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You told me
You would never make me cry
But you did
You told me
You would never hurt me
But you did
You told me
That I was the only one
In this world that
You loved
Then why..
Did you sleep
Whit a other girl

But whetever
You did
I would never blame you
Beacuse
You can keep pepole
From crying
and its hard
to not hurt others
and mayby
I didnt give you what you wanted
And thats why
You landed
In a other girls
Arms

Blindly I would
Walk whit you
Ignoring all those things
My friends
Trying to warn me
That I will
Be destroyed
If I countinue this
But
I wont lisen

Time gose
And
I know that Im falling
Into the darkness
Of your lies
And
My owns
You hurt me
You make me cry
And
Im never enough for you
At night
I will lay on
My bed
Thinking
What girl are you whit
Now
And tears will start
Running
Still
I countinue
Im hoping
That you will change
That you will see me
And not hurt me
Anymore
To see
How much I love you

Two years
Have gone
And Im totally consumed
By the darkness
Now
My friends
Have given
Me up
And let me og
To meet my fate
I feel so numb
Everytime you touched me
I got hurt
Just by you
Looking at me

Now
I find myself
Sitting her
Looking at you
as my hands
holds you neck
and as your breathing become
Harder and harder
And soon will
Diseapear
As your eyes looking terefyed at me
As I tell you
” You told me”
” you would never”
” make me cry”
” that you would”
” never”
” hurt me”
” that I was the only one”
” in this world”
” that you loved”
” but”
” you made my cry”
” you hurt me”
” and”
” you was whit other girls”
” when you told me”
” that I”
” was the only one”
” im sick of this lies”
” that have drowned me”
” into this”
” darkness”

As your breat diseaper
I wispered
Whit tears in my eyes
” and the sad part”
” is”
” I still”
” love you”


here i s another poem from me to you guys xD really when your not really healthy you really get inspiration xD I have allways wantd to write somthing to that pic its one of my favorites <3
just wondering am I good to write such boyfriend girlfirnd things?? cuse I never had a bf so Im not so sure xD
Posted 4/2/08
I think it was great nice pic to choose to write to =3
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I think it was great nice pic to choose to write to =3


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AAAH!! IT SERVES HIM RIGHT!!!! And yes, you are very good at writing these boyfriend/girlfriend kind of stuff ^^ But that's just my opinion, hehe. I also thought it matched the picture completely ^^ But it was still sad, I feel so bad for the girl >< The boy deserved what he got though -.- But you know, I had a really good quote for this...I just can't remember it at the moment. I found it on photobucket a while ago lol..it was something like "After all the things you've done, the saddest part is that I still love you. And if you slit my throat with a knife, with my last breath, I'll apologize for bleeding on your shirt." I'm not sure how acruate that is though lol
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AAAH!! IT SERVES HIM RIGHT!!!! And yes, you are very good at writing these boyfriend/girlfriend kind of stuff ^^ But that's just my opinion, hehe. I also thought it matched the picture completely ^^ But it was still sad, I feel so bad for the girl >< The boy deserved what he got though -.- But you know, I had a really good quote for this...I just can't remember it at the moment. I found it on photobucket a while ago lol..it was something like "After all the things you've done, the saddest part is that I still love you. And if you slit my throat with a knife, with my last breath, I'll apologize for bleeding on your shirt." I'm not sure how acruate that is though lol


THank you very much !! its one of my fav. pics
It was the maning here is the horror pic for all those stupid guys who are like that, but you know ther are girls who are like thaat allways forgiving and when they finally get away from the guy they still love them! <.<
well I hope you find it cuse then I want too see it ^^ and it fits the poem!
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moonwarrior485 wrote:

AAAH!! IT SERVES HIM RIGHT!!!! And yes, you are very good at writing these boyfriend/girlfriend kind of stuff ^^ But that's just my opinion, hehe. I also thought it matched the picture completely ^^ But it was still sad, I feel so bad for the girl >< The boy deserved what he got though -.- But you know, I had a really good quote for this...I just can't remember it at the moment. I found it on photobucket a while ago lol..it was something like "After all the things you've done, the saddest part is that I still love you. And if you slit my throat with a knife, with my last breath, I'll apologize for bleeding on your shirt." I'm not sure how acruate that is though lol


THank you very much !! its one of my fav. pics
It was the maning here is the horror pic for all those stupid guys who are like that, but you know ther are girls who are like thaat allways forgiving and when they finally get away from the guy they still love them! <.<
well I hope you find it cuse then I want too see it ^^ and it fits the poem!


I'll look for the quote!....and yeah, I know there are girls out there like that...I kinda hope I'm not one of them ><
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Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:

AAAH!! IT SERVES HIM RIGHT!!!! And yes, you are very good at writing these boyfriend/girlfriend kind of stuff ^^ But that's just my opinion, hehe. I also thought it matched the picture completely ^^ But it was still sad, I feel so bad for the girl >< The boy deserved what he got though -.- But you know, I had a really good quote for this...I just can't remember it at the moment. I found it on photobucket a while ago lol..it was something like "After all the things you've done, the saddest part is that I still love you. And if you slit my throat with a knife, with my last breath, I'll apologize for bleeding on your shirt." I'm not sure how acruate that is though lol


THank you very much !! its one of my fav. pics
It was the maning here is the horror pic for all those stupid guys who are like that, but you know ther are girls who are like thaat allways forgiving and when they finally get away from the guy they still love them! <.<
well I hope you find it cuse then I want too see it ^^ and it fits the poem!


I'll look for the quote!....and yeah, I know there are girls out there like that...I kinda hope I'm not one of them ><


*hugs you* I will be ther for you and help you! I wont let my little sis fall to the ground >-<
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Posted 4/8/08

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moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:

AAAH!! IT SERVES HIM RIGHT!!!! And yes, you are very good at writing these boyfriend/girlfriend kind of stuff ^^ But that's just my opinion, hehe. I also thought it matched the picture completely ^^ But it was still sad, I feel so bad for the girl >< The boy deserved what he got though -.- But you know, I had a really good quote for this...I just can't remember it at the moment. I found it on photobucket a while ago lol..it was something like "After all the things you've done, the saddest part is that I still love you. And if you slit my throat with a knife, with my last breath, I'll apologize for bleeding on your shirt." I'm not sure how acruate that is though lol


THank you very much !! its one of my fav. pics
It was the maning here is the horror pic for all those stupid guys who are like that, but you know ther are girls who are like thaat allways forgiving and when they finally get away from the guy they still love them! <.<
well I hope you find it cuse then I want too see it ^^ and it fits the poem!


I'll look for the quote!....and yeah, I know there are girls out there like that...I kinda hope I'm not one of them ><


*hugs you* I will be ther for you and help you! I wont let my little sis fall to the ground >-<


*hugs back* Thank you!! ANd back to you!! We'll both stand strong against the EVIL!!!!
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I love this poem actually.. I love all your poems!! ^^ this made me sad though T^T but it was still beautiful.. but it kinda reminds me of something o.o;;
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I love this poem actually.. I love all your poems!! ^^ this made me sad though T^T but it was still beautiful.. but it kinda reminds me of something o.o;;


Really?? Im really happy to hear that ^^
reminds you of what then?
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Really great! Nice work as always!
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Cowchan7897 wrote:

I love this poem actually.. I love all your poems!! ^^ this made me sad though T^T but it was still beautiful.. but it kinda reminds me of something o.o;;


Really?? Im really happy to hear that ^^
reminds you of what then?


it reminded me of a sad drama o.o;; i forgot the name though..

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Yamira wrote:


Cowchan7897 wrote:

I love this poem actually.. I love all your poems!! ^^ this made me sad though T^T but it was still beautiful.. but it kinda reminds me of something o.o;;


Really?? Im really happy to hear that ^^
reminds you of what then?


it reminded me of a sad drama o.o;; i forgot the name though..



Ahhh! I see well I cant help you since I dont watch dramas ^^u
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Ahhh! I see well I cant help you since I dont watch dramas ^^u


Oh its okay hehe anyway great poems! keep making more x3 i might post a poem too o.o;; lol anyway bye :]



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