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Posted 3/27/08 , edited 3/27/08
I often wonder how you feel
Or if my feelings are even real
If that smile was really meant for me
Or just made out of common courtesy
Do you feel just what I do?
Or is meaningless to you
Do you feel that special spark?
That lights my heart and made this mark
Do you realize how much you mean to me?
Or that for my heart you have the key
Do you know how much you flood my thoughts?
Or how you tie my tongue in knots
Or just how much I love you
And just how much I wish you loved me too

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Posted 3/27/08
omg...that was a great poem... it made me cry a little =[, anyways a very nice job, i like how you relate the poem to most peoples thoughts on first love
Posted 3/27/08

azndisaster wrote:

omg...that was a great poem... it made me cry a little =[, anyways a very nice job, i like how you relate the poem to most peoples thoughts on first love


thanx =)
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Posted 3/28/08
Its really beautifull and the pic fits very good to it <3
well maby I can give you some name....
Secret wish
First time feeling
Love hurts
well those is the names I think fits.....they are a little lame but well
Posted 3/28/08

Yamira wrote:

Its really beautifull and the pic fits very good to it <3
well maby I can give you some name....
Secret wish
First time feeling
Love hurts
well those is the names I think fits.....they are a little lame but well


thanx! i think i'm gonna go with ur 1st one
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Posted 3/29/08

kagura4 wrote:


Yamira wrote:

Its really beautifull and the pic fits very good to it <3
well maby I can give you some name....
Secret wish
First time feeling
Love hurts
well those is the names I think fits.....they are a little lame but well


thanx! i think i'm gonna go with ur 1st one


well glad I could help^^
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Posted 3/29/08

kagura4 wrote:

I often wonder how you feel
Or if my feelings are even real
If that smile was really meant for me
Or just made out of common courtesy
Do you feel just what I do?
Or is meaningless to you
Do you feel that special spark?
That lights my heart and made this mark
Do you realize how much you mean to me?
Or that for my heart you have the key
Do you know how much you flood my thoughts?
Or how you tie my tongue in knots
Or just how much I love you
And just how much I wish you loved me too



Wowz! Wowz! Wows!!!! Really really good!! Perfect match with the picture!! And even though it was sad, it was very truthful becuz a lot of people feel that way! I love the name too!!
Posted 3/29/08

moonwarrior485 wrote:


kagura4 wrote:

I often wonder how you feel
Or if my feelings are even real
If that smile was really meant for me
Or just made out of common courtesy
Do you feel just what I do?
Or is meaningless to you
Do you feel that special spark?
That lights my heart and made this mark
Do you realize how much you mean to me?
Or that for my heart you have the key
Do you know how much you flood my thoughts?
Or how you tie my tongue in knots
Or just how much I love you
And just how much I wish you loved me too



Wowz! Wowz! Wows!!!! Really really good!! Perfect match with the picture!! And even though it was sad, it was very truthful becuz a lot of people feel that way! I love the name too!!


thanx Yamira gave me the title X3
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Posted 3/30/08

kagura4 wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:


kagura4 wrote:

I often wonder how you feel
Or if my feelings are even real
If that smile was really meant for me
Or just made out of common courtesy
Do you feel just what I do?
Or is meaningless to you
Do you feel that special spark?
That lights my heart and made this mark
Do you realize how much you mean to me?
Or that for my heart you have the key
Do you know how much you flood my thoughts?
Or how you tie my tongue in knots
Or just how much I love you
And just how much I wish you loved me too



Wowz! Wowz! Wows!!!! Really really good!! Perfect match with the picture!! And even though it was sad, it was very truthful becuz a lot of people feel that way! I love the name too!!


thanx Yamira gave me the title X3


You're welcome ^^ And to Yamira-chan: Nice title lol
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Posted 3/31/08

moonwarrior485 wrote:


kagura4 wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:


kagura4 wrote:

I often wonder how you feel
Or if my feelings are even real
If that smile was really meant for me
Or just made out of common courtesy
Do you feel just what I do?
Or is meaningless to you
Do you feel that special spark?
That lights my heart and made this mark
Do you realize how much you mean to me?
Or that for my heart you have the key
Do you know how much you flood my thoughts?
Or how you tie my tongue in knots
Or just how much I love you
And just how much I wish you loved me too



Wowz! Wowz! Wows!!!! Really really good!! Perfect match with the picture!! And even though it was sad, it was very truthful becuz a lot of people feel that way! I love the name too!!


thanx Yamira gave me the title X3


You're welcome ^^ And to Yamira-chan: Nice title lol


thanks for that ^^
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good poem, matching pict and title
Nice!! luv it very much
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