Comments on The flavors of bon appetit story.

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*sigh* no comments. and i thought they would comment after the story ended too. i feel like my story id dumb.

what?ur story dumb??i totally disagree!its nice!i kinda like it!!its fantastic for me!xD

JadeMistWolf, I found your story moving. The main character was unusual in that she's not your usual strong heroine. She's flawed and weak and very human. I found that attractive. She had the strength to overcome adversity through Aurora and that was a big plus. I like heroines who grow and mature. She was also a little humorous. The only thing that I was disturbed about was the attempted suicide scene, to be honest. Not because it was a suicide scene, but because it made Chime seem slightly unhinged. I was really relieved that Aurora swooped down in time to save her. Otherwise, a pleasing character.

But maybe you'll be disappointed to know that I was more interested in Aurora as a main character. She had a self-assurance and a confidence that I was drawn to, probably the same way in which Chime was drawn to her. I found her surviving the fire to be surprising in the end. I was a little disappointed that Chime needed rescuing again, but was happy that Aurora was alive.

Thanks for the entertaining read.

Thank you for your well thought out comment I really appreciate that because it's one of very, very, VERY few I got , anyways I agree with your comments and had planned to make the main character the ways she was. And taking into concideration your comment of Aurora as a main character, I've decided to start an after story from Aurora's point of view. so I hope u'll like it.

thanks again for the awesome comment!

What about it did you like?