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When I see the
rain
falling down
feeling t coldness
a it run down myface
the one thing
that crosses my mind
is this
tears that angels
let fall
to us pity humans?
we who destroy all those things
that the lord
gave us

when I think
about it
havent we destoyed
the lords trust
in us?

lisning
to the news from
around the world
things being destroyed
and
pepole being killed
thats all
that I see latly
problem after problem
we asking
how did it happen
I just want to hide
in my room
hiding under the blanked
as I would do
when I was
a child
just waiting
for the tunder
and the storm
go away
and wake up
to sunshine
but I know
just as when we wher
children
sometimes
the storm just countiue
and this
that happning in the world
will countiue
for how long...
longer then the badest storm
and mayby
it will stop
but mayby
its to late for us
to see
the sunshine

I feel the rain
soak me
but
I wont go
I will just stand her
and think
if this really
are tears
of angels
why do they cry them
are they
crying
to show us
what we are doing inside of us
showing it
what we
cant show
I cant really tell

Im just a human
just a little
human
ageins so many
I have
lost my way to god
but I know
that I will do one thing
that god
wanted us all to do
I will not fight
I will not make enemies
I will try
to live a life of peace

all pepole
want it
the peac
even if they dont say
they want it
they want the endless fight
to stop
its meaningless
killing
to diseapear

but
one more thing
that I will do
and
made
want this victorie
even if it just
my fantasy
i dont want this rain
thats falls down on me
to wast away
I dont want
to wast away...
the angels tears

I should be study for my relgion and music test for tomorrow ....but I dont have the consentration >.< it sucks!!!!
Im not sure how this come up in my mind but I have trough about it when I was younger...
Posted 3/31/08
great poem yamira! XD....my fave part is the last paragraph I love the ending =3
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Posted 3/31/08

kagura4 wrote:

great poem yamira! XD....my fave part is the last paragraph I love the ending =3


That was an excellent poem!!! i agree with kagura4
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Yamira wrote:

When I see the
rain
falling down
feeling t coldness
a it run down myface
the one thing
that crosses my mind
is this
tears that angels
let fall
to us pity humans?
we who destroy all those things
that the lord
gave us

when I think
about it
havent we destoyed
the lords trust
in us?

lisning
to the news from
around the world
things being destroyed
and
pepole being killed
thats all
that I see latly
problem after problem
we asking
how did it happen
I just want to hide
in my room
hiding under the blanked
as I would do
when I was
a child
just waiting
for the tunder
and the storm
go away
and wake up
to sunshine
but I know
just as when we wher
children
sometimes
the storm just countiue
and this
that happning in the world
will countiue
for how long...
longer then the badest storm
and mayby
it will stop
but mayby
its to late for us
to see
the sunshine

I feel the rain
soak me
but
I wont go
I will just stand her
and think
if this really
are tears
of angels
why do they cry them
are they
crying
to show us
what we are doing inside of us
showing it
what we
cant show
I cant really tell

Im just a human
just a little
human
ageins so many
I have
lost my way to god
but I know
that I will do one thing
that god
wanted us all to do
I will not fight
I will not make enemies
I will try
to live a life of peace

all pepole
want it
the peac
even if they dont say
they want it
they want the endless fight
to stop
its meaningless
killing
to diseapear

but
one more thing
that I will do
and
made
want this victorie
even if it just
my fantasy
i dont want this rain
thats falls down on me
to wast away
I dont want
to wast away...
the angels tears

I should be study for my relgion and music test for tomorrow ....but I dont have the consentration >.< it sucks!!!!
Im not sure how this come up in my mind but I have trough about it when I was younger...


I agree with both Kagura and Mutoku!! It was a really good poem >< And I liked the last part the best too >< And I really like the title!! I hope you do well on your music and religion test tomorrow ><
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kagura4 wrote:

great poem yamira! XD....my fave part is the last paragraph I love the ending =3


Thank you ^^ *reads the ending* yeah I must agree whit you guys ^^
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mutoku wrote:


kagura4 wrote:

great poem yamira! XD....my fave part is the last paragraph I love the ending =3


That was an excellent poem!!! i agree with kagura4


thank you very very much ^^
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moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:

When I see the
rain
falling down
feeling t coldness
a it run down myface
the one thing
that crosses my mind
is this
tears that angels
let fall
to us pity humans?
we who destroy all those things
that the lord
gave us

when I think
about it
havent we destoyed
the lords trust
in us?

lisning
to the news from
around the world
things being destroyed
and
pepole being killed
thats all
that I see latly
problem after problem
we asking
how did it happen
I just want to hide
in my room
hiding under the blanked
as I would do
when I was
a child
just waiting
for the tunder
and the storm
go away
and wake up
to sunshine
but I know
just as when we wher
children
sometimes
the storm just countiue
and this
that happning in the world
will countiue
for how long...
longer then the badest storm
and mayby
it will stop
but mayby
its to late for us
to see
the sunshine

I feel the rain
soak me
but
I wont go
I will just stand her
and think
if this really
are tears
of angels
why do they cry them
are they
crying
to show us
what we are doing inside of us
showing it
what we
cant show
I cant really tell

Im just a human
just a little
human
ageins so many
I have
lost my way to god
but I know
that I will do one thing
that god
wanted us all to do
I will not fight
I will not make enemies
I will try
to live a life of peace

all pepole
want it
the peac
even if they dont say
they want it
they want the endless fight
to stop
its meaningless
killing
to diseapear

but
one more thing
that I will do
and
made
want this victorie
even if it just
my fantasy
i dont want this rain
thats falls down on me
to wast away
I dont want
to wast away...
the angels tears

I should be study for my relgion and music test for tomorrow ....but I dont have the consentration >.< it sucks!!!!
Im not sure how this come up in my mind but I have trough about it when I was younger...


I agree with both Kagura and Mutoku!! It was a really good poem >< And I liked the last part the best too >< And I really like the title!! I hope you do well on your music and religion test tomorrow ><


glad you liked the poem and the titel ^^
and thanks for the luck but I didnt need it I got a fever and Im really sick not sure if I will go to school tomorrow..
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Posted 4/2/08

Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:

When I see the
rain
falling down
feeling t coldness
a it run down myface
the one thing
that crosses my mind
is this
tears that angels
let fall
to us pity humans?
we who destroy all those things
that the lord
gave us

when I think
about it
havent we destoyed
the lords trust
in us?

lisning
to the news from
around the world
things being destroyed
and
pepole being killed
thats all
that I see latly
problem after problem
we asking
how did it happen
I just want to hide
in my room
hiding under the blanked
as I would do
when I was
a child
just waiting
for the tunder
and the storm
go away
and wake up
to sunshine
but I know
just as when we wher
children
sometimes
the storm just countiue
and this
that happning in the world
will countiue
for how long...
longer then the badest storm
and mayby
it will stop
but mayby
its to late for us
to see
the sunshine

I feel the rain
soak me
but
I wont go
I will just stand her
and think
if this really
are tears
of angels
why do they cry them
are they
crying
to show us
what we are doing inside of us
showing it
what we
cant show
I cant really tell

Im just a human
just a little
human
ageins so many
I have
lost my way to god
but I know
that I will do one thing
that god
wanted us all to do
I will not fight
I will not make enemies
I will try
to live a life of peace

all pepole
want it
the peac
even if they dont say
they want it
they want the endless fight
to stop
its meaningless
killing
to diseapear

but
one more thing
that I will do
and
made
want this victorie
even if it just
my fantasy
i dont want this rain
thats falls down on me
to wast away
I dont want
to wast away...
the angels tears

I should be study for my relgion and music test for tomorrow ....but I dont have the consentration >.< it sucks!!!!
Im not sure how this come up in my mind but I have trough about it when I was younger...


I agree with both Kagura and Mutoku!! It was a really good poem >< And I liked the last part the best too >< And I really like the title!! I hope you do well on your music and religion test tomorrow ><


glad you liked the poem and the titel ^^
and thanks for the luck but I didnt need it I got a fever and Im really sick not sure if I will go to school tomorrow..


Well, that's lots of luck >< But I hope you feel better soon!! Although you're really lucky....but we should all wish you well if you're suck ^^
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moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:

When I see the
rain
falling down
feeling t coldness
a it run down myface
the one thing
that crosses my mind
is this
tears that angels
let fall
to us pity humans?
we who destroy all those things
that the lord
gave us

when I think
about it
havent we destoyed
the lords trust
in us?

lisning
to the news from
around the world
things being destroyed
and
pepole being killed
thats all
that I see latly
problem after problem
we asking
how did it happen
I just want to hide
in my room
hiding under the blanked
as I would do
when I was
a child
just waiting
for the tunder
and the storm
go away
and wake up
to sunshine
but I know
just as when we wher
children
sometimes
the storm just countiue
and this
that happning in the world
will countiue
for how long...
longer then the badest storm
and mayby
it will stop
but mayby
its to late for us
to see
the sunshine

I feel the rain
soak me
but
I wont go
I will just stand her
and think
if this really
are tears
of angels
why do they cry them
are they
crying
to show us
what we are doing inside of us
showing it
what we
cant show
I cant really tell

Im just a human
just a little
human
ageins so many
I have
lost my way to god
but I know
that I will do one thing
that god
wanted us all to do
I will not fight
I will not make enemies
I will try
to live a life of peace

all pepole
want it
the peac
even if they dont say
they want it
they want the endless fight
to stop
its meaningless
killing
to diseapear

but
one more thing
that I will do
and
made
want this victorie
even if it just
my fantasy
i dont want this rain
thats falls down on me
to wast away
I dont want
to wast away...
the angels tears

I should be study for my relgion and music test for tomorrow ....but I dont have the consentration >.< it sucks!!!!
Im not sure how this come up in my mind but I have trough about it when I was younger...


I agree with both Kagura and Mutoku!! It was a really good poem >< And I liked the last part the best too >< And I really like the title!! I hope you do well on your music and religion test tomorrow ><


glad you liked the poem and the titel ^^
and thanks for the luck but I didnt need it I got a fever and Im really sick not sure if I will go to school tomorrow..


Well, that's lots of luck >< But I hope you feel better soon!! Although you're really lucky....but we should all wish you well if you're suck ^^


thank you very much ^^ yeah I was a little lucky ther xD but it can look like im going to be sick next week too T.T
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Posted 4/4/08

Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:

When I see the
rain
falling down
feeling t coldness
a it run down myface
the one thing
that crosses my mind
is this
tears that angels
let fall
to us pity humans?
we who destroy all those things
that the lord
gave us

when I think
about it
havent we destoyed
the lords trust
in us?

lisning
to the news from
around the world
things being destroyed
and
pepole being killed
thats all
that I see latly
problem after problem
we asking
how did it happen
I just want to hide
in my room
hiding under the blanked
as I would do
when I was
a child
just waiting
for the tunder
and the storm
go away
and wake up
to sunshine
but I know
just as when we wher
children
sometimes
the storm just countiue
and this
that happning in the world
will countiue
for how long...
longer then the badest storm
and mayby
it will stop
but mayby
its to late for us
to see
the sunshine

I feel the rain
soak me
but
I wont go
I will just stand her
and think
if this really
are tears
of angels
why do they cry them
are they
crying
to show us
what we are doing inside of us
showing it
what we
cant show
I cant really tell

Im just a human
just a little
human
ageins so many
I have
lost my way to god
but I know
that I will do one thing
that god
wanted us all to do
I will not fight
I will not make enemies
I will try
to live a life of peace

all pepole
want it
the peac
even if they dont say
they want it
they want the endless fight
to stop
its meaningless
killing
to diseapear

but
one more thing
that I will do
and
made
want this victorie
even if it just
my fantasy
i dont want this rain
thats falls down on me
to wast away
I dont want
to wast away...
the angels tears

I should be study for my relgion and music test for tomorrow ....but I dont have the consentration >.< it sucks!!!!
Im not sure how this come up in my mind but I have trough about it when I was younger...


I agree with both Kagura and Mutoku!! It was a really good poem >< And I liked the last part the best too >< And I really like the title!! I hope you do well on your music and religion test tomorrow ><


glad you liked the poem and the titel ^^
and thanks for the luck but I didnt need it I got a fever and Im really sick not sure if I will go to school tomorrow..


Well, that's lots of luck >< But I hope you feel better soon!! Although you're really lucky....but we should all wish you well if you're suck ^^


thank you very much ^^ yeah I was a little lucky ther xD but it can look like im going to be sick next week too T.T


Oh o.O Wow~!! Well...hope you feel better soon lol
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*speechless*
I agree with both kagura4 and mutoku
nice poem!!
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*speechless*
I agree with both kagura4 and mutoku
nice poem!!


Thank you tanky very much ^^
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i love ur poem ^_____^
so good
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LeSLy77 wrote:

i love ur poem ^_____^
so good


Thank you very much I glad you liked it ^^
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