First  Prev  1  2  3  4  5  Next  Last
Romance Stories
Editor
2926 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
Canada
Offline
Posted 6/15/08

dattebayo_kawaii wrote:

lol ok this is going to be like a kissing/romantic kinda scene not out of any of my story just something I like to write:

Our body were fused together. Moving at the same time. Our tongues dancing together. We were forming one with each other. He was mine and I was his. We belong together and we were together forever never to be separated. My heart was speeding, my blood rushing. He had pushed me on the bed and I had rolled over him. My movements were uncontrolled. I never wanted to be separated from him. I wanted our bodies to melt on each other to be one for ever and ever and beyond.


lol^^ so thats it hope you enjoy my random kissing scene^^

>_< kyootness~! You're not going to write more? O_O *holds butcher knife in hand* (mweheheheh sorry miss_mew i stole your serial killer line.)
Writer
6266 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
21 / F / what ever you DO...
Offline
Posted 6/15/08

SakuraSenin wrote:


dattebayo_kawaii wrote:

lol ok this is going to be like a kissing/romantic kinda scene not out of any of my story just something I like to write:

Our body were fused together. Moving at the same time. Our tongues dancing together. We were forming one with each other. He was mine and I was his. We belong together and we were together forever never to be separated. My heart was speeding, my blood rushing. He had pushed me on the bed and I had rolled over him. My movements were uncontrolled. I never wanted to be separated from him. I wanted our bodies to melt on each other to be one for ever and ever and beyond.


lol^^ so thats it hope you enjoy my random kissing scene^^

>_< kyootness~! You're not going to write more? O_O *holds butcher knife in hand* (mweheheheh sorry miss_mew i stole your serial killer line.)


I actually dont know^^ like I sais its a random kissing scene

Writer
6266 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
21 / F / what ever you DO...
Offline
Posted 6/18/08 , edited 6/18/08
something I came up with^^


Our body were fused together. Moving at the same time. Our tongues dancing together. We were forming one with each other. He was mine and I was his. We belong together and we were together forever never to be separated. My heart was speeding, my blood rushing. He had pushed me on the bed and I had rolled over him. My movements were uncontrolled. I never wanted to be separated from him. I wanted our bodies to melt on each other to be one for ever and ever and beyond.

What is love? Is it feeling butterflies in your tummy? Is it feeling like puking because you're too shy when you're with the one you like? Is it loosing your train of thought by looking at him? Or is it just contagious virus spreading in our lives? If you go in the dictionary it will tell you:
a word formerly used in communications to represent the letter L.
–verb (used with object)


But I think that love is the virus that spreads and that ruins your life (well sometimes). The kissing scene you read before. Thats what I imagined with the guy I like. And as soon as this idea jumped into my heads it was as if at had happened! But in my imagination he was perfect. His brown eyes shining. His full and his flawless lips against mine. His muscular arms around me tightly warning me that he was never going to let go of me. And his supremely perfect silky black hair, that when I passed my finger though then its felt like I had passed my hand in ice cold water; soft and perfect.

And the best part was his sweet breath on my face and neck. Every it of his kisses consumed me.

Okay and again I'm going on with the imaginary kiss. Okay now I need to get back to my math work. But then something lands by my foot. I bend myself from my chair to pick it up when a bigger hand blocks me and picks it up before me. I lift my head; its the teacher Mr. Bumbble. "Oh no!" I think to myself.

"What is this that I have here? Oh a note? Shall I read it to the class?" Without waiting for an answer he unfolds it and starts reading. "OMG! U so like him! O.K so after school u like totally have to ask him out! u guys you be like the cutest couple EVER!"

I turn around and look at all the laughing faces because Mr. Bumbble was reading with a totally messed up girly accent. As I look around I see one red face that is not laughing. Its my best friend Alicia she's red but like I said not from laughing from shame. I'm pretty sure she threw the note. But I don't say anything I simply face my books like nothing happened. I make a mental note to talk to Alicia and one: talk to her about the note and two: teach her how to throw a note without the teacher seeing! The teacher had already put the note away and had forgot about it after the humiliation he had given to Alicia but the class was still laughing. Well some of them anyways.

Even though I know math so well I just cant concentrate on it right now well not today. I keep thinking of the kissing scene. His breath on my face his hotness and just well him. The bell rang. But I didn't hear it. I was just staring blankly at the wall hoping to find an answer. Hoping that the notes on the board would transform into a solution about awful thought about you guy you love but don't want to love. But the board stayed filled with math notes. Then something shook my shoulder. I twist my gaze form the board to the person shaking me. It was Blake. His blond hair, his brown eyes. He looked just like he did in my dream.

"Umm...class is...uh finished to I think you can go home." It seemed like he didn't know what to say. It was so cute! Okay to calm down Emma, okay deep breath and sound like you were just not paying attention dont kae it sound like you were dreaming about him!

"Oh, Okay. I guess I was just not paying attention. But thanks for telling me!" That was so pro! oh yeah he's probably not suspicious at all! I would be such a good actress! I was so able to pull that off I could do this for a living.
"Uh...yeah no problem. So see you later." He started to walk away when he turns around all of a sudden. "Actually would...uh...would you want me to walk you home." Okay not that is so cute. He;s like asking me walk with him! Okay breath Emma BREATH! Its probably just cause theres a serial killer running around town right. His mom probably ask him this. And anyways why would I care. I...I...I don't like him!



lol^^ hope you enjoy (P.S: I'm going to keep posting stories just not the one I started because like I said its not very appropriate but if you want to read it its in my pages as "unknown love" (probably going to change title)I update it every once in a while I add more parts so yeah enjoy^^ )

so yeah and I'm probably going to continue this dont know yet^^ lol
Editor
2926 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
Canada
Offline
Posted 6/24/08
but i actually liked godtime's story the best above all pe0plez.
Writer
135343 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
24 / F / In your dreams.....
Offline
Posted 7/4/08
i think they're pretty cool but the one by misterywaters was sorta confusing at first. but i luved it!
Writer
30068 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
F / Sieyo Accademy |...
Offline
Posted 7/4/08
i like the ending of that story, "Too shy for a guy"
Writer
9042 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
22 / F / in the shadows, y...
Offline
Posted 8/1/08

SakuAndBo wrote:

Okies, my turn simple but sweet...

Love's Way of Understanding by SakuAndBo

... In my terrace, I gaze at the stars tonight... as if the answers i was looking for were somehow written there...

I am just a plain school-boy studying hard, beating myself to crap, just to get that certain someone...

When we first met... I even had a bad impression on you... I didn't even think you were cute at first...

But... your kind hands swept me away and made me feel deep affection for you...

" Krrrr--iinnggg!!!! " I turned off my alarm clock, and yawned, " Time for school already...? *sigh* Couldn't sleep from thinking about her too much... *yawn* Alright time to get ready for school... "

As mom helped me get to school with our car... I gazed outside the window, thinking about what should i do..." ( Hm... I don't have much time left... It's already the final quarter... If i don't tell her how i feel... I'll be stuck like this forever... I don't want to run away... She's... the very first one to have touched my heart like this... ) "

Without noticing it, I've fallen asleep on my way to school, dreaming myself out,

" Wake up honey, we're here already! good luck and at least smile this time.."

And with that Mom kissed me in the cheek and waved good-bye at me as i saw her leaving the campus.

On my way to class, I reminisce about the dream that i had when i've fallen asleep on the car, it was the memories that i've had with her... The memories that out of nowhere, crafted my love for her...

As i was walking down the hall near the out-door cafeteria, I saw our school's Guidance Councilor, She looked at me and said " Aw, c'mon smile this time! "

I replied with a sad smile and said " Sorry but, No... "

With that i left her and thought about the things that have happened here in our school... I was new here, I wasn't good at making friends so i had lotsa enemies... I didn't trust my classmates at all except for her... I always went alone, ate alone, that's why i always loved scowling at someone for no reason at all... you could say that i was depressed... Some girls liked me...But that's because of my looks... And... I hated that since they weren't looking at me at all... I hated this school, and wanted to throw away all of my memories about it... except her...

After drinking a cup of water to refresh me from stress since i was lacking sleep, i hurriedly entered our classroom since i didn't want to be late, Most of the perverted boys there would greet me with a sarcastic " Good Morning! " But i knew their warmth was false so i'd just nod and ignore them, and hurry on to my seat, As i was fixing my things to get ready for school, I caught a glimpse of my loved one and all of a sudden, a strange yet sweet emotion flowed over into me...

"Good Morning, Teacher!!!" All of us greeted our sensei, and started class.

It was Math, the waterloo of most people, as for me, I slept as i always lacked sleep, and all of a sudden, My teacher called my attention and told me " Hey wake up and answer the problem on the board. " I woke up and rubbed my eyes, I calmly grabbed the chalk and started answering the problem with the formula I had memorized last time. "Very Good, you may sit down now" My teacher with a faint smile on his face, " I just wish you wouldn't sleep all the time at my class, i know you're smart but, well, you know..."

Yeah, I was the smartest one out of all the boys in our section, But, I didn't believe i was the smartest one, I just believed that my hard-work was paying off, i kept on thinking like how am i going to support my future family with that certain someone if i don't have good grades..? that certain thought kept on pushing me, even if i was depressed, due to the fact that i don't talk to anyone at all...

Ding-Dong-Ding-Dong... It was break time and I'd go about anywhere to kill my time after i've eaten my food.

As i was walking around campus to who knows where, I saw my beloved one alone, i suddenly thought of telling her how i felt, Taking that chance to talk to her, i went by her side and said " Hi! " she replied to me in a sad smile...

" Um, so... i wanted to tell you something " She nods in approval...

" I know that you don't feel the same way yet... but i really like you a lot... I don't care if you like any pretty boy out there whom I can't be as good just yet... Your gentle warmth had touched me and i want you to feel the same thing... I want to be useful to you... I couldn't be of any use to you at groupworks since i work alone, and stuff... I don't want to be a burden to you... That's why i'll get stronger... and with my new found strenght I'll make you happy and smile at me... I want to be with you... "

And with that she looked away and said... " I know that you like me but... you need to get away from me and forget about me..."

"But Why!!??" I said in a very shocked and emotional voice.

" Because I've been raped by someone... He also took my first kiss away... And i knew that you also liked me since i haven't been touched just like you... and my virginity has been taken away... Aren't you disgusted by that...!!!!!!!!????? "

Her sad voice that yelled at me had reached my heart and out of impulse i hugged her real tight...

I looked at her straight in the eyes and my face went near her ears... As i smelled her delightful, smooth hair, i gently whispered without caring if she was my girlfriend or not...

" ... I've already thought that i might not like you if your first kiss was taken but... I thought it over and told myself... You're still the one I Love... Even if it was taken there wouldn't be a difference from the warmth that you gave me... It's your warmth that i'll always crave for forever... it feels irreplaceable... "

As I kissed her soft cheeks, i whispered to her the sweet words that not anyone would give to anyone without a good reason...

" Wo Ai Ni " (I Love You in Mandarin Chinese)

So~ How's mah story? This is my first time not making a fanfic, so it felt kinda different... so sorry if it was long!!! Anyways reviews plz.!!! So, this story is somehow related to me but, i haven't done the good ending yet...


The whole story is great but I gotta agree with the others. The rape part passed over too fast. Also, adding the Chinese was a bit random and out of the story since there was no mention of anything related to it before. Overall, it's really good ^_^
Writer
9042 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
22 / F / in the shadows, y...
Offline
Posted 8/1/08 , edited 8/12/08
Godime's story waz pretty decent too.
First  Prev  1  2  3  4  5  Next  Last
You must be logged in to post.