Post Reply A little girl Whit green jacked And hair tide back In a ribbon (exstreamly long XD)
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Posted 4/2/08
Ther is a story
That all church tells
That god
Send angels
To guard us humans
To protect us
And everytime
I would just push
It aside
I would not belive
In this

Fall have come
And vinter is coming closer
The cold air strokes
My face
And make the dead
Leafs dance
Everyone are innside
Now
But I hear loughing
As I turn my head
I see a young girl
She is runing after the leafs
Trying
To chatch them
Her brown hair
Tide in a ribbon
She has a green jacked
To big for her

I look at the
Girl
As she run
And see her fall
But everytime she would
Just lough
And countinue
And
Whitout
Realizing it
The time passes

I walk the stairs
Up to my soom
As I hear my mom
Yell
About being late
And that
I would not get
Dinner
As if I care
Its allways me making dinner
For myself

I let myself
Fall on the bed
I hate this life
Both my parents
Are cheating
On echother
Ther is no real love
In this house
Many think that Im lucky
Cuse I get
Everything
I want
But thats not true
For I whis
I could have some love
To melt that ice
Around
My heart

When I walk
Trough the park next day
I see
Tha girl agein
In the same green jacked
And
Her hair tide
In a ribbon
I stopp and look
Shes playing whit
A cat
Today
I smile softly
As I look
And I forgot
That It was school

My mom
My dad
What they could do that day
Was only yelling
At me
And echother
I think
They have finally found out
What lies
They have been hiding
But
As I sit in my room
I think about
The little girl
Some how she
Filled me
Whit a warm
That I had never feelt

She wasnt ther
The girl
Want ther
Today
And I feelt my heart sink
But
I didnt know
That today
Would be the day
Of my life
My last day

I came home
No one
Was ther
Or
It was that I trough
My dad
Was home
But not the dad I know
For the dad
I know
Would not be drunk
And rape
His own doughter
He yelled that
Im not his child
That a slut like my mom
Had me
Whit another man

Ims haking
Im crying
In a corner
Of my room

I dont know what to do
I dont wnat thsi
My life
Just got worse
My mom have left
My dad
To
After he was done
Whit me
I feelt
Like an empty shell
Wher I satt
And then I decided
I would not
Countiue this
Life

Im sitting
On a swing
In the park
The sunsett is beautifull
Over the city
Im holding a empty bottle
In my hand
Its no turning back
I will die her
Her wher my memories
Wher still happy

I feel
That it begins to
Work
But then I see somthing infront of me
Leening on
One of the trees
Infront
Of me
The girl
The girl whit the
Green to big jacked
And
Her hair tide in a
Ribbon
She looks at me
And smiles
Sadly
She turns and look
At the sunsett
And then she said somthing
That suprised me
” like the sun you og”
” down”
” and the same”
” whit the moon”
” but”
” the one thing they ”
” too do just alike”
” they allways rise agein”

I wanted to ask her
What she meant
But
My voice got stuck
As I saw
Two white wings
From the girls back

She turned to me
And took
My cold hand
” Let us go”
” big sister”
” our new life is waiting”

My body was found
The next day
It looked like
I had just sleept in
And a smile
On my lips like after a sweet dream
But the truth is
That that
The dream was beacome true
God had send
And angel
To to take me whit her
He gave me a life
And made me forget the
Old
But he gave me
Somthing more
He gave me
A younger sister
A little girl
Whit green jacked
And hair tide back
In a ribbon

here is another one ^^ i think this one is a little cute =3
but it more like a story then a poem but...most of my poems are like that...and sorry if its long TT.TT ps: if you want I can short the tittel it was not the meaning to be that long !
Posted 4/2/08
lol the title is kinda long but i like it, it fits the poem...and i like that your poems are like storys there interesting X3, great job again
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Posted 4/3/08

kagura4 wrote:

lol the title is kinda long but i like it, it fits the poem...and i like that your poems are like storys there interesting X3, great job again


yeah I kn ow thats why I writed extremly long behind the tittel
Im glad you like it !
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Posted 4/7/08
Awwww, that was such a sad cute poem!!!! The picture really matched lol. I felt so bad for the girl, but I'm happy she's happy now >< AMAZING JOB!!!!
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moonwarrior485 wrote:

Awwww, that was such a sad cute poem!!!! The picture really matched lol. I felt so bad for the girl, but I'm happy she's happy now >< AMAZING JOB!!!!


thank you!
I was wondering if I wasnt a little too mean to the girl <.< it wasnt the meaning she should get raped but....i needed it in the story! but I gave her somting good in the end!
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Posted 4/8/08

Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:

Awwww, that was such a sad cute poem!!!! The picture really matched lol. I felt so bad for the girl, but I'm happy she's happy now >< AMAZING JOB!!!!


thank you!
I was wondering if I wasnt a little too mean to the girl <.< it wasnt the meaning she should get raped but....i needed it in the story! but I gave her somting good in the end!


Well, although the rape part was a bit intense, I agree, it was needed in the story!
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