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Posted 3/31/08 , edited 3/31/08
I'm alone, away in the dark.
My fears have left such a great mark.
People say goodbye
but I will never cry.
When no one is there by my side,
I see the world at a darker side.
There’s a thin string holding your life
But I hold onto the rope which connects to mine
You can do what you want,
But you can’t shake me
Sticks and stones will never break me
All you do is listen to the radio
You never pay attention to the scenario
I try so hard
Because I know I can never let it go
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Posted 3/31/08

mutoku wrote:

I'm alone, away in the dark.
My fears have left such a great mark.
People say goodbye
but I will never cry.
When no one is there by my side,
I see the world at a darker side.
There’s a thin string holding your life
But I hold onto the rope which connects to mine
You can do what you want,
But you can’t shake me
Sticks and stones will never break me
All you do is listen to the radio
You never pay attention to the scenario
I try so hard
Because I know I can never let it go


Awww, it was sooo cute!! And really really good!!! And the title is the best
Posted 3/31/08
Awesome pome mutoku!
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kagura4 wrote:

Awesome pome mutoku!


Thnx!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted 4/1/08

mutoku wrote:

I'm alone, away in the dark.
My fears have left such a great mark.
People say goodbye
but I will never cry.
When no one is there by my side,
I see the world at a darker side.
There’s a thin string holding your life
But I hold onto the rope which connects to mine
You can do what you want,
But you can’t shake me
Sticks and stones will never break me
All you do is listen to the radio
You never pay attention to the scenario
I try so hard
Because I know I can never let it go


really great poem ^^ your really good in making cute poems =3
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Posted 4/2/08

Yamira wrote:


mutoku wrote:

I'm alone, away in the dark.
My fears have left such a great mark.
People say goodbye
but I will never cry.
When no one is there by my side,
I see the world at a darker side.
There’s a thin string holding your life
But I hold onto the rope which connects to mine
You can do what you want,
But you can’t shake me
Sticks and stones will never break me
All you do is listen to the radio
You never pay attention to the scenario
I try so hard
Because I know I can never let it go


really great poem ^^ your really good in making cute poems =3



hehe wow u really think so? thnx!
Posted 4/2/08
I'm here, but he's there
in another place
will he realise that i love him....
will he realise that I miss him....
will he realise that I need him....
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Posted 4/3/08

mutoku wrote:


Yamira wrote:


mutoku wrote:

I'm alone, away in the dark.
My fears have left such a great mark.
People say goodbye
but I will never cry.
When no one is there by my side,
I see the world at a darker side.
There’s a thin string holding your life
But I hold onto the rope which connects to mine
You can do what you want,
But you can’t shake me
Sticks and stones will never break me
All you do is listen to the radio
You never pay attention to the scenario
I try so hard
Because I know I can never let it go


really great poem ^^ your really good in making cute poems =3



hehe wow u really think so? thnx!


yes I do! ^^
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judo_girl wrote:

I'm here, but he's there
in another place
will he realise that i love him....
will he realise that I miss him....
will he realise that I need him....


wow pretty gud jubo_girl!!!
Posted 4/4/08



judo_girl wrote:

I'm here, but he's there
in another place
will he realise that i love him....
will he realise that I miss him....
will he realise that I need him....


wow pretty gud jubo_girl!!!


thx ^_^
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Posted 4/5/08
Oh My God! This is a beutiful poem! I LOVE IT!
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Posted 4/16/08

mutoku wrote:

I'm alone, away in the dark.
My fears have left such a great mark.
People say goodbye
but I will never cry.
When no one is there by my side,
I see the world at a darker side.
There’s a thin string holding your life
But I hold onto the rope which connects to mine
You can do what you want,
But you can’t shake me
Sticks and stones will never break me
All you do is listen to the radio
You never pay attention to the scenario
I try so hard
Because I know I can never let it go


it's good
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