs and scrolls , alchemists-use spells,summoning circles (for demons).

Weaponmasters are very strong and specialise in weopans,some magical
Ninja's are speedy quiet and use concealed weapons
Mages have a high spiritual energy and can learn medical and illusionary spells.
Alchemists are banned and use dark magic.

the acadamy is for teachin the basics of all above (including basic alchemy) and each student goes to a specialist class.
Tsubasa has yet to choose a specialist style,and is still in 1st year basics.
the acadamy is for trainig up proctecters of villages,against magical creature enmies and such.
4 protecters per village or clan.
the acadmy likes to haave veriation of styles for the 4 village protecteors.
those who dont pass the last year test join the army.
a requirement of the acadamy is that u can use some level of magic even if very low level magic,like basic healing.

normal soldiers and swordsmen despise people who go to the acadamy.



Do we need to make a character?(like draw one and post it up)


Well Itachi I wrote that marked red. As it says. Also it's not nesecery to draw a charachter if you don't know how to draw it good. Also if you wish you can just post a inspirational picture from the web, to help you what shoudl your charachter look like. If you don't have picture just describe him/her whit words. For charachters for your story visit "Make you charachter here" Forum here in making anime. Thanks for joining by the way





Basic Plot: How about a person named Percy joining a troop called Solar Troops to fight the Luna King(Evil person)by using power,or spells.The Solar Troops are doing this because the Luna king is trying to rule earth.
Posted 5/27/08

itachi643 wrote:


RihgisKhan wrote:


itachi643 wrote:


kungpowshorts wrote:



This is where you can post an idea for you're story so we can make a forum for it. We can't wait to see what you all got so please join in the forum. At least post a basic plot summary for you're story.





my idea is about a kid (Age unknown) named Tsubasa.
he is goofy and a bit like naruto, and can be deadly serouis sometimes when friends in danger and so on.
he goes to a fighting acadamy with his friends and wields a large sword with a powerfull water god/demon housed in it.
he is half semi were-wolf.
when he phsicaly tastes blood in his mouth he turn werewolf for a period of time.
when normal he is a fairly average fighter but he strikes up a friendship with the demon in his sword.the demon can manipulate water and has a bond with water dwelling creatures.
Tsubasa has odd comersations with his sword.he also a 3 very good friends who also go to the acadamy

in this world there are :
weoponmasters-use weopans, ninja's-use stealth and speed, mages-use spells,hand signs and scrolls , alchemists-use spells,summoning circles (for demons).

Weaponmasters are very strong and specialise in weopans,some magical
Ninja's are speedy quiet and use concealed weapons
Mages have a high spiritual energy and can learn medical and illusionary spells.
Alchemists are banned and use dark magic.

the acadamy is for teachin the basics of all above (including basic alchemy) and each student goes to a specialist class.
Tsubasa has yet to choose a specialist style,and is still in 1st year basics.
the acadamy is for trainig up proctecters of villages,against magical creature enmies and such.
4 protecters per village or clan.
the acadmy likes to haave veriation of styles for the 4 village protecteors.
those who dont pass the last year test join the army.
a requirement of the acadamy is that u can use some level of magic even if very low level magic,like basic healing.

normal soldiers and swordsmen despise people who go to the acadamy.



Do we need to make a character?(like draw one and post it up)


Well Itachi I wrote that marked red. As it says. Also it's not nesecery to draw a charachter if you don't know how to draw it good. Also if you wish you can just post a inspirational picture from the web, to help you what shoudl your charachter look like. If you don't have picture just describe him/her whit words. For charachters for your story visit "Make you charachter here" Forum here in making anime. Thanks for joining by the way





Basic Plot: How about a person named Percy joining a troop called Solar Troops to fight the Luna King(Evil person)by using power,or spells.The Solar Troops are doing this because the Luna king is trying to rule earth.


Well it sounds good. Can't wait to read more. You have my support to start writeing. As soon as you make up your mind, tell us will make a forum for it.
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Posted 5/27/08

RihgisKhan wrote:


itachi643 wrote:


RihgisKhan wrote:


itachi643 wrote:


kungpowshorts wrote:



This is where you can post an idea for you're story so we can make a forum for it. We can't wait to see what you all got so please join in the forum. At least post a basic plot summary for you're story.





my idea is about a kid (Age unknown) named Tsubasa.
he is goofy and a bit like naruto, and can be deadly serouis sometimes when friends in danger and so on.
he goes to a fighting acadamy with his friends and wields a large sword with a powerfull water god/demon housed in it.
he is half semi were-wolf.
when he phsicaly tastes blood in his mouth he turn werewolf for a period of time.
when normal he is a fairly average fighter but he strikes up a friendship with the demon in his sword.the demon can manipulate water and has a bond with water dwelling creatures.
Tsubasa has odd comersations with his sword.he also a 3 very good friends who also go to the acadamy

in this world there are :
weoponmasters-use weopans, ninja's-use stealth and speed, mages-use spells,hand signs and scrolls , alchemists-use spells,summoning circles (for demons).

Weaponmasters are very strong and specialise in weopans,some magical
Ninja's are speedy quiet and use concealed weapons
Mages have a high spiritual energy and can learn medical and illusionary spells.
Alchemists are banned and use dark magic.

the acadamy is for teachin the basics of all above (including basic alchemy) and each student goes to a specialist class.
Tsubasa has yet to choose a specialist style,and is still in 1st year basics.
the acadamy is for trainig up proctecters of villages,against magical creature enmies and such.
4 protecters per village or clan.
the acadmy likes to haave veriation of styles for the 4 village protecteors.
those who dont pass the last year test join the army.
a requirement of the acadamy is that u can use some level of magic even if very low level magic,like basic healing.

normal soldiers and swordsmen despise people who go to the acadamy.



Do we need to make a character?(like draw one and post it up)


Well Itachi I wrote that marked red. As it says. Also it's not nesecery to draw a charachter if you don't know how to draw it good. Also if you wish you can just post a inspirational picture from the web, to help you what shoudl your charachter look like. If you don't have picture just describe him/her whit words. For charachters for your story visit "Make you charachter here" Forum here in making anime. Thanks for joining by the way





Basic Plot: How about a person named Percy joining a troop called Solar Troops to fight the Luna King(Evil person)by using power,or spells.The Solar Troops are doing this because the Luna king is trying to rule earth.


Well it sounds good. Can't wait to read more. You have my support to start writeing. As soon as you make up your mind, tell us will make a forum for it.


Can you make it now?
Posted 5/27/08

itachi643 wrote:


RihgisKhan wrote:


itachi643 wrote:


RihgisKhan wrote:


itachi643 wrote:


kungpowshorts wrote:



This is where you can post an idea for you're story so we can make a forum for it. We can't wait to see what you all got so please join in the forum. At least post a basic plot summary for you're story.





my idea is about a kid (Age unknown) named Tsubasa.
he is goofy and a bit like naruto, and can be deadly serouis sometimes when friends in danger and so on.
he goes to a fighting acadamy with his friends and wields a large sword with a powerfull water god/demon housed in it.
he is half semi were-wolf.
when he phsicaly tastes blood in his mouth he turn werewolf for a period of time.
when normal he is a fairly average fighter but he strikes up a friendship with the demon in his sword.the demon can manipulate water and has a bond with water dwelling creatures.
Tsubasa has odd comersations with his sword.he also a 3 very good friends who also go to the acadamy

in this world there are :
weoponmasters-use weopans, ninja's-use stealth and speed, mages-use spells,hand signs and scrolls , alchemists-use spells,summoning circles (for demons).

Weaponmasters are very strong and specialise in weopans,some magical
Ninja's are speedy quiet and use concealed weapons
Mages have a high spiritual energy and can learn medical and illusionary spells.
Alchemists are banned and use dark magic.

the acadamy is for teachin the basics of all above (including basic alchemy) and each student goes to a specialist class.
Tsubasa has yet to choose a specialist style,and is still in 1st year basics.
the acadamy is for trainig up proctecters of villages,against magical creature enmies and such.
4 protecters per village or clan.
the acadmy likes to haave veriation of styles for the 4 village protecteors.
those who dont pass the last year test join the army.
a requirement of the acadamy is that u can use some level of magic even if very low level magic,like basic healing.

normal soldiers and swordsmen despise people who go to the acadamy.



Do we need to make a character?(like draw one and post it up)


Well Itachi I wrote that marked red. As it says. Also it's not nesecery to draw a charachter if you don't know how to draw it good. Also if you wish you can just post a inspirational picture from the web, to help you what shoudl your charachter look like. If you don't have picture just describe him/her whit words. For charachters for your story visit "Make you charachter here" Forum here in making anime. Thanks for joining by the way





Basic Plot: How about a person named Percy joining a troop called Solar Troops to fight the Luna King(Evil person)by using power,or spells.The Solar Troops are doing this because the Luna king is trying to rule earth.


Well it sounds good. Can't wait to read more. You have my support to start writeing. As soon as you make up your mind, tell us will make a forum for it.


Can you make it now?


Sure. Was the tittle of the story, if you have it?
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Posted 5/27/08

RihgisKhan wrote:


itachi643 wrote:


RihgisKhan wrote:


itachi643 wrote:


RihgisKhan wrote:


itachi643 wrote:


kungpowshorts wrote:



This is where you can post an idea for you're story so we can make a forum for it. We can't wait to see what you all got so please join in the forum. At least post a basic plot summary for you're story.





my idea is about a kid (Age unknown) named Tsubasa.
he is goofy and a bit like naruto, and can be deadly serouis sometimes when friends in danger and so on.
he goes to a fighting acadamy with his friends and wields a large sword with a powerfull water god/demon housed in it.
he is half semi were-wolf.
when he phsicaly tastes blood in his mouth he turn werewolf for a period of time.
when normal he is a fairly average fighter but he strikes up a friendship with the demon in his sword.the demon can manipulate water and has a bond with water dwelling creatures.
Tsubasa has odd comersations with his sword.he also a 3 very good friends who also go to the acadamy

in this world there are :
weoponmasters-use weopans, ninja's-use stealth and speed, mages-use spells,hand signs and scrolls , alchemists-use spells,summoning circles (for demons).

Weaponmasters are very strong and specialise in weopans,some magical
Ninja's are speedy quiet and use concealed weapons
Mages have a high spiritual energy and can learn medical and illusionary spells.
Alchemists are banned and use dark magic.

the acadamy is for teachin the basics of all above (including basic alchemy) and each student goes to a specialist class.
Tsubasa has yet to choose a specialist style,and is still in 1st year basics.
the acadamy is for trainig up proctecters of villages,against magical creature enmies and such.
4 protecters per village or clan.
the acadmy likes to haave veriation of styles for the 4 village protecteors.
those who dont pass the last year test join the army.
a requirement of the acadamy is that u can use some level of magic even if very low level magic,like basic healing.

normal soldiers and swordsmen despise people who go to the acadamy.



Do we need to make a character?(like draw one and post it up)


Well Itachi I wrote that marked red. As it says. Also it's not nesecery to draw a charachter if you don't know how to draw it good. Also if you wish you can just post a inspirational picture from the web, to help you what shoudl your charachter look like. If you don't have picture just describe him/her whit words. For charachters for your story visit "Make you charachter here" Forum here in making anime. Thanks for joining by the way





Basic Plot: How about a person named Percy joining a troop called Solar Troops to fight the Luna King(Evil person)by using power,or spells.The Solar Troops are doing this because the Luna king is trying to rule earth.


Well it sounds good. Can't wait to read more. You have my support to start writeing. As soon as you make up your mind, tell us will make a forum for it.


Can you make it now?


Sure. Was the tittle of the story, if you have it?


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How about he has some sort of secret connection with the sword. Such as: He is a fallen water demon/god; the demon/god in the sword ate part of his soul in order to work with him; the demon/god in the sword saved him when he was about to die by sharing his life- possessing him sometimes and draining his life energy.


At what story are you directing that comment?


To the 1st one on page one.

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The_8th_Sin wrote:


Lanavis wrote:

How about he has some sort of secret connection with the sword. Such as: He is a fallen water demon/god; the demon/god in the sword ate part of his soul in order to work with him; the demon/god in the sword saved him when he was about to die by sharing his life- possessing him sometimes and draining his life energy.


At what story are you directing that comment?


To the 1st one on page one.



You mean Fallen Angel. Talk whit Ichigo-bankai about it. He is a writer.
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i need some help please!!! i gotta story but i need a name for it... ive already started working on drawing it.... but.... still.... need name/title... please help me!! here is what the story is about...
an american english teacher goes to teach in japan as she tries to find her little half brother that ran away after his dad died. unfortunatly on her first day in japan she beats up some punks who are 'hitting' on her and it turns out they are students at the elite all boys school where she was accepted to teach, and even more unpleasent than learning acording to school policy she isnt suposed to know any japanese, is that she discovers the leader of the group whose butt she kicked is the son of the prime minister of japan! if he finds out she's the punk who beat him she'll have to leave japan, be arrested, or become his personal servent!! as if things couldn't get worse the school is housing her in one of the boys dorms were the trouble students who often sneak off campus to go on dates, live concerts or just cause chaos, reside. to top it all off her half brother is still missing and she has to find him before the yakuza does or he'll be made boss..?!
this is kinda my first try at a real comedy so i hope it sounds ok also any name/title ideas are gladly welcome!! Thanx

this is the main character Alyce the punk teacher in her "english-teacher-cant-let-them-find-out-im-the-punk-who-beat-them-up" mode
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