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I Hate Boys!

Bento?

Ko-chan: hhmm……(where iam)…..*eyes half open*

Ko-chan: kazuki….*open eyes* KAZUKI!!! (why is he here!!??)

Kazuki:…*wakes up* KO-CHAN!! Your finally awake!!

Ko-chan: yea….why are u in my room?? O wait I know im just dreaming. Now it all makes sense…hehehe if this is a dream then I WISH TO HAVE PUDDING PLZ!! (thinking hard to dream about pudding)

Kazuki:….pfftt….HAHAHAHA yup Ko-chan is ok now

Ko-chan: why are u still here?? This is my dream (still thinks this is a dream) w-wait!! Does does…this mean that I beginning to like you (devastated) NOOO!!!!

Kazuki: (hhmmm…if she really thinks this is a dream then……) wake up my honey!~ *kisses her on the forehead*

Ko-chan: *doki* *doki* KYYAA!!! Even if this is a dream I won’t allowed you to do that!! Take that!! *punches kazuki in the face*

Kazuki: *grabs her hand instead and pulls it* *hugs her very tightly* I don’t care if u hate me because of this…im just glad your ok

Ko-chan: *bright red face* soo…..im not dreaming then……*feels very embarrassed* MO!!!! BAKA!! Im such a idiot! (I feel somewhat happy that it wasn’t a dream) *smiles*

Kazuki: *toss her away* I only did that to make you mad *evil smile*

Ko-chan: *very angry* GO AWAY!!!!!! ( I can’t believe my heart beat a little for that idiot guy!!!)

Kazuki: I see, u recovery, im going to go home now….u see tomorrow

Ko-chan: wait!......

Kazuki: what?

Ko-chan: umm…thank you for taking care of me….*blush*

Kazuki: (just remember) o yea..about that what happened to you??

Ko-chan: hmm….well…I went to the library and I couldn’t study..hehe….

Kazuki:…what an idiot…

Ko-chan: shut up let me finish

Kazuki: hai hai

Ko-chan: o and I turn a corner someone grab me, then I pass out….hehe that’s all =) (me talking: she’s very stupid!!)

Kazuki: WHAT!!!??? Did u know who he was??? Why didn’t u do anything???

Ko-chan: eh? i did!! But she was really strong…even for a girl

Kazuki: he was a girl???

Ko-chan: im pretty sure, when she grab me she held me tightly and….i felt something…hehe…..

Kazuki: -_-……I see…..ko-chan’s a pervert…

Ko-chan: NO IM NOT!! I didn’t do it on pupose…it was just there…..

Kazuki: yea....what else do u know?

Ko-chan: umm….i don’t really remember anything…. Well I remember a little she had long hair….very cold hands…..her skin was pale I think that’s all….

Kazuki: sooo u didn’t remember when I found u then??

Ko-chan: u found me??

Kazuki: yeah

Ko-chan: where? Wait I felt something very tight around my body…..i think she tied me..

Kazuki: yea, she did….ur soo useless…..if I take my eyes off of u for one minute u get beat up and kidnap

Ko-chan: well I never ask u to save me!!! *shuts door very hard*

Kazuki: *sigh* she gets angry soo fast….*goes home*

Ko-chan: *opens door a little* *looks* hhmm…. Kazuki really did go home…..WHO CARES!! (still angry)

Ko-chan: kaa-san? Are u home?

Okaa-san: Ko-chan!!! Your awake now , thank goodness *hugs her*

Ko-chan: kaa-san im ok don’t worry

Okaa-san: yes..u should thank that young man that brought you in ^_^ he’s very handsome ne ko-chan? , I didn’t know u had a boyfriend?

Ko-chan: KAA-SAN!!! *blush* he’s not my boyfriend at all, not even close!!!

Okaa-san: really?? Well then he’s a very nice boy, he was with you all this time, he even carry u all the way form school to your home, you should thank him

Ko-chan: (I guess he’s not all that bad) I did thank him, I’ll make him lunch =) as for a thanks

Okaa-san:…good luck….(she’s not very good at cooking) don’t burn the house....

Ko-chan: hai hai….(geezz mom I won’t do that again-_-) (me talking: she almost burn her house while cooking...when she was little)

Ko-chan: now, how to make a bento…hmm…..10 minutes later….i don’t get it -_- this is harder than math…..

Ko-chan: okaa-san umm…can u teach me…

Okaa-san: sure ^_^

Ko-chan: YAY!!! We did it!!!

Okaa-san: no ko-chan did it =) I only guide you

Ko-chan: me….i? made it?........IM SOO PROUD OF MYSELF!! =D

{at school}

Kazuki: whats this??

Ko-chan: don’t u know by looking at it?

Kazuki: a very horrible bento?

Ko-chan: *angry* I see…I guess u don’t want it

Kazuki: oi, I didn’t said I didn’t want it

Ko-chan: here this is for thanks for yesterday, im sorry I cause u trouble, but next time don’t save me….

Kazuki” I didn’t save u because I have to I did it because….(speaks very softly) I love you….

Ko-chan: can u say that again? It’s really loud here

Kazuki: I said I saved u because u look soo useless!!!

Ko-chan: IM NOT USELESS!!! I’ll show u!! im going to go join the karate club….hehe I’ll get a black belt!! then I can protect myself, and u won't have to save me anymore (good plan)

Kazuki: sure….i’ll watch and see how long u can last

Ko-chan: *irritated* I will get one!!

Kazuki: it taste nasty…

Ko-chan: then don’t eat it if it’s nasty, here I’ll make a new one, it was my first time making one too….sorry

Kazuki: *looks at Ko-chan* this is your first time, u never made one to anyone else before?

Ko-chan: yea..TT~TT

Kazuki: I see….then I’ll eat it all =) *smiles very cute* thank you

Ko-chan: (wow…he looks like an angel when he smiles like that) *doki* *blush* (I think I might be falling for him….NO!! I CAN’T!!....it must be just his smile that I saw)

Kazuki: *eating very happily* (it taste actually good now)


Thanks for reading it!!! =)

See you in next chapter (when u find out who that girl is)

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kyaa so kawaii but there really not honest with there fealing
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I agree with xBlackRosex, but that's how all books go. Ko-chan is very oblivious though -.- But all in all, it was extremely cute ^^ As always =]
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this is sssoooooo good!!!!!!!!! keep on going and thanxxx
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OMG.. OMG.. OMG.. i think fell in love wit kazuki already!! kya.. he said i love u to ko-chan!!!! man.. i wish real life was like tat too... T_T.. i cant wait for the next one... keep it up!!! gambatte ne!!!~
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wow Kazuki sure can hide his feelings well hehe <33 so kawaii^^ and if that girl IS some horrible idiot, Kazuki go get "revenge"!
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Wow! so good ahlor!!!! so he kinda lost the bet already but she doesn't know yet, hehe! anyway you're doing great can't wait till u actually draw it!
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KYAAA!!!! <33 IT!!! Kazuki is really kawaii XD can't w8 for the rest =]
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xBlackRosex wrote:

kyaa so kawaii but there really not honest with there fealing


yea...but it' really hard to express it or tell the other person if u really liked them =)
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moonwarrior485 wrote:

I agree with xBlackRosex, but that's how all books go. Ko-chan is very oblivious though -.- But all in all, it was extremely cute ^^ As always =]


yup she is.....but at the same time she's really scared though...because of what happened with yoshi (i feel kinda sad for her T~T)
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fashionme37 wrote:

this is sssoooooo good!!!!!!!!! keep on going and thanxxx


u think this is good?? and i'll keep on going THANK U!!! VERY MUCH FOR READING IT
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OMG.. OMG.. OMG.. i think fell in love wit kazuki already!! kya.. he said i love u to ko-chan!!!! man.. i wish real life was like tat too... T_T.. i cant wait for the next one... keep it up!!! gambatte ne!!!~


I WILL!!! and i wish guys were like that as well.....too bad there not TT~TT (wish life was more like a manga...)
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XiiaoWitchiie wrote:

wow Kazuki sure can hide his feelings well hehe <33 so kawaii^^ and if that girl IS some horrible idiot, Kazuki go get "revenge"!


hahaha yea he should =)
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sunfire55 wrote:

Wow! so good ahlor!!!! so he kinda lost the bet already but she doesn't know yet, hehe! anyway you're doing great can't wait till u actually draw it!


ehehe...draw....i'll try....if i i can....and thank very much for reading it =) im going to read ur's i have too!!! i told myself i was going to read it but then i got really busy and i kept people waiting kinda long for the next chapter too TT~TT
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fusiongirl50 wrote:

KYAAA!!!! <33 IT!!! Kazuki is really kawaii XD can't w8 for the rest =]


me too!!! >.< i can't wait until im finsih with it (then im going to read it hehe)
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