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This is a romance/action kinda story. I wrote it to seem like a T.V. show. Tell me if you like it. Message me if you wanna see how the characters look. ^.^ I'll put one chap up every Sunday.

FANG
By:Shimia49
Chapter: 1
The Strange Boy

It’s a long story and strange a one. It started on the full moon Thursday night of Feb. 21, 2008 –The scene goes into the night sky with the full moon and shining stars. Then zooms to the inside of a school-

Girl 1: Hey Mina! Hurry up!
Mina: I’m coming Hana!
Hana: Ugh. Does it really take you that long to clean the classroom desks?
Mina: Well…….yea. * She scratches her head*

-The scene changes to the night sky in the city. The clouds cover the full moon. You hear helicopters and police sirens. You see a boy with no shirt and torn pants.-

Boy: *pant and breaths deeply while running. He nearly trips several times.*
Police 1: Did you find him? *he speaks curiously. He turns a curve and he’s driving fast.*
Police 2: Uhh….. no. He’s running too fast. *He’s in a helicopter*
Police 1: Tomo, What is this boy?
Tomo: Don’t know Officer Seto. Don’t Know.

- The scene goes back to Hana and Mina outside of the school. There’s birds chirping and cars passing by. –

Hana: Did you get your new cell phone yet? *she smile anxiously*
Mina: Yea, wanna see? * she searches her purse but can’t find it*
Hana: Don’t tell me you left it at school. *she sighn in shame*
Mina: I think I did. I’ll be back. *She runs back into the school*
Hana: You’re gonna have to tell me later cause I gotta go!
Mina: OK! Bye!

*Hana walks off and goes home* -The scene changes to the city and shows the boy running towards the school. You hear sirens and helicopters.-

Boy: *Pant and runs. He Jumps the school fence and through the back yard of the school. He looks around and breaks through one of the classroom windows. *

-Now Mina and the boy are in the same room- *Mina turns her head to the side after hearing the glass break. There’s another window in front of Miona. The boy looks at Mina with his piercing eyes. *

Officer Seto: I think he ran into the building! I can’t go over the fence, I’m in a car. Tomo, look for him!
Tomo: Yes Sir! * Tomo throws a rock through the window in front of Mina*
Mina: *She turns to her front then screams* Ahhhhhhhhh!
Boy: *grabs Mina then jumps out the way.*

- The scene goes out side of the buiding-

Officer Seto: Tomo!
Tomo: Yes Sir!
Officer Seto: What was the purpose of throwing that rock?
Tomo: To find the boy sir.
Officer Seto: Yea, but who pays for the window Tomo?
Tomo: Uhh….. us? *He feels stupid*

- The scene goes inside of the building. The boy is laying in top of Mina and covering her mouth. –

Mina: Mummm~ * thinks madly* Who does this guy think he is? Getting on me like this with no shirt. And what’s with his eyes? They look so fiery. It’s like he’s looking right through me. *She blushes*
Boy: Sorry but I can’t let you talk right now. So shut up. * He speaks seriously*

- The scene changes to outside the building with cops-

Tomo used the light of the helicopter to search the room from outside. The boy presses on to Mina tighter cause he’s nervous. He begins to sweat as the lights get closer. He’s getting sortta mad.

Tomo: I don’t see him Sir.
Officer Seto: No matter, we’ll continue this tomorrow.

The cops leave. As the helicopter sound gets softer the boy loosens up. The sirens and helicopter are gone. The boy gets on his hands and knees. The wind blows through the broken windows and blows through the boy’s and Mina’s hair. There’s a moment of silence.

Boy: Are you o…

*Mina kicks the boy off her and starts to yell*

Mina: Who do you think you are?! You can’t do this to a 15 year old girl! I could report you! And get some clothes!
Boy: My name is Wo…* he stops* My name is Fang. Sorry I got on you like that, but you wouldn’t stop yelling. Besides this is the thanks I get for saving you from bleeding to death? Glass is pretty sharp if you don’t know.
Mina: Oh yea. Thank you. * she looks down*

The clouds in the sky start to clear away. Now the full moon is showing. Fang moves to the corner where the moonlight doesn’t show.

Mina: Are you ok? *she notices strange behavior*
Fang: Uh, yea. Could you leave? *he says rudely*
Mina: *gets mad* You didn’t have to say it like that but fine. * she leaves*

The moonlight reaches the corner. – The scene moves outside and shows the full moon-
You hear a howl. Mina is outside and hears a faint sound.

Mina: *stops running* What was that? * She continues running home*

- The story stops with a picture of Mina running home and a full moon background. The color looks like it’s done by crayons and colored pencils at the end.-
*Mina’s face pops up in a little circle*

Mina: I forgot my cell phone again! >.<


I probalby won't be on tomorrow so here you go. ^^

FANG
Chapter: 2
A new school life
I took names from other shows. I couldn’t think of any. >.<

Last Time:
The moonlight reaches the corner. – The scene moves outside and shows the full moon-
You hear a howl. Mina is outside and hears a faint sound.

Mina: *stops running* What was that? * She continues running home*

Now: This chapter’s date is Friday Feb. 22, 2008

Mina: I wonder why the police were chasing that boy…..Fang. wait a minute……. That might be is convict name! *she says with a surprised face* =O
Mina’s mom: Honey! Get ready for school! Hans is coming to pick you up any minute now! Hurry cause I have to go to work!
Mina: Ok Mom! I’ll be down in a couple minutes!

-The scenes show Mina sitting the bath, then brushing her, then eating breakfast. Now Mina is at the door putting on her shoes. She opens the door and Hana is waiting on Mina’s porch. Mina runs down the stairs.-

Mina: Hi Hana! * she smiles* Sorry, I left my phone at school so I can’t show it to you yet. Bye Mom!
Hana: Bye Mrs. Aya. *she closes the door* It’s ok. I know you’re a stupid idiot.
Mina: Hey!

They walk and talk at the same time. When they got to school Mina sees Fang outside the school’s entrance. This time he has a school uniform. He wore very sloppy. Half the white shirt was not tucked in the black pants, the black tie was loose around his neck, and his black jacket was not buttoned. He was sitting next to the trash.

Mina: Uh, Hana. You can go ahead I’ll catch up.
Hana: Ok. See you in class. Bye. *she goes to class*
Mina: Bye. *walks over to fang* What are you doing near the trash?
Fang: *he turns his head and looks at Mina* Oh it’s just you. Maybe I just wanted to sit here. Why do you care?
Mina: *her eyes widen* Don’t tell me……*she raises her hand to touch his face* You’re … homeless. *she speaks with pity*
Fang: *he grabs her and squeezes it* I don’t need your pity. And don’t ever….touch…. me.
Mina: Oh, I’m sorry. *puts her hands down* How’d you get a uniform?
Fang: None of your business. *He scolds at her*
Mina: *her cheeks get puffy and red because she’s mad* Ooh! Why do you have such an attitude?! I bet you stole it!
Fang: Hmph, who knows? Last night you said I needed clothes. *he still scolds at her*

A teacher comes out the entrance door and sees Mina and Fang. The teacher recognizes Mina but not Fang.

Teacher: Hey kid! If you’re new go to the office to get a schedule. Fix your uniform too. *He pulls Fang by the arm to bring him to the office.* Ayo, Mina! Get to class.
Fang: *pulls his arm away* I can for myself. *he still looks mad. He look reads the teacher’s name tag.* Mr. Nagami……..
Mr. Nagami: Oh great, another trouble maker. *he frowns*

Mina leaves to go to class. Fang is in the principle’s office to get registered. Fang wonder if he even wants to be here.

Fang: *thinks* Well I am homeless. They feed you 75% cooked food, they “give” you clothes, and desks to sleep on. I think I’ll stay.
Principal: * he walks into his office.* Hello, I’m Principle Wasaubi. I understand you’re a new student. I’ll just ask questions to get this over with. Full name please.
Fang: Ayakashi, Fang
Principal Wasaubi: Age, birthday, and household.
Fang: 15, August 20, 1993, and ummm, I just moved here so I don’t know my address.
Principal Wasaubi: Ok. Do you live with anyone at this school?
Fang: *thinks about what Mr. Nagami said* Aya, Mina! Get to class! *speaks calmly* I live with Aya, Mina and her family.
Wasaubi: Ok. Here’s a registration form and a schedule. Bring the registration form back tomorrow. Your homeroom is class 2-b. Have a great day.

Fangs walks out. Principle Wasaubi thinks……

Principle Wasaubi: Wow. No you too or thank you. *he looks at homeroom 2-b’s attendance* Ayakashi, Fang is in the same homeroom has Aya, Mina. I guess family is irrespirable.

-The scence go to outside of class 2-b. Fang is witing to be introduced. Mr. Nagami is inside talking to his students.-

Mr. Nagami: And now our new student. * he points to the door*

The door slides open and in walks Fang. All the girls look at Fang. In their eyes he’s walking in slow motion while his hair blows in the opposite direction of where he’s walking. He looks at the class.

Fang: ………….I’m Fang………….. (a moment of silence)
All girls except Mina: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! He’s so hot!!!!!

A nerd in the back yells…..

Nerd: Hey! He stole my uniform!!!!
The girls look at the nerd with red evil eyes and their hair rises.

Nerd: *he talks like he’s scared* Good thing I always bring 2. Hehe. *He hides under the table*
Mr. Nagami: There’s a seat all the way in the back next to Aya, Mina.

Fang sits next to Mina.

Fang: Not you again. *he frowns*
Mina: I’m no happier than you. *she frowns too*

They look at each other while attacking each mind with lightning (mentally). All the girl look at Mina madly.

Girl 1: They’re making chemistry! Just look at the sparks! >:(
Girl 2: Let’s threaten Aya to stay away from him! >:(

The day goes go by and classes finish. It’s the end of the day and everyone is walking home. Principle Wasaubi saw Fang and Mina fighting (again).

Principle Wasaubi: Hey calm down you two. You can’t live together like this. Have a greay day. *he walk off*
Mina: Live together????
Fang: Oh yea, I live with you for now. *he seems calm*
Mina: WHAT???!!!!!!! SINCE WHEN????!!!!!!

-To be continued-

You hear Tomo’s and Seto’s voices: How come we didn’t show up today?

FANG
Chapter: 3
Fang’s New Home

Last Time:
Fang: Oh yea, I live with you for now. *he seems calm*
Mina: WHAT???!!!!!!! SINCE WHEN????!!!!!!

Now: This chapter’s date is Friday Feb. 22, 2008-Saturday Feb. 23, 2008

Fang: Ever since this morning when Principal Wasaubi asked me where I lived.
Mina: So the 1st thing you thought about was me?
Fang: Yea, pretty much. -_- Oh, yea here’s your cell phone. *he hands it to her*
Mina: *takes it* Yay! My phone! *smiles then gets suspious* Are you trying to change the subject? You can’t live with me.
Fang: I can’t believe you made me do this. _ *does a puppy face* Please, I’m homeless. ~.~
Mina: *looks hypnotized* Well, since you are homeless… I guess you can stay with me. *she turns her head to the side*
Fang: *he stops the puppy face and goes back to normal* Good, cause I’m hungry. How will I get through your parents?
Mina: My mom works everyday except Sunday. And my dad’s……………
Fang: Your dad’s what?
Mina: He’s dead….. he was killed. *she looks sad and 1 tear falls from her left eye*
Fang: Oh…………….. (Can’t speak)

There’s a dark shadow on top of the school building looking at Fang and Mina. Mina looks up and turns around. The shadow is gone.

Mina: *she wipes her tears and fakes a smile* Come on. I’ll show you my room and everything *she grabs Fang’s hand and runs home*
Fang: Uhh… sure.

-The scene changes to Mina’s house in the kitchen. Mina is at the stove and Fang is sitting at the table looking around.-

Mina: *she walks over to the table and sets down the food* It’s been a while since you had some real food right?
Fang: Depends. What’s your definition of real food? _
Mina: Food made by someone who can cook, or a hot plate of food.
Fang: If that’s the definition, I never had real food. I never had a mom, dad, friend, reliable relatives, etc. *he drinks the grape soda*
Mina: That’s so sad. =( What happened to them?
Fang: They left or betrayed me. They called me a freak. My “mom” killed herself for having me, my dad tried to kill me, and my cousin framed me. Don’t you just love life?! *he gets mad and slams the cup on the table and the cup breaks*

The tea splashes on Mina’s and Fang’s face. The soda drips off the side of the table. Mina holds Fang’s hand and says….
Mina: No matter what happens I won’t betray you. I’ll be your 1st friend. *she smiles then hugs him*
Fang: *he almost hugged her back but stopped to think* I know she’ll run away. Like everyone else.
Mina: *she stops hugging Fang* Tomorrow at school let’s get along.
Fang: Sure*he slightly smiles*
Mina: My mom comes home around 12:00 am, so we have to be asleep by then.
Fang: Where do I sleep?
Mina: In my room. You can sleep in my closet or on the floor.
Fang: I don’t think so. I’ll sleep at the end of the bed.
Mina: What are you? A dog?
Fang: Does it matter?

As the time goes by, Fang and Mina talk, brush their teeth, took a bath (at separate times), and finally they’re about to sleep. Fang and Mina are in Mina’s room talking. Fang is on the floor and Mina is on the bed.

Mina: You knoow, you’re not a bad person.
Fang: I guess I can say you too. Well good night.

Mina closes the light and starts to fall asleep. While Mina sleeps, Fang crawls onto the end of Mina’s bed. It’s morning time and Mina finds Fang slobbering on the pillow next to her. Mina’s eyes widen and she…….
Mina: Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!! *she jumps out of bed*
Mrs. Aya: Honey, what’s wrong? *she walks up the stairs towards Mina’s room*
Mina: *she picks up Fang and throws him in the closet* Nothing Mom!
Mrs. Aya: I could’ve sworn I heard you yell.
Fang. (in the closet) owwwwwww~~.
Mrs. Aya: What was that?
Mina: Uhh…. my stomach! I’m hungry mommy. Can you please make breakfast? *she sounds nervous*
Mrs. Aya: Ok, Your stomach sounds so manly. Eww. *she goes down stairs*
Mina: *sighs* Fang, why were you in my bed? *she’s freaked out*
Fang: *gets out the closet* Cause the floor is shaggy and itchy.
Mina: Fine. You need to take a bath. I can smell you from here. >.<
Fang: Okay. I’ll go first. I won’t turn off the water so then tour mom thinks you’re just taking a long shower.
Mina: That’s a good idea.

While Fang takes a shower Mina fixes up the uniforms. Fang’s done with the and comes out wearing Mina’s dad’s clothes.

Mina: So it fits?
Fang: Yea.
Mina: Good. You needed more clothes. On Sunday, let’s go shopping. *she smiles*
Fang: Ok. *he takes his shirt off*
Mina: What are you doing?! XO
Fang: Changing into my uniform.
Mina: Can you wait til’ I leave?! >.<
Fang: Why? You’ve seen me without a shirt before.
Mina: And? Sheesh, you’re a pig. *she leaves to take a bath and slams the door*
Fang: What a stupid girl. _

Mina is done with her bath and has on her school uniform on. So does Fang.

Mina: I’ll go outside through the front door. You can’t or else my mom will find you. Figure something out. =o
Fang: I’ll go through the window.
Mina: This is a two story house. We’re on the second floor. o.O
Fang: No problem. I can jump real good.
Mina: Fine, do what you want.

Mina goes out the front door and finds Fang waiting for her. Mina looks at her room window and sees it open. Then she looks at Fang.

Mina: How’d you jump this low without getting a scratch on you?
Fang: That’s my secret.
-To be continued-

Hana: This is unfair! Mina is forgetting about me. =(


every week i will add more chapters on here so leave comments telling me what you think about it.
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