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Posted 3/21/08 , edited 3/21/08
I feel like a hero,
For I saved a life today,
I saved my own,
But only because I gave
up on the bad things
and let the light flood through.

I feel like a hero,
I'm new born as a child,
And I'm done with thoughts
that came from thoughts.
For I am out of the darkness.

I feel like a hero,
But I have to admit
that you were difficult to beat,
But eventually my ghosts of
my past gave in and set me free.

I feel like a hero,
Now I'm running and screaming,
I have to thank you though,
Because it was your dream
that I woke up in.

I feel like a hero,
But you don't understand,
Do you know that your
love was that one thing,
That set me free and mended
my heart to its fullest?

I feel like a hero.

But only because your
voice was there to guide me.
Posted 3/23/08
Aww I love it, very inspiring
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Posted 3/23/08

WhitePlazma wrote:

I feel like a hero,
For I saved a life today,
I saved my own,
But only because I gave
up on the bad things
and let the light flood through.

I feel like a hero,
I'm new born as a child,
And I'm done with thoughts
that came from thoughts.
For I am out of the darkness.

I feel like a hero,
But I have to admit
that you were difficult to beat,
But eventually my ghosts of
my past gave in and set me free.

I feel like a hero,
Now I'm running and screaming,
I have to thank you though,
Because it was your dream
that I woke up in.

I feel like a hero,
But you don't understand,
Do you know that your
love was that one thing,
That set me free and mended
my heart to its fullest?

I feel like a hero.

But only because your
voice was there to guide me.


really love that poem! it shows how much one person can do for a person who lost their way ^^
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Posted 3/29/08

WhitePlazma wrote:

I feel like a hero,
For I saved a life today,
I saved my own,
But only because I gave
up on the bad things
and let the light flood through.

I feel like a hero,
I'm new born as a child,
And I'm done with thoughts
that came from thoughts.
For I am out of the darkness.

I feel like a hero,
But I have to admit
that you were difficult to beat,
But eventually my ghosts of
my past gave in and set me free.

I feel like a hero,
Now I'm running and screaming,
I have to thank you though,
Because it was your dream
that I woke up in.

I feel like a hero,
But you don't understand,
Do you know that your
love was that one thing,
That set me free and mended
my heart to its fullest?

I feel like a hero.

But only because your
voice was there to guide me.


It was so inspiring >< And I loved the ending the best!!! And I really liked how you put "I feel LIke A Hero" at the beginning of every line!! Nice job!
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