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Posted 3/22/08
The night
is my cage
a cage
that i dont want to leav
but stay
but it is
somthing that holds
me back
hides me away
from the world
like a prisoner

The brigh
over my head
is my ceiling
that bears the painfull
memorys that I got
from those
who just want
to break me
controll me
I breaked free
but still Im in this cage
of those sad memories
but I know they
will never go
cuse they are a
part of
me

my torn dress
shows what beauty I was
before metting
them
but as time goes
its colour fade
and turns black
as my colour
of my life fade away
and turns into
a black cage
that is now my home
the torn pices
of this
old beautifull dress
shows the cuts
that is trown at me
that hurt
my white skin
but my skin will heal
but not
those scars
that I got
in my
soul

The water
reaminds me
of all the tears
that have run
down those cold cheeks
of mine
and of those
that I hide
just to pleas
them
so cold it is
this beautifull water
that can take
life away
but I will not give
it my life
cuse the life I had
is long gone
and that life
I have now
is it really
a life?

The steam
coming from my mouth
and past my cold lips
shows me
that I am alive
still breathing in this world
I have not
beacome a soul
hunting for the truth
or why this
happned
no Im not a lost soul
but
Im a lost human
that seeks just the same
so why am I here
and not one of those
it would surly
make me feel
more happy then
Im felling now
I dont know
if ther is a feeling
like mine whit name
depression?..
no its not that
Im to lost
to find it out
this feeling
the questions makes the walls
of this cage of mine

The fiolin
whit its calming sound
I can play
as if it was the wind
as the water
as the wildness of the forest
I jused to play it
to show my
happyness
play all those happy things
about children loughing
whit happy lovers
and nature
in its harmony
but now
all those are away
but still I play
but now
whit my sadness
and I show whit it
the beauty of the night
and sorrow
what music that existst
in those
two things
telling stories
of tears
broken promises
and
hearts broken
whit lies
about the calming water
that takes around
the body
as ypu lay on it and let it
take you
wherever it wants
that water
is like the worrior
thats keeps me in place
in my little cage

My hair
flowing whit the wind
dances whit it
freely
even if I am
in this cage
that is my soul
my mind
still Im free
finally im free
from those hands
that leed me
at a path
that i didnt want
but now
I can go my path
just as my fingers
run trough the water
but not whit it
but ageins it

I will never be free
that I know
whit memories
whit troughs
whit desire
it all cage us up
Im a human
whit all thsoe things
but
I have gotten more
to cage myself
up whit
that have made the cage
harder, difficulter
to get in
no one can get in to me
before
they have breaked that cage
before
I have breaked that cage
what will happen
I dont know
I just will let
destiny
run as the water
and let it be as mysterious
as the night
above me
and let it come
to me
as the wind
as calming, and stroking
or
as a storm wanting me to lose
the balance I have
time will show
but right now
I just want to be
in my little
soule cage...


I dont know but I find this as one as my best works I got the idear after looking for a new profile pic ^^
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Posted 3/22/08
Iyyy, Long poem again! But I like it alot! NICE!
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Posted 3/23/08

WhitePlazma wrote:

Iyyy, Long poem again! But I like it alot! NICE!


Yeah long poems is my symbole xD thank you very much ^^
Posted 3/23/08
Awesome poem Yamira I really like the poem it matches the picture..nice picture to btw XD
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Posted 3/23/08

kagura4 wrote:

Awesome poem Yamira I really like the poem it matches the picture..nice picture to btw XD


THank you ^^ yeah I jused only the things on the pic to write the poem, I was like : "WoW I jused only the pic xD"
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Posted 3/29/08

Yamira wrote:

The night
is my cage
a cage
that i dont want to leav
but stay
but it is
somthing that holds
me back
hides me away
from the world
like a prisoner

The brigh
over my head
is my ceiling
that bears the painfull
memorys that I got
from those
who just want
to break me
controll me
I breaked free
but still Im in this cage
of those sad memories
but I know they
will never go
cuse they are a
part of
me

my torn dress
shows what beauty I was
before metting
them
but as time goes
its colour fade
and turns black
as my colour
of my life fade away
and turns into
a black cage
that is now my home
the torn pices
of this
old beautifull dress
shows the cuts
that is trown at me
that hurt
my white skin
but my skin will heal
but not
those scars
that I got
in my
soul

The water
reaminds me
of all the tears
that have run
down those cold cheeks
of mine
and of those
that I hide
just to pleas
them
so cold it is
this beautifull water
that can take
life away
but I will not give
it my life
cuse the life I had
is long gone
and that life
I have now
is it really
a life?

The steam
coming from my mouth
and past my cold lips
shows me
that I am alive
still breathing in this world
I have not
beacome a soul
hunting for the truth
or why this
happned
no Im not a lost soul
but
Im a lost human
that seeks just the same
so why am I here
and not one of those
it would surly
make me feel
more happy then
Im felling now
I dont know
if ther is a feeling
like mine whit name
depression?..
no its not that
Im to lost
to find it out
this feeling
the questions makes the walls
of this cage of mine

The fiolin
whit its calming sound
I can play
as if it was the wind
as the water
as the wildness of the forest
I jused to play it
to show my
happyness
play all those happy things
about children loughing
whit happy lovers
and nature
in its harmony
but now
all those are away
but still I play
but now
whit my sadness
and I show whit it
the beauty of the night
and sorrow
what music that existst
in those
two things
telling stories
of tears
broken promises
and
hearts broken
whit lies
about the calming water
that takes around
the body
as ypu lay on it and let it
take you
wherever it wants
that water
is like the worrior
thats keeps me in place
in my little cage

My hair
flowing whit the wind
dances whit it
freely
even if I am
in this cage
that is my soul
my mind
still Im free
finally im free
from those hands
that leed me
at a path
that i didnt want
but now
I can go my path
just as my fingers
run trough the water
but not whit it
but ageins it

I will never be free
that I know
whit memories
whit troughs
whit desire
it all cage us up
Im a human
whit all thsoe things
but
I have gotten more
to cage myself
up whit
that have made the cage
harder, difficulter
to get in
no one can get in to me
before
they have breaked that cage
before
I have breaked that cage
what will happen
I dont know
I just will let
destiny
run as the water
and let it be as mysterious
as the night
above me
and let it come
to me
as the wind
as calming, and stroking
or
as a storm wanting me to lose
the balance I have
time will show
but right now
I just want to be
in my little
soule cage...


I dont know but I find this as one as my best works I got the idear after looking for a new profile pic ^^


Really....reallly....WOW!! Extremely long lol, BUT WOW!! Ack >< YOu did a really good job on it! ANd it matches the picture like this II =]
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Posted 3/29/08
well as said long poems thats me xD
thanks I really proud of this myself I study the pic really long before I writed the poem
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