The Flavors of Bon Appétit
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The Flavors of Bon Appétit
Chapter one: The Way things work

An average girl who goes to an average school, decides that she want's to become a famous chef and takes cooking classes at her school. She was the best in her class, and she was at an advanced level, she was recomended for an upperclass. when she was moved into the upperclass things went totaly down hill. This girls name was Chime. In the whole class there was one girl who cooked the best her name was Aurora. Chime: "Hello everyone i'm Chime, I hope to make great progress in my dream of becoming a master chef."
Aurora: "Pch, fat chance" Aurora and her gang were sitting in the far corner of the room, the groupies were standing against the wall around Aurora, who was in a chair tiping it back on one leg. Sally (groupie one):
"there's no way you can become a master chef." Maria (Groupie two): "Only one student in every 13 schools becomes a master chef." Emily(groupie three): "And that one person shall be Aurora." Everyone in the room agreed except for Chime. Chime: "Well i think that person is gonna be me." All goupies: " Yeah Right! Aurora is way better, she was on with some of the best chefs in the world and in a cook off she won against all of them." Chime: "Well i might not have done anything like that but i'm going to do my best. Durring the next class Chime met the class teacher. Chime: " I'm Chime and i... Aurora?! Your the teacher?! Aurora: "No I'm just filling in for the teacher this week." Chime: "Ohh, I see." Aurora: " all right everyone today were gonna make stir fry. Don't forget it's using your own touch." The class all made their own stir fry and a profecional chef as a taste tester. Aurora participated. Chef: "Hmm, some of you did very well but this girl, Chime's cooking is excellent. Now to check yours Aurora. Hmm, the best as always." everyone then cheered except for Chime She was very upset. when the day ended Chime went home and thought over her day. She began to feel as if she was nothing compared to the best chef in the school, she felt like her dreams weren't worth reaching for anymore.
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Chapter two: Hopes of succeding
The next day Chime was feeling a little down, she felt as if she could never amount to anything in Aurora's eyes. durring the cooking class they were instructed to cook with emotions. when Chime cooked her tears fell into the food. Aurora was the tester this time. Aurora: Hmm, there is definately sadness in your cooking, that won't help you at all, now tell me whats on your mind?" Chime was too upset too speak. Aurora: "I know that you think you don't mean anything next to me but i'm on;y here cause i need the good grades too get into a good collage, i don't really want to be a chef if i am given the opertunity i will turn it down i don't need it it's not my dream, it's yours so go for it." Chime then looked at Aurora's smiling face her sadness turned to joy and she tried her hardest for the next few weeks.
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Chapter three: The big competition.
The day of april 5th, is a time of a single and extremly hard test, one where the cooking students are all to make a dish (a 3 corse meal.) of their own creation. And said contest makes Chime nervous.every time Aurora won but this time she chose to be the judge, and only 2 people entered the contest, Chime and a girl named Briana. They cooked with style and when the dishes were complete the 3 judges tested, Aurora: "Hmph, not bad you both did very well." Judge # 2: "Absolutly excelent you two should both win!" Briana: "Yeah right she's just a poser who could never even dream of matching me!" Aurora gave her a bad look and she shut her mouth. Judge #3: "What the heck are you two talking about, Briana's is way better, since you two voted for both that was a tie but since i say Briana wins its 3 to 2." Briana won and gave a nasty little smile to Chime, Was Chimes dreams crushed by this strange girl? What will she do to take her self from the gutters of failure? Only she knows, Aurora looks at her sadly and knows exactly what it is she shall decide, and just what could that be?

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Chapter four: Chime goes too far!
Chime was very depressed after lousing the contest she hadn't cooked andthing for days, and her grades began to slip, if she didn't keep her grades up she would have to quit cooking! Chime was too depressed to care, Aurora, being her friend tried to comfort her as friends can only do, but chime only smiled a fake smile and said, "It's alright i'm fine don't worry i just have no inspiration thats all, but i'm on the verge to finding some so just don't wrrry about me." But Aurora knew that she was lying, one day aurora was out checkinmg the campus grounds, when over at the waterfall she saw chime, Chime was holding a note pad and a pen, she was writting something, when she finnished writting she set them down and pulled out her special, jewel encrested smooth bladed knige and aimed it towards her heart she tunrned around so that her body would fall down the waterfall only to find Aurora watching her. Aurora hed tears running down her face and built up in her eyes, she ran up to Chime quickly and knocked the knife from chimes hands, the graping chime in a tight hug she cried "Why Chime? Why? why are you going this far, it was only a contest you don't need to kill yourself just because you lost, you only need to get back on your feet and work hard to try again, don't, don't go this far, please Chime, please." Chime began to cry aswell and hugged Aurora back, she regretted the choice that she had made and was aishing with every bone in her body that she had never decided to do it. The two then returned to their dorms and said goodnight, Chime had changed her mind and was going to try again, she was going, to win.
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Chapter five: Chimes great accomplishments
After Chime's chrisis things went back to normal Chime began to cook again and caught her grades back up. When she was done memorising some recipies she tried to make some of her own. she took half a stick of butter a cup of sugar half a cup of milk 2 eggs a cup of brown sugar 2 cups of ginger bread mix and 3 slices of cut and pealled mangos she then made them into tropical cookies. When the Judge finnished judging Briana's cooking, next was Chime's. Judge: "ohh my god these cookies are awesome! where did you get this recipie?!" Chime: "No where i came up with it on my own. do you really like it?" Judge: "heck yeah! thats a good cokie! Chime wins!" The girls in the room all squealled with excitement. Briana left and was pissed off. Chime: "Hey where's Aurora?" Things suddenly went from a wild roar to a complete scilence. Aurora's groupie: "Didn't you know? It was all over the news. a house down town caught on fire by the time the fire engines got there, everyone and everything was burnt to a crisp. And who's house was it? It was Aurora's. She'd been cooking victory cookies for you. She knew you would win, but when she was finnished them she'd forgoten to turn the oven off, her apron which was draped over the oven caught on fire she had fallen asleep and the whole house caught on fire the only one who survived was her dog. Chime, Aurora is dead." Chime was so upset she had no idea what to do. she ran out of the building and missed the ceremony when she would recive her trophy, she was devistated over Aurora's death.
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Chapter six: Chime the rhyme is making the big time!
Even though Aurora was gone chime continued on with her cooking, eventualy she became famous and sighned a contract with a woman named Evelin Devilin, but everyone is instructed to call her Mrs.Eve. She exauhsts Chime in every way, world tours, midnight cooking shows only so she can line her pockets with money, and Chime barely gets any money to feed herself. one day when Chime was going to ask Mrs.Eve a question she found out something shocking. Briana was Mrs.Eve's daughter. No wonder Briana was so mean. even though Chime had much work to do, every night before she went to bed, she would send her prayers to the heavens asking for Aurora to be watching over her as she had done when she was there. One night Chime stopped wishing for Aurora to watch over her, instead she wished that Aurora was still with her. she then turned on the news, the story headlining said: "Mistake at the scene of a catastrophy, body never found!" They then showed the remains of Aurora's house.A fire man was speaking, as Chime watched with intense intrest. Fireman: "Yes we are currenly checking the area over for bodies and so far it seems we made the mistake of a supposed victum this victum is supposedly still" and then Mrs.Eve had shut off the TV. Mrs.Eve: "Time for bed my little money machine, tomorrow we start your third world tour." Chime: "But I really wanted to see that, it was about Aurora's house." Briana:"Your still concerned with that lame wash out? She's dead louser and I'm glad of it. HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!" Chime began to cry she belived her only hopes of Aurora being alive were as thin as air.
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Chapter seven: Chime's prayers are answered
The next morning before Chime's first flight she was looking back towards the road for down the street she could just barely see the school and Aurora's houses remains. when suddenly just as she turned around to get on the plane she heard a voice calling her name. "Chime! Chime! Chime!" Chime: "Aurora is that you calling to me from heaven?" Aurora: "Heaven?! You silly, I'm down here at the bottom of the stairs." Chime then looked down. Chime: "Aurora! Your alive!" Aurora: "Thanks to my dog Lupin my pomeranian mix, i was able to get out in time. So let's go home." Mrs. Eve: "Well, well, well, if it isnt little miss burnt to a crisp. So you think you can steal my star eh? Well think again!" Aurora then threw a large frying pan at Mrs. Eve and K.O'd her. Aurora: "Well your seeing stars now. Let's go Chime." Chime: "thanks Aurora for being there." Aurora: "No prob that's what friends do." Aurora and Chime went back to school and Chime Finished, collage she went on to be a famous chef but not witha mean manager like Mrs. Eve. Her manager this time was Aurora. Eventualy Chime settled down with a family, who the lucky man is we'll never tell.
THE END
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