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Posted 3/29/08 , edited 3/29/08
The Story
by Jordanna Tillinghast


Two separate lives brought together
Our love and friendship shared forever.
The laughs, the love, even some tears
Were planned to be spent all our years.

Then one day things fell apart,
And time and hurt pulled at our heart.
"Together always," were words only said;
And reality was, it was all in our head.

But through it all, we truly shine;
It will be you and me till the end of time.
"I love you always," will now be said
and a great friendship waits ahead.

_________________________________________

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Posted 3/29/08

mutoku wrote:

The Story
by Jordanna Tillinghast


Two separate lives brought together
Our love and friendship shared forever.
The laughs, the love, even some tears
Were planned to be spent all our years.

Then one day things fell apart,
And time and hurt pulled at our heart.
"Together always," were words only said;
And reality was, it was all in our head.

But through it all, we truly shine;
It will be you and me till the end of time.
"I love you always," will now be said
and a great friendship waits ahead.

_________________________________________

What do think? How does this poem make you feel? :)


Ack! I really like it!! It's sooo cute, and a little sad, but it's like a fairtytale, you know? Happy ending and all =P It really made me smile, it was so sweet ><
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Posted 3/29/08

mutoku wrote:

The Story
by Jordanna Tillinghast


Two separate lives brought together
Our love and friendship shared forever.
The laughs, the love, even some tears
Were planned to be spent all our years.

Then one day things fell apart,
And time and hurt pulled at our heart.
"Together always," were words only said;
And reality was, it was all in our head.

But through it all, we truly shine;
It will be you and me till the end of time.
"I love you always," will now be said
and a great friendship waits ahead.

_________________________________________

What do think? How does this poem make you feel? :)


I will totaly agree whit moonworrior on this poem ^^
Posted 3/29/08

mutoku wrote:

The Story
by Jordanna Tillinghast


Two separate lives brought together
Our love and friendship shared forever.
The laughs, the love, even some tears
Were planned to be spent all our years.

Then one day things fell apart,
And time and hurt pulled at our heart.
"Together always," were words only said;
And reality was, it was all in our head.

But through it all, we truly shine;
It will be you and me till the end of time.
"I love you always," will now be said
and a great friendship waits ahead.

_________________________________________

What do think? How does this poem make you feel? :)


Aww!! it's so cute i love it! this is one of my faves! X3 At first the secound verse made me a little sad but the ending really brightens everything up =3...SO CUTE!! XD
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