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I Hate Boys!

Making a new friend


Summary- A girl name Kowa Minato (aka ko-chan). When she was a little kid she had bad experience with boys ALWAYS!!!, thus this made her hate boys, will she ever find true love?


Ko-chan: Ohiyo!!~ my name is Kowa Minato but you can just call me Ko-chan , I’am 14 years old , never had a boyfriend before, because I have bad memories of them. They are all soooo dirty I HATE THEM!!! I made a promise to myself long ago that I Ko-chan will never fall in love with a guy!

Ko-chan: ok time to go to my new school. High school at last!!! YOSH!!! I will make at least one friend. Hopefully I don’t get pick on T~T (talking to her self, people looking at her as if she’s crazy)

Ko-chan: umm…I have no idea where to go…I think im lost T_T (talking to herself again)

Ko-chan: ummmm……..do u know where I can find room b-2?

Miki-chan: yea im in that class too ^ ^ wanna go together

Ko-chan: YES!!! This is it I Kowa Minato on this day I have made a new friend for the first time of my life!!! >.< (talking to in her mind)

Ko-chan YES! I will love to go with u!!~

Miki-chan: hahaha ur funny ^_^

Ko-chan EH?! Im funny?

Miki-chan: yea….your more like weird funny, I like u

Ko-chan: REALL!!?? Yay!!! I hope we can become good friends!! Ummm…. What’s your name?

Miki-chan: im sorry my name is Miki Sakura

Ko-chan: my name is Kowa Minato, but u can just call me Ko-chan

Miki-chan: k, lets go to class before we’ll late!!

Ko-chan: AHH!!! I forgot!!! Sorry if I make you late IM SOO SORRY!!!

Miki-chan:……it’s ok, don’t worry were not going to be late, HURRY!!! RUN!!! (Miki-chan pulls Ko-chan with her running)

Ko-chan: KYYAAA!!! Miki-chan!!!!!!
(in the end they both were late…..-_-)


Meeting a boy

Miki-chan: in the end we were both late T~T im sorry Ko-chan

Ko-chan: don’t worry about it, it was my fault I shouldn’t have stoped u…sorry…

Miki-chan: no im sorry….

Ko-chan: HAHAHA!!! Look at us were sooo stupid saying sorry

Miki-chan: haha yea….

Teacher: Stop talking!! Both of u

Miki-chan and Ko-chan: WERE SORRY SENSI!!!

Teacher: everybody be quite! I will be assigning your seats

Ko-chan: I hope I get to sit by u Miki-chan ^ ^

Miki-chan: me too

Teacher: Nina Montoro ur seat is 3-5….blah blah blah………Kowa Minato your seat is by Kazuki Teno

Ko-chan: Miki-chan I guess I wont be siting next to you T_T

Miki-chan: Goodybye Ko-chan!!!

Ko-chan: ummm…who is Teno-san? Sensi

Sensi: he’s the one with the blond hair in row 2-5, your sit is right next to his

Ko-chan: thank you Sensi

Ko-chan: here I go *glup*

Ko-chan: are u Kazuki Teno?

Kazuki: soo what if iam

Ko-chan: ummmm……………I sit next to u

Ko-chan: n….i…..ce….. to …….m.m…..e.ee.e…t.t.tt.. ..y.y…o.o.o….u.uu.u.u.u. (this is sooo scary, I haven’t talk to a guy for almost my whole life ever since then…)

Kazuki: what are u scared for? Im not going to bite u

Ko-chan: heh….hehe……yea im sorry….(this guy is trying to KILL ME!!!! Miki SAVE ME!!!!) *looks over to Miki* (trying to tell her to save her form him but she dosen't understand)

Ko-chan: *sits very quickly* (I have to be strong even though I hate boys I’ll try my best to get along with them, BUT I WILL STILL HATE THEM!!!) p.s. she’s talking in her mind

Kazuki: OI!!! Aren’t u going to tell me your name?

Ko-chan: *suddenly gets up very fast* MY NAME IS KOWA MINATO, BLOOD TYPE O, AGE 14, HEIGHT 159cm (very nervous)

Kazuki: I said your name not those other stuff (she’s weird)

Ko-chan: o im sorry (omg I just made a big fool of myself, IM SOO STUPID!!!) *blushes*

Kazuki: geezzz what are u an idiot saying all those other things and saying sorry, you must be a big BAKA!

Ko-chan: yes iam a big baka (gets angry) BUT YOU’RE A GIANT BAKA FOR CALLING ME A BAKA!!!! U BAKA!!!! (exploded in rage) *breathing very hard*

Kazuki: *speechless*

Kazuki: HAHAHAHA!!!! U really are a big baka just look at u!!! (keeps on laughing very hard) *falls off the chair, *rolling around*

Classmates: *looking at them*

Ko-chan: *blushes* *runs out of the class*

Ko-chan: *stops right before she leaves* (no this is wrong why? Iam I running? I shouldn’t run I promise myself that no matter what happens I will be strong and fight til the end!!!)

Ko-chan: HEY U GIANT BAKA!!!! Who’s rolling on the floor

Ko-chan: u thought I was going to run away but not anymore im sick of tried of always running away from BOYS!! No long shall I run, from now on Im going to defeat u!!! IM GOINT TO FIGHT!!!

Kazuki: *stops rolling on the floor* o really?? Fine then go ahead and defeat me if u can

Ko-chan: I INTEND TO!!!!!! JUST U WAIT!!!


DEFEATING U!!!!

{After class}

Miki-chan: are u really serious about defeating that guy?

Ko-chan: OF COURSE!!

Miki-chan: ok then….how are u going to defeat him then?

Ko-chan: uhhh…..i haven’t thought about that yet…hehe -_-

Miki-chan: your really hopeless Ko-chan………

Ko-chan: haha I know….

{lunch time}

Miki-chan: wanna sit with me at lunch?

Ko-chan: SURE!~

Miki-chan: hey isn’t that guy Teno-san?

Ko-chan: huh!? O him just ignored him….i don’t want to face him yet…

Miki-chan: hmmm ok (have a very GREAT plan!!)

Miki-chan: Ko-chan look over there *Ko-chan looks* *Miki pushes Ko-chan to Kazuki*

Ko-chan: Miki-chan!!! >=( WHAT ARE U DOING?

Kazuki: o it’s u….what was your name again……Kotoro, Koma, Kowe….

Ko-chan: *gets very angry* SHUT UP!!! Geezzz

Kazuki: sooo….missy how are u going to defeat me by acting like an that (calls her missy because he forgot her name….)

Ko-chan: (crap! I didn’t think of anything yet) [talking to herself]

Miki-chan: Ko-chan is going to make u fall madly in love with her!! (her plan)

Ko-chan: *SUPER SHOCK!!!* *speechless*

Kazuki: hahaha I would like to see that, like I would ever fall in love with an ulgy idiot

Ko-chan: *simply piss* ok then, lets make a bet if you can make me say I love u then I’ll be your slave for 2 weeks, but if I win you’ll have to…..(drama music in background) BUY ME PUDDING FOR 2 WEEKS!!!!

Everbody in cafeteria: *falls down laughing*

Kazuki: what a lame bet, but ok I’ll make u say I love u, it’ll be fun

Ko-chan: (hehehe Teno-san u don’t know that I HATE BOYS!!!, I will definitely win!) OK then it’s settle then BUT! We only have 1 month to do this, it will start tomorrow REMEMEBER!!! (leaves with evil grin)



I Love You!

{the very next day}


Ko-chan: Miki-chan how should I make Kazuki say he loves me?

Miki-chan: hmm….well…it says in this magazine that u can make a boy fall in love with u by wearing SUPER SEXY OUTFITS!! Hahha just kidding….

Ko-chan: Miki-chan!!! U have to help me ur the one who got me into this mess!!! >=( iam still very angry with u humph

Miki-chan: come on Ko-chan it’ll be ok I’ll help u ok?

Ko-chan: Miki-chan I haven’t told u this but I hate boys…*whispering to her*

Miki-chan: EHHH!!?? WHY!!???

Ko-chan: well it’s a very long story, it all started when I was in primary school….(note: she’s talking about the past now)

Yoshi: hey Ko-chan come here

Ko-chan: eh? Me?

Yoshi: hahha who else is Ko-chan?

Ko-chan: hehe, what is it Yoshi-kun!~ ^ ^

Yoshi: close your eyes ok

Ko-chan: hmmmm….ok, WAIT!!! are u going to do something bad to me??!!

Yoshi: of course NOT! dummy

Ko-chan: ok..but if u do i get to hit u *closes her eyes*

Yoshi: *putes candy in her hand then kiss her on the cheek*

Ko-chan: HUH!? *blushes* *looks in her hand* candy….ahh…Yoshi thank….huh?? where is Yoshi??

Yoshi: AARRGGG I HATE MYSELF!!!! …...*face bright red*

Ko-chan: *clutches the candy* DON'T WORRY YOSHI I WILL TAKE GOOD CARE OF IT!!! *yelling*

{next day at primary school}

Ko-chan: *sees Yoshi in the hall*…..Yoshi

Yoshi: OHIYO!! Ko-chan =D

Ko-chan: ohiyo Yoshi-kun!!! ^_^

Yoshi: uhh..e.r.r.r…mm…..mm….uumm..mm.m. well u………….GO OUT WITH ME!!!!! (>.<)

Ko-chan: *shock* yes Yes! I liked Yoshi for a very long time *blushes while saying it*

Yoshi: I iiii like u too

Ko-chan: im very happy!!!~ ^_^ thank u for loving me

Yoshi: are u an idiot,you don't thank someone for liking you, I like u because Ko-chann is Ko-chan just being with u makes me happy everyday =)

Ko-chan: Yoshi…………UN! ^_^

{their love journey begins!!)







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cool! but who's Yoshi? is he from the past? and why does she hate boys if that happened to her? can't wait till the next chapters! youre doing great
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thank u sunfire55!!!! and yes Yoshi is form the past ^ ^ later on your know why she hate boys hehe. thanks for cheering me on i already have the other finishe but not posted up yet...but i will i begin this about 2 or 1 week ago i wasnt going to post it up but i founs your book and it made me want to post my up too so thank u very much!!!!
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My new favorite manga right there. Doesn't even need pictures to be awesome.
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Good job! ^^ i can envision it perfectly! Can't wait to read the rest.
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gret mstory cant wait till there picture
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Kiki_chan wrote:

Good job! ^^ i can envision it perfectly! Can't wait to read the rest.


THANK U VERY MUCH!!!!! im sooo happy that u left a comment i will keep on writing
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gret mstory cant wait till there picture


shank u for reading my story and THANK U VERY MUCH!!!!! for actually leaving a comment but i probably won't draw the pictures yet becasue im not good at it TT~TT but i will try, im going to write all their lines first

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omg the story is so interesting! <33 good job! can't wait for more hehe
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XiiaoWitchiie wrote:

omg the story is so interesting! <33 good job! can't wait for more hehe



yay!!! thank u!! it makes me really happy when people put in their comments i like to read it ^ ^ thanks soo much for reading it and leaving a comment
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haha.. yoshi.. lol.. hmm.. great story.. and is funny too.. but around the bet thingy between ko-chan and kazuki im kinda confuse.. wait nvm.. i'l' read it again.. lol..
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i like this story it has action and romance at the same time
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Well.... i'm a first impression kind of guy, so i going to say something that going to change your life. It's a confusing start and i don't under stand. It's also, too long and i don't feel like reading the rest of the chapter 1.

Oh yeah, forgot one thing, It's boring.
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lirg123 wrote:

Well.... i'm a first impression kind of guy, so i going to say something that going to change your life. It's a confusing start and i don't under stand. It's also, too long and i don't feel like reading the rest of the chapter 1.

Oh yeah, forgot one thing, It's boring.



well it's different from everybody'd taste i can't change what u like to what u hate i knew some people wouldn't like it so it's ok i was excetping some people who wouldn't like it ^ ^
but im going to continue it still hopefully i get better =)
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