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Posted 3/30/08
when I wher a
child
I could smile
and not think
what will happen
tomorrow
no it was now
like tomorrows worries
never would come
I could let the fantasy go
its own way
in the water
I could see
mearmaids
swimming and loughing
a dragon
flying over
the mountains
and my sister and brother
would be the monsters
wanting to catch me
the hero
in this storie

I wish I could be
that child agein
dreaming
and no care
in the world
play whit my friends
and open the door
to our own
world
but I know
that time has gone
and will never
come back

from child
whit dreams and fantasy
to a teenager
thats the way
we all walk
but I wish I would never walk
that way
just stay ther
in my childhood
place
and never go
to the teenager place

when that time comes
you learn
that you cant trust
everyone
not your
best friends
not even them
that I have learned
that those
you trough wher
friends
in reality
are enemy
of your world
I have learned that
tomorrow
can be bader then
the worst nightmare
I have learned
that familly
is not allways
happy
all those things
I never would have trough
when
I was a child

when I find
a pic
of myself
a young girl
smiling whit a light
in her eye
and I look to a mirror
I ask the picture
" Wher have you"
" gone?"
" are you still ther"
" inside me?"
touching my heart
and
shows away
the sadness
how I wish
I could be that girl agein

but
when I think about it
when I walk
in the night
is the girl really gone?
I smile
comes to my lips
as I feel the air
stroke my face
as the trough comes
" mayby the wind"
" is a ghost?"
no the girl isnt
really gone
shes still ther
a part of her
the fantasy
is what I have left
making stories
in my head
imagin things
that is not really real
or is it?
who know..
its just a childs dream...
that I know
but thats shows
that the world
have not breaked me
not yet

time will go
and I will beacome
a grow up
and then
time will go to
getting older
and older
to the day
I will leav this world
and more
wishes will come
but one wish
will allways
be the nr. one
and that wish
name is....
" I wish I could be"
" that child"
" again.."

a new poem my inspiration is coming back xD hope you guys understand why I chose those pics...
well this is a poem of myself....just wanted to say that mayby you guys get a pic of how I can be sometimes
Posted 3/30/08
I totally get wat ur saying, awesome poem yamira great comparision and contrast of the views of a child and a teen
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kagura4 wrote:

I totally get wat ur saying, awesome poem yamira great comparision and contrast of the views of a child and a teen


thank you ^^
Im glad you understood the meaning of the pics ^^ it took me a hour before I found the perfect ones >.<
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Posted 3/31/08

Yamira wrote:

when I wher a
child
I could smile
and not think
what will happen
tomorrow
no it was now
like tomorrows worries
never would come
I could let the fantasy go
its own way
in the water
I could see
mearmaids
swimming and loughing
a dragon
flying over
the mountains
and my sister and brother
would be the monsters
wanting to catch me
the hero
in this storie

I wish I could be
that child agein
dreaming
and no care
in the world
play whit my friends
and open the door
to our own
world
but I know
that time has gone
and will never
come back

from child
whit dreams and fantasy
to a teenager
thats the way
we all walk
but I wish I would never walk
that way
just stay ther
in my childhood
place
and never go
to the teenager place

when that time comes
you learn
that you cant trust
everyone
not your
best friends
not even them
that I have learned
that those
you trough wher
friends
in reality
are enemy
of your world
I have learned that
tomorrow
can be bader then
the worst nightmare
I have learned
that familly
is not allways
happy
all those things
I never would have trough
when
I was a child

when I find
a pic
of myself
a young girl
smiling whit a light
in her eye
and I look to a mirror
I ask the picture
" Wher have you"
" gone?"
" are you still ther"
" inside me?"
touching my heart
and
shows away
the sadness
how I wish
I could be that girl agein

but
when I think about it
when I walk
in the night
is the girl really gone?
I smile
comes to my lips
as I feel the air
stroke my face
as the trough comes
" mayby the wind"
" is a ghost?"
no the girl isnt
really gone
shes still ther
a part of her
the fantasy
is what I have left
making stories
in my head
imagin things
that is not really real
or is it?
who know..
its just a childs dream...
that I know
but thats shows
that the world
have not breaked me
not yet

time will go
and I will beacome
a grow up
and then
time will go to
getting older
and older
to the day
I will leav this world
and more
wishes will come
but one wish
will allways
be the nr. one
and that wish
name is....
" I wish I could be"
" that child"
" again.."

a new poem my inspiration is coming back xD hope you guys understand why I chose those pics...
well this is a poem of myself....just wanted to say that mayby you guys get a pic of how I can be sometimes


Oh my gods!! It was really good >< It was a bit sad, but very honest and truthful. And though I've only been a teenager for less than a year...my life has gone overly dramatic >< I want to go back to believing in everything and knowing nothing at all!! ><
But very good job Yamira-chan!!
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moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:

when I wher a
child
I could smile
and not think
what will happen
tomorrow
no it was now
like tomorrows worries
never would come
I could let the fantasy go
its own way
in the water
I could see
mearmaids
swimming and loughing
a dragon
flying over
the mountains
and my sister and brother
would be the monsters
wanting to catch me
the hero
in this storie

I wish I could be
that child agein
dreaming
and no care
in the world
play whit my friends
and open the door
to our own
world
but I know
that time has gone
and will never
come back

from child
whit dreams and fantasy
to a teenager
thats the way
we all walk
but I wish I would never walk
that way
just stay ther
in my childhood
place
and never go
to the teenager place

when that time comes
you learn
that you cant trust
everyone
not your
best friends
not even them
that I have learned
that those
you trough wher
friends
in reality
are enemy
of your world
I have learned that
tomorrow
can be bader then
the worst nightmare
I have learned
that familly
is not allways
happy
all those things
I never would have trough
when
I was a child

when I find
a pic
of myself
a young girl
smiling whit a light
in her eye
and I look to a mirror
I ask the picture
" Wher have you"
" gone?"
" are you still ther"
" inside me?"
touching my heart
and
shows away
the sadness
how I wish
I could be that girl agein

but
when I think about it
when I walk
in the night
is the girl really gone?
I smile
comes to my lips
as I feel the air
stroke my face
as the trough comes
" mayby the wind"
" is a ghost?"
no the girl isnt
really gone
shes still ther
a part of her
the fantasy
is what I have left
making stories
in my head
imagin things
that is not really real
or is it?
who know..
its just a childs dream...
that I know
but thats shows
that the world
have not breaked me
not yet

time will go
and I will beacome
a grow up
and then
time will go to
getting older
and older
to the day
I will leav this world
and more
wishes will come
but one wish
will allways
be the nr. one
and that wish
name is....
" I wish I could be"
" that child"
" again.."

a new poem my inspiration is coming back xD hope you guys understand why I chose those pics...
well this is a poem of myself....just wanted to say that mayby you guys get a pic of how I can be sometimes


Oh my gods!! It was really good >< It was a bit sad, but very honest and truthful. And though I've only been a teenager for less than a year...my life has gone overly dramatic >< I want to go back to believing in everything and knowing nothing at all!! ><
But very good job Yamira-chan!!


Thank you very much ^^
yeah I too whis I could go back to that time.....It was alot more happyer then this life T.T so I know that feeling sinc I have been a teen in years xD
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Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:

when I wher a
child
I could smile
and not think
what will happen
tomorrow
no it was now
like tomorrows worries
never would come
I could let the fantasy go
its own way
in the water
I could see
mearmaids
swimming and loughing
a dragon
flying over
the mountains
and my sister and brother
would be the monsters
wanting to catch me
the hero
in this storie

I wish I could be
that child agein
dreaming
and no care
in the world
play whit my friends
and open the door
to our own
world
but I know
that time has gone
and will never
come back

from child
whit dreams and fantasy
to a teenager
thats the way
we all walk
but I wish I would never walk
that way
just stay ther
in my childhood
place
and never go
to the teenager place

when that time comes
you learn
that you cant trust
everyone
not your
best friends
not even them
that I have learned
that those
you trough wher
friends
in reality
are enemy
of your world
I have learned that
tomorrow
can be bader then
the worst nightmare
I have learned
that familly
is not allways
happy
all those things
I never would have trough
when
I was a child

when I find
a pic
of myself
a young girl
smiling whit a light
in her eye
and I look to a mirror
I ask the picture
" Wher have you"
" gone?"
" are you still ther"
" inside me?"
touching my heart
and
shows away
the sadness
how I wish
I could be that girl agein

but
when I think about it
when I walk
in the night
is the girl really gone?
I smile
comes to my lips
as I feel the air
stroke my face
as the trough comes
" mayby the wind"
" is a ghost?"
no the girl isnt
really gone
shes still ther
a part of her
the fantasy
is what I have left
making stories
in my head
imagin things
that is not really real
or is it?
who know..
its just a childs dream...
that I know
but thats shows
that the world
have not breaked me
not yet

time will go
and I will beacome
a grow up
and then
time will go to
getting older
and older
to the day
I will leav this world
and more
wishes will come
but one wish
will allways
be the nr. one
and that wish
name is....
" I wish I could be"
" that child"
" again.."

a new poem my inspiration is coming back xD hope you guys understand why I chose those pics...
well this is a poem of myself....just wanted to say that mayby you guys get a pic of how I can be sometimes


Oh my gods!! It was really good >< It was a bit sad, but very honest and truthful. And though I've only been a teenager for less than a year...my life has gone overly dramatic >< I want to go back to believing in everything and knowing nothing at all!! ><
But very good job Yamira-chan!!


Thank you very much ^^
yeah I too whis I could go back to that time.....It was alot more happyer then this life T.T so I know that feeling sinc I have been a teen in years xD


Hehe, I guess that's true. You've been a teen much much MUCH longer than me ^^ And plus, if you act childish now...people think you're immature and it's not very fun lol. And you're welcome ^^
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moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:

when I wher a
child
I could smile
and not think
what will happen
tomorrow
no it was now
like tomorrows worries
never would come
I could let the fantasy go
its own way
in the water
I could see
mearmaids
swimming and loughing
a dragon
flying over
the mountains
and my sister and brother
would be the monsters
wanting to catch me
the hero
in this storie

I wish I could be
that child agein
dreaming
and no care
in the world
play whit my friends
and open the door
to our own
world
but I know
that time has gone
and will never
come back

from child
whit dreams and fantasy
to a teenager
thats the way
we all walk
but I wish I would never walk
that way
just stay ther
in my childhood
place
and never go
to the teenager place

when that time comes
you learn
that you cant trust
everyone
not your
best friends
not even them
that I have learned
that those
you trough wher
friends
in reality
are enemy
of your world
I have learned that
tomorrow
can be bader then
the worst nightmare
I have learned
that familly
is not allways
happy
all those things
I never would have trough
when
I was a child

when I find
a pic
of myself
a young girl
smiling whit a light
in her eye
and I look to a mirror
I ask the picture
" Wher have you"
" gone?"
" are you still ther"
" inside me?"
touching my heart
and
shows away
the sadness
how I wish
I could be that girl agein

but
when I think about it
when I walk
in the night
is the girl really gone?
I smile
comes to my lips
as I feel the air
stroke my face
as the trough comes
" mayby the wind"
" is a ghost?"
no the girl isnt
really gone
shes still ther
a part of her
the fantasy
is what I have left
making stories
in my head
imagin things
that is not really real
or is it?
who know..
its just a childs dream...
that I know
but thats shows
that the world
have not breaked me
not yet

time will go
and I will beacome
a grow up
and then
time will go to
getting older
and older
to the day
I will leav this world
and more
wishes will come
but one wish
will allways
be the nr. one
and that wish
name is....
" I wish I could be"
" that child"
" again.."

a new poem my inspiration is coming back xD hope you guys understand why I chose those pics...
well this is a poem of myself....just wanted to say that mayby you guys get a pic of how I can be sometimes


Oh my gods!! It was really good >< It was a bit sad, but very honest and truthful. And though I've only been a teenager for less than a year...my life has gone overly dramatic >< I want to go back to believing in everything and knowing nothing at all!! ><
But very good job Yamira-chan!!


Thank you very much ^^
yeah I too whis I could go back to that time.....It was alot more happyer then this life T.T so I know that feeling sinc I have been a teen in years xD


Hehe, I guess that's true. You've been a teen much much MUCH longer than me ^^ And plus, if you act childish now...people think you're immature and it's not very fun lol. And you're welcome ^^


well I stoped to be childish long before that if I may say that xD have no idear why but thats how it is some just get adults in their mind little fast but that dosnt mean I cant be childish some time xD
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