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Read this sweet story and comment^^
Posted 3/29/08 , edited 3/29/08
Take Some Time and actually Read this
this is a GUY TALKING...
IT'S 7TH GRADE...I stared at the girl next to me...She was my so called 'best friend'... I stared at her.... Long, silky hair... And I wished she was mine... But she didn't notice me like that... I knew it... After class she walked up to me and asked me for the notes she had missed the day before... And I handed them to her... She said 'thanks'... And gave me a kiss on the cheek... I wanted to tell her.... I want her to know that I don't want to be 'just friends'... I love her but I'm too shy to tell her... And I don't know why...
IT'S JUNIOR YEAR...My phone rang... On the other end it was her... She was in tears... Mumbling on and on about how her love had broken her heart... She asked me to come over because she didn't want to be alone... So I did... As I sat next to her on the sofa... I stared at her soft eyes... Wishing she was mine... After 2 hours... A Drew Barrymore movie... And 3 bags of chips... She decided to go to sleep... She looked at me.. Said 'thanks' and gave me a kiss on the cheek... I wanted to tell her... I want her to know... That I don't want to be 'just friends'... I love her but I'm too shy to tell her... And I don't know why...
IT'S SENIOR YEAR...The day before prom... She walked to my locker... 'My date is sick' she said... He's not going to go... Well... I didn't have a date and in 7th grade... We made a promise that if neiter of us had dates.... We'd go together just as 'best friends'... And so we did...
IT'S PROM NIGHT...After everything was over with... I was standing at her front door step... I stared at her ... She smiled at me... I wanted her to be mine... But she doesn't think of me like that... And I know it... Then she said 'I had the best time... Thanks!'... And she gave me a kiss on the cheek... I wanted to telll her... I wanted her to know that I don't want to be 'just friends'... I love her but I'm just too shy... And I don't know why...
IT'S GRADUATION DAY....A day passed... And then a week... And then a month... Before I could blink... It was graduation day... I watched her... Perfect body.... Floated like an angel up on stage to get her diploma... I wanted her to be mine... But she doesn't think of me that way... And I know it... Before everyone went home... She came to me in her smock and hat... And cried as I hugged her... Then she lifted her head from my shoulders and said 'you're my best friend'... 'Thanks!'... And gave me a kiss on the cheek... I wanted to tell her.. I wanted to know that I wanted to be more than 'just friends'.... I love her but I'm too shy... And I don't know why...
IT'S A FEW YEARS LATER...Now I sit in the pews of the church... A church that she is getting married in now... I watched her say 'I do' an drive off to her new life... Married to another man... I wanted her to be mine... But she didn't see me like that... And I knew it... But before she drove away... She came to me and said 'You came!... Thanks!'.... And she kissed me on the cheek... I wanted to tell her... I wantd her to know that I didn't want to be 'just friends'... I love her but I'm just too shy... And I don't know why...
YEARS PASSED...I looked down at the coffin of a girl who used to be my 'best friend'... At the service they read a diary entry she had wrote in her high school years... This is what it said... 'I stare at him... Wishing he was mine.... But he doesn't notice me like that... And I know it... I wanted to tell him... I wanted him to know... That I don't want to be 'just friends'... I love him but I'm just too shy... And I don't know why... I wish he would tell me he loved me'... I wish I did too... I thought to myself and I cried...
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so many ellipses, I can't tell when you are trying to pause, or there is an unfinished thought, or passing of time, or an omission of a word or phrase, or the end of a sentence. All I got out of that was Drew Barrymore and a bunch of time passed.
Posted 3/29/08
wow. i feel like watching porn for some reason now
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sad but not enough to make me cry
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i cried.........
Posted 3/29/08
aww very bittersweet.
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Posted 3/29/08
Lol. Looks like a typical storyline for a shitty chick flick.
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Incontrovertible wrote:

Lol. Looks like a typical storyline for a shitty chick flick.


The only shitty chick flicks are the ones that boys enjoy, this one looks like a box office hit.
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memphit wrote:


Incontrovertible wrote:

Lol. Looks like a typical storyline for a shitty chick flick.


The only shitty chick flicks are the ones that boys enjoy, this one looks like a box office hit.


Such as? This storyline is typical. If anything its like a down-graded version from Korean movies where they both have a stupid tragic death.
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Posted 3/29/08
kinda sad but anyways nice story
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There are a million of these floating around the internet...I just had th read the first three words and I could predict how the whole story went...

My point being- even though its moral is well developed- we get enough of thse letters everyday to get the point. I'm not trashing the thread, the rest of you can comment to your hearts content, but I dont see a point when I see this (and other letters like it) everyday.

Still, this thread serves more purpose than the usual one so I deem it a pass ^_^
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Posted 3/29/08

Incontrovertible wrote:


memphit wrote:


Incontrovertible wrote:

Lol. Looks like a typical storyline for a shitty chick flick.


The only shitty chick flicks are the ones that boys enjoy, this one looks like a box office hit.


Such as? This storyline is typical. If anything its like a down-graded version from Korean movies where they both have a stupid tragic death.


I thought Stranger Than Fiction might fall into this category. Koreans are realists, thats how shit works in the real word son!
Posted 3/29/08
this mad me sad =(
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Posted 3/29/08
That is so sad. tsk.
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memphit wrote:


Incontrovertible wrote:


memphit wrote:


Incontrovertible wrote:

Lol. Looks like a typical storyline for a shitty chick flick.


The only shitty chick flicks are the ones that boys enjoy, this one looks like a box office hit.


Such as? This storyline is typical. If anything its like a down-graded version from Korean movies where they both have a stupid tragic death.


I thought Stranger Than Fiction might fall into this category. Koreans are realists, thats how shit works in the real word son!


First off, don't call me fucking son. Second, this is too pathetic for it to actually be true considering they were best friends. Also Korean movies are all fucking coincidental and all of it is way to dramatic.
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