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I Hate Boys!! 2


{one week later}
Note: still in past


Yoshi: Ko-chan lets eat luch together ^ ^

Ko-chan: sure

Yoshi: umm Ko-chan I can’t walk home with u today sorry

Ko-chan: eh? Why?

Yoshi: because there’s someone I need to meet after school

Ko-chan: uhh..ok ^ ^ we can walk home together tomorrow

Yoshi: sorry Ko-chan

Ko-chan: it’s ok beside I can walk home with my friend now, so it’s ok don’t worry about it k?

Yoshi: un

{after school}

Ko-chan: bye Yumi-chan~ *waving*

Yumi-chan: bye bye!!

Ko-chan: hmmm I wonder who Yoshi-kun needed to see….(talking to herself) o well I trust Yoshi, so it’s ok

Yoshi: I don’t want to see u again Amy-san

Amy: NO!!! I dont want to, I like u Yoshi *crying*

Yoshi: I told u long ago already I don’t like u the way u like me i only think of you as my sister , im sorry Amy I like someone else

Amy: it's ok if u like someone else, it dosen't change the way i like you *still crying*



Amy: *kisses Yoshi* chu
Amy kissing yoshi (just a little pic i though it was cute =3)

Ko-chan: (yup indeed she saw everything, note: me talking) Yoshi…… *starts crying and running at the same time*

Yoshi: *pushes Amy away* Ko-chan!!! WAIT!!! *runs after Ko-chan*

Ko-chan: (im sooo stupid, I can’t believe he would do this, I HATE YOSHI!!!, BUT MOST OF ALL I HATE BOYS, THERE ALL THE SAME!!!!, LIARS!!!) *running without looking, and runs into a very deep hole in the forest*

Ko-chan: KKYYAAA!!!! *falls right in* ouch……where iam i?

Ko-chan: I think im in a hole….*starts crying again*

Ko-chan: what if no body finds me…..who cares I don’t want to be found anyway…..*tearing up* but…BUT!!! I have to get out of here…im going to get out for me

Ko-chan: *trying to get out* it’s no use….it’ s too deep *huff* what should I do? I don’t know….im scared…

Ko-chan: *spots a huge rock* I know I can try to get on top of it, then climb out of here

Ko-chan: *gets on top of rock, and climbing out of hole* *out of breath* finally……I made it…..*falls asleep*


{2 days later}

Ko-chan: where iam i?

Ko-chan: is this the hospital?? Mom?

Okaa-san: Ko-chan!!!! Your awake now

Okaa-san: thank god your ok *crying*

Ko-chan: kaa-san…..what happened?........

Okaa-san: you were in a hole..but u got out and feel asleep in the forest for 2 whole days!!!, you were really exhausted. When we found u, u were sleeping the doctors said for a little girl getting out of a huge hole must have used up a lot of your stength *crying*

Ko-chan: did u guys just find me??

Okaa-san: yes…we found u 8 hours ago

Ko-chan: I see……*falls back asleep*



{1 week after}

Yumi-chan: Ko-chan!!!! Your back to school!!! What happened to you are u ok? Im sorry I couldn’t go visit you they wouldn’t let anybody go see you

Ko-chan: im ok Yumi-chan, don’t worry about me =)

Yumi-chan: but how did u get into the hospital??

Ko-chan: *suddenly remember what happened*….....

Yumi-chan: Ko-chan?? Are u alright?

Ko-chan: yea…uhh…u see I was careless and ran into a hole hahahha

Yumi-chan: u idiot!!!! Be careful next time *crying* u made me really worry about u

Ko-chan: im sorry Yumi, I’ll be extra careful next time so don’t cry

Yumi-chan: promise ok?

Ko-chan: I promise

Ko-chan: kaa-san im home

Okaa-san: welcome back Ko-chan

Okaa-san: Ko-chan I have to tell u something….your dad found a new job were going to move

Ko-chan: *shocked* kaa-san…WHY???!!! I don’t want to move!!

Okaa-san: im sorry…but we need the money and I know u just got out of the hospital and it’s been hard for you im really sorry

Ko-chan: (mom….it must be hard for mom too…) I’ll be ok kaa-san, when are we going to move?

Okaa-san: this Friday

Ko-chan: that soon??

Okaa-san: yes…your father’s boss wants us there as soon as possible

Ko-chan: ok...

{next day at school}

Ko-chan:Yumi-chan I have something to tell you….u might not like it but promise me you wont be sad after this ok?

Yumi-chan: *suspicious* umm…ok

Ko-chan: im going to move this Friday

Yumi-chan: *shocked* why!!!

Ko-chan: my dad found a new job

Yumi-chan: well I promise you I wouldn’t be sad and I wont….im going to be strong and smile like u Ko-chan!! ^ _^

Ko-chan: im very happy for you, come on lets go to class and spend the best time with my best friend

Yumi-chan: UN!


{Friday}

Ko-chan: kaa-san where do u want me to put this? *carrying boxes*

Okaa-san: um..just put it in that truck

Ko-chan: ok *walks to truck and sees Yoshi*

Ko-chan: YOSHI!!!! What are u doing here? GO AWAY!!

Yoshi: Ko-chan let me tell u what happened

Ko-chan: I already know what happened….remember I was there!!

Yoshi: I know….but I don’t even like her, Yumi told me that you are moving is that true?

Ko-chan: so what if it is true? It has nothing to do with you

Yoshi: Ko-chan…..i still like you, she was my childhood friend I didn’t know that she liked me until 2 years ago…

Yoshi: I told her I didn’t like her the way she liked me….but she wouldn’t listen

Yoshi: I said to her I have a girlfriend now, so she should just give up on me

Yoshi: but she didn’t listen.....she came to my school and-

Ko-chan: SHUT UP!!!

Ko-chan: why are u telling me this? I have nothing to do with u anymore, just leave me alone now…ok?

Ko-chan: it’s too late anyways….*feeling sad*

Yoshi: no it’s not because, I know u still like me!

Ko-chan: how would u know? You didn’t even bother to come and find me when I got lost…………

Yoshi: that’s because-

Okaa-san: Ko-chan come on were leaving now

Ko-chan: Im leaving now goodbye!! Yoshi…………it was nice meeting you *crying* *gets in car and leaves*

Yoshi: KO-CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I STILL LOVE YOU!!!! IM GOING TO FIND YOU WHEN WE GROW UP!!!!!! I WILL DEFENITALY FIND U *yelling to Ko-chan and chasing the car*

Ko-chan: *can't hear anything,too far away* (sooo sad T~T note: me talking)


{END OF THE PAST}

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plzzzz leave comment i wanna hear what u think of it
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thats so sad ok i see why she hates boys now! you did rly good on the storyline, its pulling me in already! =3
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sunfire55 wrote:

thats so sad ok i see why she hates boys now! you did rly good on the storyline, its pulling me in already! =3


thank u soooo much ^ ^ your like the only one who leaves comments

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T-T wah! That's really sad. your doing great with this. I'm looking forward to the next chapter ^-^
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hey in witch grade was they?
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Kiki_chan wrote:

T-T wah! That's really sad. your doing great with this. I'm looking forward to the next chapter ^-^


SHANK U SOOOO MUCH FOR LEAVING A COMMENT AGAIN AND READING IT!!!! im sooo happy that u liked it >.< it makes me wanna do it more, but right now im going to pratice drawing them TT~TT i really suck at drawing.....

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xBlackRosex wrote:

hey in witch grade was they?



they are in 5th grade sorry i forgot to put that in hehe...

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Kiki_chan wrote:

T-T wah! That's really sad. your doing great with this. I'm looking forward to the next chapter ^-^


SHANK U SOOOO MUCH FOR LEAVING A COMMENT AGAIN AND READING IT!!!! im sooo happy that u liked it >.< it makes me wanna do it more, but right now im going to pratice drawing them TT~TT i really suck at drawing.....



same here but i have a good dtory in my head but i suck a drawing
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haha i suck at drawing too^ though i freakingly love writing^^ <33 good job! i see why she hates guys. yoshi deserves to be hated. he shouldn't have given amy a chance to kiss him in the first place
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ahlor wrote:


Kiki_chan wrote:

T-T wah! That's really sad. your doing great with this. I'm looking forward to the next chapter ^-^


SHANK U SOOOO MUCH FOR LEAVING A COMMENT AGAIN AND READING IT!!!! im sooo happy that u liked it >.< it makes me wanna do it more, but right now im going to pratice drawing them TT~TT i really suck at drawing.....



same here but i have a good dtory in my head but i suck a drawing



me too TT~TT but even if u suck at drawing keep on trying u don't have to be good at drawing, im going to draw Ko-chan ^ ^ i'll show it to u when im done ok?
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XiiaoWitchiie wrote:

haha i suck at drawing too^ though i freakingly love writing^^ <33 good job! i see why she hates guys. yoshi deserves to be hated. he shouldn't have given yumi a chance to kiss him in the first place


wow i alot of people i meet arent very good at drawing including me TT~TT o and it was amy who kiss him not yumi, yumi is ko-chan's friend ^ ^
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XiiaoWitchiie wrote:

haha i suck at drawing too^ though i freakingly love writing^^ <33 good job! i see why she hates guys. yoshi deserves to be hated. he shouldn't have given yumi a chance to kiss him in the first place


wow i alot of people i meet arent very good at drawing including me TT~TT o and it was amy who kiss him not yumi, yumi is ko-chan's friend ^ ^


ooh sorry i mixed up the names xD

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ahlor wrote:


XiiaoWitchiie wrote:

haha i suck at drawing too^ though i freakingly love writing^^ <33 good job! i see why she hates guys. yoshi deserves to be hated. he shouldn't have given yumi a chance to kiss him in the first place


wow i alot of people i meet arent very good at drawing including me TT~TT o and it was amy who kiss him not yumi, yumi is ko-chan's friend ^ ^


ooh sorry i mixed up the names xD



it's ok i do that sometime too ^ ^

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wahhh!!!! kawaii! did u really make this up? its amazing. i wish it was a real manga XD plz put up some more soon!!
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