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Va'athril's Frozen Palace
Type building : Palace Utophia
Place : The top of Mount Va'athril
Size area : 645 acres (still expanding)
Owner : Varinthiael the Dark Prince
Nearest city : Varlandrium Citadel

Buildings, Halls, Rooms and Chambers
* The Throne Hall (the palace heart- administration room)
* Ahndemian Hall (hall of the servant warriors who sealed by the Dark Holy mark)
* Hall of the Disciples (hall consists of rooms for the lesser subordinates)
* Treasury (keeping Ethirs- monetary currency in Vathrulhein)
* Chamber of Crafting (workshop for creating, mielding or crafting artifacts or other magical items)
* The Forbidden Vault (keeping artifacts and Divine Instruments= Super artifacts that can only used or hold by deities)
* Chamber of Chimaera (a 'laboratory' or 'research facility' for create life such as abominations or other creatures)
* Storeroom (keeping supplies or provisions)
* Dungeon (holding prisoners)
* Chamber of Suffering (it's like a torture chamber but not use torture engines, it use spell binding curse on a person and prison it into crystals inside the chamber)
* Soul Prison (a vast chamber consist of huge pillars where it contais the souls that been captured. These spirits are called the "Soul Slaves" because after they were prison inside it, they were bound by darkness, tortured, multilated and enslave it as force labors for development purposes).
* Trap rooms and chambers (for any invaders who sneek up inside the palace, even though; no one has ever survive from these traps, eveerr!- except the subordinates and workers inside the palace)
* Kennels of the Black Hounds (Kennels and cage cells that built for 'sheltering' Tharean and Upherans wolf minions)



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The Revolt in Va'athril (Part 2)

Late dawn in the 8th Domain. The city of Gdarhence, land of Gdanos and his tribe. Their fortified citadel is unbeatable to any siege weapons and bombardments while the citadel's soldiers are preparing their armaments before going for war.
Gdanos and his forces built up camps outside the citadel; only the biggest tent from thousands of it is for their chief. Inside the chief's tent, Gdanos and his two generals discussing about their battle tactics.
"If we put these units here, we can still penetrate them, charge them back and eliminate them..", said one of the generals pointing with a stick at strategy map on the table. Gdanos only staring at the map as he was making to understand but his heart still feel anxious also little worried.
"Must we going straight to the point my chief?", ask one of his generals.
"uh?...yes,yes..i understand your point. Put in orders when we march to Frozen Palace", Gdanos anxiously word make the generals blinking their eyes in confusion and staring each other.
Then a scout suddenly came inside the tent rushly through the chief, bow down before his leader and breath hardly after a rush run. "My chief,...Varinthiael and his army are heading this way...to this city"
"What?!...", the chief's generals shocked that they didn't think the Dark Prince were acting first but Gdanos only silent as he knew it was going to be this way.
"How can this be...how many forces?" ask one of the general who still in shocked.
"Small sir, only few thousand units",
"Hah! how pathetic he is!. Is he really out of his mind?. How do you call that an army?" the other general laugh arrogantly.
"No, we can't underestimate them, even they are in small number, their strength are supreme", the chief's face in serious thought. The generals agreed of what their leader said.
"What shall we do now my chief?"
"Prepare for battle, blow the horns of war, pack the tents up, ready for the armaments and assemble all army!" Gdanos orders for the preparations. One of the guards hastily run to the alert tower. The horn inside the tower was huge, only can be blown by a tough warrior with an outstanding breath.
The horn was blown, following the other horns blowned by the trumpeteers signalling for emergency or alert. All the dwellers inside the citadel heard the alert are rushly get ready with their families and members into a defensive place if were under siege by the enemy. The armies also heard the signal and hastily packing their tents, equipping their weapons and armors, also ready to stand in their position.
Gdanos well equip with shining black armor, helmet and red cloak. His generals is beside him and Gdanos position is the top inside the citadel wall to see the view of his vast army. As they wait for the enemy to come, Gdanos and his generals boost their army's spirit by talking to them about their past glories in war and achievements of their ancestors.
"They're here!!", shout the scout from the lookout tower after saw a horde of army flying and marching through here.
Varinthiael was flying by a jeweled black chariot, chained with a pair of Athrakaels (serpent dragons created by Varinthiael). He's also well equip with violet and dark armor, cloak and a black crown. Accompany him is the twin brothers from the Lycan tribe, Upheran and Tharean * at his back while they are leading few thousands of Ahdemians and Disciples; all are equiped even only holding a weapon.
The Dark Prince's army stop marching only few miles from the enemy's front line. Varinthiael then march himself to confront Gdanos as also he goes to confront the Dark Prince. They stop only a few meters between them, and the both of them only beign silence, staring each other as the wind blows goes by. Then finally Gdanos start to speak, "You're very brave to come here by yourself my lord", a hatred smile on his face.
"You are also very brave Gdanos..for betraying me", Varinthiael smiled with grin.
"I see you bought a 'tiny' troops even without your subordinates", mocking word from Gdanos.
"Oh really, i see your 'ant' army will cause to your downfall", Varinthiael mocking back to Gdanos.
"I will not subjecting or serve to anyone even a god like you, outlander", Gdanos has showing his anger and hatred.
"What can i say, it's all behind the fates. The inferiors only serving to the superiors in this realm".
"Alright then, we settle this once and for all, then we decide who is the superior even than a god" Gdanos challenge to dare the Dark Prince.
"Fine by me, you can't defy the gods" Varinthiael accepted the challenge. The both leaders get back to their position of their army.
who will succeed the war, can the Dark Prince with his small army can defeat the huge army of Gdanos? stay tuned for another story of 'The Revolt in Va'athril'.......(wow..like in a television...)

* the twins connected with the 'Wolf Summoner' story- Bingo book hit list, and still under a continuos story

END OF PART 2
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The Revolt in Va'athril (Part 2)

Late dawn in the 8th Domain. The city of Gdarhence, land of Gdanos and his tribe. Their fortified citadel is unbeatable to any siege weapons and bombardments while the citadel's soldiers are preparing their armaments before going for war.
Gdanos and his forces built up camps outside the citadel; only the biggest tent from thousands of it is for their chief. Inside the chief's tent, Gdanos and his two generals discussing about their battle tactics.
"If we put these units here, we can still penetrate them, charge them back and eliminate them..", said one of the generals pointing with a stick at strategy map on the table. Gdanos only staring at the map as he was making to understand but his heart still feel anxious also little worried.
"Must we going straight to the point my chief?", ask one of his generals.
"uh?...yes,yes..i understand your point. Put in orders when we march to Frozen Palace", Gdanos anxiously word make the generals blinking their eyes in confusion and staring each other.
Then a scout suddenly came inside the tent rushly through the chief, bow down before his leader and breath hardly after a rush run. "My chief,...Varinthiael and his army are heading this way...to this city"
"What?!...", the chief's generals shocked that they didn't think the Dark Prince were acting first but Gdanos only silent as he knew it was going to be this way.
"How can this be...how many forces?" ask one of the general who still in shocked.
"Small sir, only few thousand units",
"Hah! how pathetic he is!. Is he really out of his mind?. How do you call that an army?" the other general laugh arrogantly.
"No, we can't underestimate them, even they are in small number, their strength are supreme", the chief's face in serious thought. The generals agreed of what their leader said.
"What shall we do now my chief?"
"Prepare for battle, blow the horns of war, pack the tents up, ready for the armaments and assemble all army!" Gdanos orders for the preparations. One of the guards hastily run to the alert tower. The horn inside the tower was huge, only can be blown by a tough warrior with an outstanding breath.
The horn was blown, following the other horns blowned by the trumpeteers signalling for emergency or alert. All the dwellers inside the citadel heard the alert are rushly get ready with their families and members into a defensive place if were under siege by the enemy. The armies also heard the signal and hastily packing their tents, equipping their weapons and armors, also ready to stand in their position.
Gdanos well equip with shining black armor, helmet and red cloak. His generals is beside him and Gdanos position is the top inside the citadel wall to see the view of his vast army. As they wait for the enemy to come, Gdanos and his generals boost their army's spirit by talking to them about their past glories in war and achievements of their ancestors.
"They're here!!", shout the scout from the lookout tower after saw a horde of army flying and marching through here.
Varinthiael was flying by a jeweled black chariot, chained with a pair of Athrakaels (serpent dragons created by Varinthiael). He's also well equip with violet and dark armor, cloak and a black crown. Accompany him is the twin brothers from the Lycan tribe, Upheran and Tharean * at his back while they are leading few thousands of Ahdemians and Disciples; all are equiped even only holding a weapon.
The Dark Prince's army stop marching only few miles from the enemy's front line. Varinthiael then march himself to confront Gdanos as also he goes to confront the Dark Prince. They stop only a few meters between them, and the both of them only beign silence, staring each other as the wind blows goes by. Then finally Gdanos start to speak, "You're very brave to come here by yourself my lord", a hatred smile on his face.
"You are also very brave Gdanos..for betraying me", Varinthiael smiled with grin.
"I see you bought a 'tiny' troops even without your subordinates", mocking word from Gdanos.
"Oh really, i see your 'ant' army will cause to your downfall", Varinthiael mocking back to Gdanos.
"I will not subjecting or serve to anyone even a god like you, outlander", Gdanos has showing his anger and hatred.
"What can i say, it's all behind the fates. The inferiors only serving to the superiors in this realm".
"Alright then, we settle this once and for all, then we decide who is the superior even than a god" Gdanos challenge to dare the Dark Prince.
"Fine by me, you can't defy the gods" Varinthiael accepted the challenge. The both leaders get back to their position to their army.
who will succeed the war, can the Dark Prince with his small army can defeat the huge army of Gdanos? stay tuned for another story of 'The Revolt in Va'athril'.......(wow..like in a television...)

* the twins connected with the 'Wolf Summoner' story- Bingo book hit list, and still under a continuos story

END OF PART 2


Very nice man keep it up i look foward to reading more ^^
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The Revolt in Va'athril (Part 2)

Late dawn in the 8th Domain. The city of Gdarhence, land of Gdanos and his tribe. Their fortified citadel is unbeatable to any siege weapons and bombardments while the citadel's soldiers are preparing their armaments before going for war.
Gdanos and his forces built up camps outside the citadel; only the biggest tent from thousands of it is for their chief. Inside the chief's tent, Gdanos and his two generals discussing about their battle tactics.
"If we put these units here, we can still penetrate them, charge them back and eliminate them..", said one of the generals pointing with a stick at strategy map on the table. Gdanos only staring at the map as he was making to understand but his heart still feel anxious also little worried.
"Must we going straight to the point my chief?", ask one of his generals.
"uh?...yes,yes..i understand your point. Put in orders when we march to Frozen Palace", Gdanos anxiously word make the generals blinking their eyes in confusion and staring each other.
Then a scout suddenly came inside the tent rushly through the chief, bow down before his leader and breath hardly after a rush run. "My chief,...Varinthiael and his army are heading this way...to this city"
"What?!...", the chief's generals shocked that they didn't think the Dark Prince were acting first but Gdanos only silent as he knew it was going to be this way.
"How can this be...how many forces?" ask one of the general who still in shocked.
"Small sir, only few thousand units",
"Hah! how pathetic he is!. Is he really out of his mind?. How do you call that an army?" the other general laugh arrogantly.
"No, we can't underestimate them, even they are in small number, their strength are supreme", the chief's face in serious thought. The generals agreed of what their leader said.
"What shall we do now my chief?"
"Prepare for battle, blow the horns of war, pack the tents up, ready for the armaments and assemble all army!" Gdanos orders for the preparations. One of the guards hastily run to the alert tower. The horn inside the tower was huge, only can be blown by a tough warrior with an outstanding breath.
The horn was blown, following the other horns blowned by the trumpeteers signalling for emergency or alert. All the dwellers inside the citadel heard the alert are rushly get ready with their families and members into a defensive place if were under siege by the enemy. The armies also heard the signal and hastily packing their tents, equipping their weapons and armors, also ready to stand in their position.
Gdanos well equip with shining black armor, helmet and red cloak. His generals is beside him and Gdanos position is the top inside the citadel wall to see the view of his vast army. As they wait for the enemy to come, Gdanos and his generals boost their army's spirit by talking to them about their past glories in war and achievements of their ancestors.
"They're here!!", shout the scout from the lookout tower after saw a horde of army flying and marching through here.
Varinthiael was flying by a jeweled black chariot, chained with a pair of Athrakaels (serpent dragons created by Varinthiael). He's also well equip with violet and dark armor, cloak and a black crown. Accompany him is the twin brothers from the Lycan tribe, Upheran and Tharean * at his back while they are leading few thousands of Ahdemians and Disciples; all are equiped even only holding a weapon.
The Dark Prince's army stop marching only few miles from the enemy's front line. Varinthiael then march himself to confront Gdanos as also he goes to confront the Dark Prince. They stop only a few meters between them, and the both of them only beign silence, staring each other as the wind blows goes by. Then finally Gdanos start to speak, "You're very brave to come here by yourself my lord", a hatred smile on his face.
"You are also very brave Gdanos..for betraying me", Varinthiael smiled with grin.
"I see you bought a 'tiny' troops even without your subordinates", mocking word from Gdanos.
"Oh really, i see your 'ant' army will cause to your downfall", Varinthiael mocking back to Gdanos.
"I will not subjecting or serve to anyone even a god like you, outlander", Gdanos has showing his anger and hatred.
"What can i say, it's all behind the fates. The inferiors only serving to the superiors in this realm".
"Alright then, we settle this once and for all, then we decide who is the superior even than a god" Gdanos challenge to dare the Dark Prince.
"Fine by me, you can't defy the gods" Varinthiael accepted the challenge. The both leaders get back to their position to their army.
who will succeed the war, can the Dark Prince with his small army can defeat the huge army of Gdanos? stay tuned for another story of 'The Revolt in Va'athril'.......(wow..like in a television...)

* the twins connected with the 'Wolf Summoner' story- Bingo book hit list, and still under a continuos story

END OF PART 2


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thanx y'all, i'm getting forward to it...
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Conversations between Lythammos and Tharean

Inside the Hall of the Disciples, Tharean reading a scroll in his office. Then Lythammos came inside with a rudely attitude.
Lythammos : "Hey Wolf Summoner, Svactimael wants to see you.."(arrogantly)
Tharean : "Do not call me that, i have a name. And also, can you please be so kind to knock the door first before
entering?"
Lythammos : "Who cares *hmph*, i'm the first lieutenant here, don't try to advice me."
Tharean : "You are only one of the 4 lieutenants to the Dark Prince, Lythammos, i dont care about it", (a little disgusted)
Lythammos : "Oh yeah?, your'e only a lowly servant, Wolf Summoner. i'm the most beloved by the Dark Prince" (a little
angry)
Tharean : "You are the most beloved by the Dark Prince and i'm his lesser servant, but think once if in your life on earth
even in this life you aren't be chosen as the "beloved of the Dark Prince", you'll end up to be a lowly servant or
even lower than that *small laugh*"
Lythammos : "Are you insulting me?*angry*"
Tharean : "Maybe not, maybe yes..*mocking smile*"
Lythammos : "Are you trying to challege me?"
Tharean :"No, i'm a humble servant trying, to 'please' the master's subordinate's rudeness. If you want too, be my guess"
The both rivals start showing their aura but suddenly stop by Ardhelael who just came inside.
Ardhelael : "What are you both doing?!, what's happening here?" (confuse but understand about the both's
attitude)
Tharean :"Apology my excellency, for my rudeness" (control off his aura)
Lythammos :"Nothing.."(also control off his aura)
Ardhelael : "I'ts better be you two. Tharean, be respect to your upper subordinate. And you too Lytham, don't be so
proudly about yourself to the lesser officers. If you do that again, i'll complain to Avithan (Avithanas)"
Lythammos : "Yeah, yeah.." (boring and little disgust)
Ardelael : "Lytham, you can go back now. Tharean, you come with me, Svactimael wants to see you."
Tharean :"Yes your excellency.."
Lythammos : "Hmm..(sign of agreed)"






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Syrlathan

Real Name : Ru'ul Syrlathas avalde Va'athril
Other Name : Syrlan, Syrlael, Syrlathos, Syrlathan
Name Meaning : "Hurricane of Darkness"
Type : Hybrid (half winged humanoid/ half god)
Age :about more than 700 years
Deity Race : The Vargicans or 'the Exiled Ones'
Level Divine : 47 Divine
Title or rank given : "The Messenger of the Dark Prince", "Envoy of the behalf of Va'athril"
Powers or elements used : Darkness, Water and Astral (Light) element.
Special powers/ Great powers : Dark Holy, Wave of Yami, Flood of Souls, Mass Capture
Weapons Used : The Va'athril Scepter (Divine Instrument created by Varinthiael and give to Syrlathan for his services), The Communication Amulet (a jeweled amuled have the power to communicate from the Dark Prince to his subordinates).
Info : Syrlathan is the first hybrid servant created by Varinthiael after Lythammos. Syrlathan was a Flyer or called the Xelvarthars, winged humans who live in the southern realm of Vathrulhein. He was offered immortality by the Dark Prince as an exchange he must serve and total alligience. His fear and 'lowly' rank to his master makes him one of the Five Dark Disciples of the Throne Hall (Counsil member)
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The Revolt in Va'athril (Part 3)

As the Dark Prince stop in his position infront of his army, he yell out;"My servants of Va'athril!, this is the day, the day that you all prove your oath, your loyalty, your submission to me!.Don't fear them. Do not tremble of their power. We are strong!, Your strength equals to a thousand enemies. Crush them!, Eliminate them!. Slaughter them as sacrifice for me!. Hear my servants, bring darkness glory to Frozen Palace!. Bring swift wrath to all who oppose Va'athril!!".
Tharean shout, "All praise to the Dark Prince!". All the troops praise with valor and unity;
"Arum del Delanhein (By darkness thy Fallen One),
Arum va'ash del Aelanhein (By darkness thy Fallen Prince),
Isvect arum Thavash gim (Be fallen o Lonely Lord),
Il Dalenth va'ash Ardhein ! (And darkness prevail thy prince)".
After a spiritual boost, Varinthiael give orders to the Lycan twins, Tharean and Upheran; "Don't forget the strategy i told you.."
"Yes my lord", the both twins said in unity.
At the top of the citadel wall, one of Gdanos generals felt curious about the enemy's army; "Hey, did you see something weird about the enemy's army?". The other general said, "Yes i see, it seems to me that their soldiers dosen't carry anything, siege weapons, ammos or other armaments. Only they carry basic weapons but not all equip it...". The general who ask then replied, "hmm *anxious*..i feel that my heart feared not to the Dark Prince's army but himself ", there's something ill omen for the both generals about this battle.
The weather in the battlefield and the citadel became dark even it was daytime and Gdanos army try to alight the torches but the weather keep shrouded with dark clouds and became more darker until Gdanos army unable to see around them even their enemies. This make the soldiers a little panic and confusion.
"Stay in your positions!", Gdanos ordered their troops to stay calm although he also feel uneasy. An aura caught Gdanos attention and his eyes attract through the Dark Prince.
Varinthiael magically show his Laenacranth (look at his biodata ) at his right hand. As the Dark Prince swing his sword upward, a signal has been ordered. The troops of Ahndemians split into two groups and the first group floating up in the air about a hundred feet and pointing their right hands to their target. One of the captain shout ,"Ready!!". The troops then begin to energize their fist with aura where red light from their hands alight like an orb. Gdanos army saw the the enemy's action are frighten and wonder of what would they react next. They also step backward because of fear.
The Dark Prince with proudly pointing his sword to Gdanos troops as sign of attack. The captain of the first group shout, "Fire!!".
All units of the first group release their magic orb and hit through the citadel walls, I't a bombardment. The walls exploded and cracking, falling down to Gdanos back line groups.Gdanos army tremble with chaos and terror. They flee in scattering panic, but Gdanos front and middle lined groups still in their position.
The Gdarhence archers up of the citadel walls that doesn't been hit by the bombardments run into another formation.They begin to use their magical bows for firing. Gdanos general shout, "Fire!", the archers shoot their arrows upward through the enemy's bombarding units. They're shocked that their hitting arrows are blocked by an enchanting barrier.The archers continue to shoot but still blocked by Varinthiael's magic barrier at the bombarding units.
Varinthiael show his another tactic by swing his sword at his right. The second group of the Ahndemians also do the same thing of what the first group did but when the Dark Prince pointing back his sword to the enemies, the troops release their magic arrows through gdanos soldiers.Gdanos units fall and slain after been hit by the enemy's deadly arrows. Gdanos quickly shout, "Shields!!". The soldiers use their magical shields to block the enemy's arrows but unfortunately their shields are useless when the magic arrows hit through inside their sheilds and thus hit their bodies. Gdanos units fall one by one, again and again.
Gdanos can't wait any longer and start advance, "Attack!!!". All the soldiers in the back start advance and run to their opponents. But before they were close to the Dark Prince's army,Varinthiael only smiled, knows that Gdanos army has fallen his trap.
The Dark Prince swing his sword upward and shout "Disciples, attack!!!". the disciple units advance through the invading army, and the battle begins. The Dark Disciples are really strong compared to Gdanos soldiers, each hit and slashing by the disciples slain several units. And the most terrifying is their brutality and lust of blood upon their enemies. After several hours, bombardments after bombardments, arrows versus magic arrows and one fallen after one fallen, Gdanos army became less and less. Surprisingly, Varinthiael's army dosen't have any causalities, only few units were in small injured. Gdanos tremble and fear begin to flood in his heart, thus also full of hatred to the Dark Prince. many of his soldiers also flee, panic with the chaotic scene also many of them are flee and take refuge inside the ruined citadel.
This makes an opportunity for the Dark Prince to act his secret weapon upon Gdanos armies. The secret weapon is...............

to be continued..

END OF PART 3
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'Jannas

Real Name : Ru'ul 'Jannes avalde Va'athril
Other Name : 'Jannas, 'Jannos, 'Jannes
Name Meaning : "Fighter of Darkness"
Type : Demi-god
Age :about more than 500 years
Deity Race : The Vargicans or 'the Exiled Ones'
Level Divine : 44 Divine
Title or rank given : "The Grand General of Va'athril", Commander of the Forces of Varinthiael", "Torturer of Soul Slaves"
Powers or elements used : Darkness and Astral (Light) element.
Special powers/ Great powers : Dark Holy, Aeranium Blast, Rain of Destruction, Arennor Varvalum (summoning magic)
Weapons Used : Va'athril Twin Blades (Artifact created by Varinthiael and give to 'Jannas for his services), Cloak of Shadows (Artifact where the user who equips it became invisible and can't be seen to any mortals)
Info : 'Jannas are once an exiled warrior from his homeland Aegathur because of his treason against the former elders of his tribe. He's agony, vain, devastated and deeply wounded of his depression, he trying to kill himself until Varinthiael shown up and offer him immortality as an exchange for his absolute service. He is the one of the Five Dark Disciples of the Throne Hall (counsil member).
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The Revolt in Va'athril Part 4

"Tharean, go...",Varinthiael ordered
"With pleasure my lord", Tharean's lust smile for battle. Tharean's aura set alight from his body, energizing his powers.
"Are you ready my brother?" Tharean ask his twin brother Upheran who was ready to fight together.
"Just like the old times..", also smiled of sensation. Upheran also energize up his powers. Tharen then bowing his head as he chanting something, while his brother do the same. Tharean shout and cast a spell. "BY THE POWERS OF DARKNESS, MOON ARISE AND ECLIPSE FALL, I CALL THE SPIRITS OF THE BLACK HOUNDS, COME TO ME AND DO MY BIDING!!!". Tharean pointing his right hand up to the sky.
A huge light shown in a form of a symbol at the ground from Tharean's feet. A dozen of black-comet like smokes coming up from the symbol floor where each of it has glowing red eyes. The smokes howling and swirling around Tharean.
"I CALL THEE MINIONS OF THE HELL SENTINELS, COME OUT!, POSSESS THE DECEASED ENEMIES,ARISE AND BECOME THE WOLVES OF THE FALLEN DEAD!", Tharean's spell makes the cloud above him opens a whirlhole and a swarm of other black-comet like smokes coming down to earth, consume every corpses in the battlefield. The smokes posses the corpses by getting inside of the opening mouth or nose of the deceased.
" After a while, The enemy's corpses rise from their deaths while their skin all over their bodies are torn down until a browny black fur appeared. Their faces also changes, from long nose, pointy ears, sharp claws and fangs. Their blood eyes marking that they are possessed. The deceased become into werewolves.
"What's happening?!", one of Gdanos soldiers terrifiedto see their comrades turned into abominations. Gdanos then quickly ordered "Kill them, kill them!!" Gdanos also terrified of what he saw . The werewolves start slaughtering Gdanos army in i'ts path.
While Upheran in other hand, begin to show his mutation. A huge light in a form of a symbol also appeared at his feet. He open his eyes, blue-glowing eyes shown his ferocious reaction. His body were rip out with his claws while a silver white fur appeared from his ripped skin. Upheran's hands and feet growing with long sharp claws and his tough body begin to full with hair. He transform into his werewolf form and start to howl loudly to fear his enemies. He also can't wait to devour them.
Gdanos soldiers were brutally slained by Upheran's werewolf form. As the soldiers try to fight back or flee from him, it was to late because of Upherans vigorous speed and lust of flesh. Upheran's now intention is the Gdarhence Cheif, Gdanos. Gdanos who was only a few hundred metres from him, petrified and paralyse to see Upheran are coming to get him.
"Stand back my chief!!", the two generals quickly step forward infront of his leader , pointing their weapons to defend their chief. "Go back to the citadel, save the people and flee from Gdarhence now!, we both handle this creature,".
"You both can't do this on your own, let me help you, we can defeat th-"
" Gdanos!", one of his generals interrupt his leader, annoyed of what their chief said.
"My chief, we are honored for your support, we are grateful for serving under you, but we all in grave danger now, you are our leader, our chief. You must responsible for your people. Do not care about us here. Save your life and your people. Save the lives of Gdarhence!" Upheran are now getting closer to his victim.
"Go now my chief! Let us kill this creature, yeahh!!", the both generals advance to deal with upheran.
"Both of you...", Gdanos only staring his loyal subjects fighting with their enemies. He only step backward, still petrified and doesn't want to flee.
One of Gdanos general hit his weapon to Upheran's back but quickly evade. Luck shines on the other general when he srtike his spear and stab Upheran's abdomen.
"What? my magic spear can't stab this beast?!!" The spear that he stab doesn't wounded Upheran.Upheran slash his claws at general's chest, the general fall with heavily wounded. The general grief in pain and agony.
"You damn beast!!!" the other general start to strike with his sword. It was useless, Upheran then counter attack by grabing the general's arm and bite the neck by ripping him off. How brutal he is thus throwing the weakling general grief in death.
Horrified on Gdanos eyes to see his generals are in pain of death. His rage reach to climax while he vow to take revenge of his dead generals. Gdanos advance and strike to attack Upheran. When he close to Upheran, the werewolf quickly grab Gdanos's striking hand and ready to slash Gdanos face.
"Stop Upheran. Don't kill him" Varinthiael suddenly ordered to stop killing. Upheran only growling as he throw Gdanos to the ground. Gdanos only paralyze with fear that he was'nt to be killed.
"Well, well, well...it looks like the result has been made, i win this 'competition' Gdanos..", the Dark Prince smile proudly. Gdanos only beign silence, fear mixing with hatred.
"Just surrender Gdanos, you can't defy me..."
"No..the battle not over yet...i can't lose to you!!", Gdanos stand up, and wielding his spear in front of the Dark Prince.
"My, my Gdanos, you pointing your weapon infront of me?" the Dark Prince laugh.
"Why are you laughing?, outlander!" Gdanos annoyed and hate to Varinthiael.
"Look around you... you and what army now?", Gdanos's eyes only look around the battlefield. His men laying dead, even in grief of pain. And most shame of all is that his own army left him behind, running cowardly to hide inside the citadel.
"Look Gdanos, i can forgive you if you repent and submit to me.." Varinthiael giving his 'sympathy' to Gdanos.
"With the hell with you!!" Gdanos anger still didn't want to surrender.
"Gdanos, Gdanoss....your rock-headed stubborn anoyying me, still with your own spirit to defying me. Your soldiers are lost, even they left you. What loyalty is THAT?!", the Dark Prince insulting Gdanos. Gdanos only silent.
"Only fear and absolute submission is the way of loyalty, trust is the second way but i'ts weak in this realm. Then peace shall gained" Varinthiael continue his words.
"Oh really, that is why your men become your 'dogs' eh, doing all your 'godly' jobs.." Gdanos mocking smile.
"heh heh, even you call it 'dogs', i'ts really mean that your loyal subjects also 'dogs' after they were serving me.."
"What the hell are you talking about?" Gdanos confuse of what the Dark Prince said.
"Look at your two loyal generals..." Varinthiael pointing to Gdanos dead generals.
"Upheran, do it now," the Dark Prince orders Upheran who still in werewolf form to do something.Upheran then howls with a horrified voice that makes the scene of the battlefield became darker.
"Look closely Gdanos..." Varinthiael demonstrate to Gdanos

END OF PART 4
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man . . . I only can say one thing . . . . u are GOOD at this . . . keep up the good work ~
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arikabella wrote:

man . . . I only can say one thing . . . . u are GOOD at this . . . keep up the good work ~


i agree
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arikabella wrote:

man . . . I only can say one thing . . . . u are GOOD at this . . . keep up the good work ~




thanx for ur comments, i'm keeping up to make interesting stories, wait for my last story part in the Revolt in Va'athril ok
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