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Posted 5/7/08

dvah wrote:

alllllooooo is the teacher even here?


i think not...
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uh oh...
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Posted 5/9/08
awww.....sorry students if i came in a little late....hehe...
(i was kinda busy with my other school...so...)
i think we will start our lesson today huh?


this is the english class so i think we will start introducing yourselves...
ok, so try to introduce yourselves in complete grammar and no wrong spellings..
(that means no short cuts!)
a minimum of 5 sentences will do..
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uhmmm.....*cough*

I am Lyka Janine Bare.
I am a filipino.
My favorite colors are black,red and white.
My favorite numbers are 11 and 7.
I am 13 years old.
My favorite jpop artist is Ai Otsuka.
My favorite japanese actor is Ikuta Toma.
Nice to meet you all.
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Posted 5/12/08

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uhmmm.....*cough*

I am Lyka Janine Bare.
I am a filipino.
My favorite colors are black,red and white.
My favorite numbers are 11 and 7.
I am 13 years old.
My favorite jpop artist is Ai Otsuka.
My favorite japanese actor is Ikuta Toma.
Nice to meet you all.


sorry, please make it into a paragraph form. ^^ sorry if i havent put it there....
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Posted 5/12/08

yoshiko_inori wrote:


lyka117 wrote:

uhmmm.....*cough*

I am Lyka Janine Bare.
I am a filipino.
My favorite colors are black,red and white.
My favorite numbers are 11 and 7.
I am 13 years old.
I am 13 years old.
My favorite japanese actor is Ikuta Toma.
Nice to meet you all.


sorry, please make it into a paragraph form. ^^ sorry if i havent put it there....


GOMENASAI!!!!

I am Lyka Janine Bare.I am a filipino.My favorite colors are black,red and white.
My favorite numbers are 11 and 7.I am 13 years old. My favorite jpop artist is Ai Otsuka.
My favorite japanese actor is Ikuta Toma.Nice to meet you all.
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Hello, i am David you can call me Dave aswell. I am currently in grade 8 and i will be honest i really think grammar is boring. If i'm not in class I am probobly busy with my regular school because i got exams coming up. I love to play sports but my all time favorite sport would be basketball. I also play badminton and football, and i run track aswell.

~Dave~
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Hello I am Hosume Hyuumaigi (user:NekoMimi00). I am 11 years old, I was born on March 4 1997. I live at Philippines. You know I didn't experience killing cockroach..hehe I join Crunchyroll because many of my classmate at school invite me to join Crunchyroll, And now i really like Crunchyroll, I am always online at Crunchyroll.
My family bussiness is Computer Shop so I help them sometimes. Sometimes my brother help too, We only have 10 computers and 1 laptop And we put T.V at the front of Server for people who wait for vacants...


Sensei,..,. sOrry i'm not Good At english T.T"

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Posted 5/12/08 , edited 5/12/08

lyka117 wrote:


yoshiko_inori wrote:


lyka117 wrote:

uhmmm.....*cough*

I am Lyka Janine Bare.
I am a filipino.
My favorite colors are black,red and white.
My favorite numbers are 11 and 7.
I am 13 years old.
I am 13 years old.
My favorite japanese actor is Ikuta Toma.
Nice to meet you all.


sorry, please make it into a paragraph form. ^^ sorry if i havent put it there....


GOMENASAI!!!!


I am Lyka Janine Bare.I am a filipino.My favorite colors are black,red and white.
My favorite numbers are 11 and 7.I am 13 years old.My favorite jpop artist is Ai Otsuka.
My favorite japanese actor is Ikuta Toma.Nice to meet you all.


6/10
*in making a paragraph, don't just use simple sentences. and refrain from using too much "i" and "my".
although it is very much understandable that way..

the red ones are the mistyped and the wrong spelling/grammar ones, and the blue ones are
the lacking ones. (ok, is my grammar correct?)
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Posted 5/12/08

dvah wrote:

Hello, i am David you can call me Dave aswell. I am currently in grade 8 and i will be honest, i really think grammar is boring. If i'm not in class I am probobly busy with my regular school because i got exams coming up. I love to play sports but my all time favorite sport would be basketball. I also play badminton and football, and i run track aswell.

~Dave~


7/10
*your writing is good but, you also may forget capetalizing your "I"s (i know, im also guilty w/ that...)
i already mentioned earlier not to use shortcuts and minimize wrong spellings, right?
(althoug you didn't use any short cuts..which is fine)

the red ones are the mistyped and the wrong spelling/grammar ones, and the blue ones are
the lacking ones. (ok, is my grammar correct?)


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Posted 5/12/08

NekoMimi00 wrote:

Hello I am Hosume Hyuumaigi (user:NekoMimi00). I am 11 years old, I was born on March 4, 1997. I live at Philippines. You know I didn't experience killing cockroach..hehe I join Crunchyroll because many of my classmate at school invite me to join Crunchyroll, And now i really like Crunchyroll, I am always online at Crunchyroll.
My family bussiness is a Computer Shop so I help them sometimes. Sometimes my brother help too, We only have 10 computers and 1 laptop And we put T.V at the front of Server for people who wait for vacants...


Sensei,..,. sOrry i'm not Good At english T.T"



7/10
*it's alright if you're not good in english, that's why you're here,right? (ok, if some are wondering why i use small letters, it because i'm in a hurry, i also have to check in my other school. but if you need anything just quote my post so that i can attend to your needs) ok, back to the topic, although your writing is good, you also have a lot of mistyped words. but that's ok.

the red ones are the mistyped and the wrong spelling/grammar ones, and the blue ones are
the lacking ones. (ok, is my grammar correct?)



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Posted 5/12/08

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NekoMimi00 wrote:

Hello I am Hosume Hyuumaigi (user:NekoMimi00). I am 11 years old, I was born on March 4, 1997. I live in Philippines. You know I didn't experience killing cockroach..hehe I join Crunchyroll because most of my classmate at school invite me to join Crunchyroll, And now I really like Crunchyroll, I am always online at Crunchyroll.
My family business is a Computer Shop so I help them sometimes. Sometimes my brother do help too, We only have 10 computers and 1 laptop and we put T.V at the front of Server for people who wait for vacants...


Sensei,..,. sOrry i'm not Good At english T.T"



7/10
*it's alright if you're not good in english, that's why you're here,right? (ok, if some are wondering why i use small letters, it because i'm in a hurry, i also have to check in my other school. but if you need anything just quote my post so that i can attend to your needs) ok, back to the topic, although your writing is good, you also have a lot of mistyped words. but that's ok.

the red ones are the mistyped and the wrong spelling/grammar ones, and the blue ones are
the lacking ones. (ok, is my grammar correct?)





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How about that sensei >.<"
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Posted 5/13/08

NekoMimi00 wrote:

How about that sensei >.<"


it's better, but you just change the "most of my classmate" to "most of my classmates" (i think..)
but you don't need to rewrite it anymore.

i'll give you, 8/10

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Posted 5/13/08
Lesson #1

Parts of a Sentence

Forms:

A. Simple Subject

-the simple subject is the subject of the verb excluding all the modifiers and other parts of speech that come before or after it.

Ex.

A young couple got married.
The excited child opened his gifts.


B. Simple Predicate

-the simple predicate of the sentence is the verb. it may be a phrase consisting of helping or auxiliary verbs.

Ex.

The trays of goodies were soon emptied by the children.
Tanya will undoubtedly sing her song with flair.

C. Complete Subject

-the complete subject consists of the simple subject and its modifiers.

Ex.

The blushing bride was very lovely.
The pull of the sun and moon on the earth creates tides.

D. Complete Predicate

-the complete predicate consists of the verb or verb phrase, its modifiers, and complements.

Ex.

Some books are read for pure entertainment.
Our neighbor's helper raked the dry leaves and burned them.
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