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Posted 3/30/08
Alone I sit in this corner,
Cowering from life like its
a sin,
And life goes on like I
never really exsisted.

Why the pain that I feel now,
It has no biblical meaning,
Perhaps loniless has finally
taken its toll.

I am now but a distant memory,
To the life and light I once had,
A shell emtpy, devoid of pitiful
emotions,
And a soft heart forgotten to many.

Alone I sit in darkness,
Beckoning to the call,
And giving up false desires
to the weak and feeble.

I am now but souless,
Deprived of spirit and
fleshless concerns,
A mockery of who I once was
is my picture now.

Alone I sit in this cage,
A cage that I've made for
myself,
With bars made of tears
and a lock made from
tatterd dreams,
Who can save me?

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Posted 3/30/08
really nice it really make us think
Posted 3/30/08
I agree with yamira X3
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Posted 3/31/08

WhitePlazma wrote:

Alone I sit in this corner,
Cowering from life like its
a sin,
And life goes on like I
never really exsisted.

Why the pain that I feel now,
It has no biblical meaning,
Perhaps loniless has finally
taken its toll.

I am now but a distant memory,
To the life and light I once had,
A shell emtpy, devoid of pitiful
emotions,
And a soft heart forgotten to many.

Alone I sit in darkness,
Beckoning to the call,
And giving up false desires
to the weak and feeble.

I am now but souless,
Deprived of spirit and
fleshless concerns,
A mockery of who I once was
is my picture now.

Alone I sit in this cage,
A cage that I've made for
myself,
With bars made of tears
and a lock made from
tatterd dreams,
Who can save me?



I agree with both Kagura and Yamira-chan!! It really made me think...but it was really good >< But that's to be expected hehe
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