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**Poetry war!!
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Posted 12/18/07
But mean is funny,
Or so I thought,
Till I read the source,
Over which you fought.

Jabs can be witty,
but not that one.
So I gotta agree,
with your kind words, hon.
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30 / F / sTiLL dReaMinG.,.
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Posted 12/18/07
Being cruel has it's good and bad
You sometimes have to be cruel to be kind;
And you can be kind to be cruel.
So when does one know what to use?

You could say, it is a knowledge of sensitivity
To know, is for both hearts talking
so open you heart and open your mind
so you wouldn't be blinded by words.
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26 / M / Oakland
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Posted 12/19/07
My heart and my mind will not open,
simply cuz my mind is full of issues
and my heart? Well, its broken...

Words that will blind me are non-existent,
I take the time to pay attention
which is why the call me 'Patience'

No matter how you come, wether 'cruel' or 'cool'
BE YOURSELF, NOBODY ELSE-
the only tools you'll need to use...
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22 / F / Under the stars
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Posted 12/19/07
Different or same,
original or plain,
The world still spins,
With no intermissions,
In this way we keep sane
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24 / F / the awesomest pla...
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Posted 12/19/07
sane is false
normality is absurd

everyone is crazy
says the little bird
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26 / M / Oakland
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Posted 12/19/07
Do u mean that little bird
that did a fly-by-shittin...?

The one that dropped a turd
on the sammich I was eatin...?

That was, like- TOtally rude,
that bird is trippin!

But so am I cuz Im about to
eat it anyway.,,
looks like ranch dressing...


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Posted 12/19/07
just because it looks like ranch dressing
doesn't mean you should eat it

its can give you a disease
that can not be treated
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22 / F / Neverland
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Posted 12/19/07
and then you would die
a terrible death
where you slowly are killed
from the pain
never again will you see birds
fly and poop
or even remember
from where you came
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26 / M / Oakland
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Posted 12/20/07
forget where im from?
thats impossible, my lady...
a turd from a bird will never
take away my memory
my dignity? maybe-
but i'll fight to get it back
but first im out to kill a bird
that crapped on my snack...
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22 / F / Neverland
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Posted 12/24/07
Hey I was writing what came into my head.
..........regretting it now.


DaPatient1 wrote:

'All truth prevails?'
please012, where u from...?
cuz where I lay my hat,
'The Face Of Truth' is a Bum!
and whatever things occur,
wether good, wether bad,
I KNOW it can be altered,
cuz I been there, done that...




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26 / F / In a Quasar...O.o
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Posted 12/24/07
I wrote this a while back, but then I used it for my Senior Memory Book...^.^
Through the looking glass,
You see all time that will pass.
Watching all the memories gone past,
Knowing it all went by so fast.

Remeniscing about all that has gone,
Looking at the one great bond,
Feeling like you are so fond,
When it finally dawned.

Dawned that you have seen the good times roll,
Watched as the bad took their toll,
Sat back and seen the acheived goal,
And stared as the time weathered your soul.

Dawned that you are worth something more,
Something you believe to your very core,
Something that is an open door,
Knowing you musn't close that floor.

Believing in all your goals and dreams,
Looking back at what were neccessary deams,
Peeking at the hair brained schemes,
All holding up like strong, hard beams.

Loosening of all eartly ties,
Letting go of all those hot guys.
Finally fitting into that one size,
You see through eyes that are wise.

Hearing insults and compliments,
That often put the equivilent of dents,
Put up a protective fence,
That not even one can get through with great sense.

Finally with one last look,
You peer into your favorite book,
Look at all that was not took.
And feel at peace with every cranny and nook.
Posted 12/24/07
wow that rhyme was cool.
don't liek to hand out compliemnts
cuz maybe i'm cruel
nothing rhymes with compliment so i guess i'll just use the word mint
cuz everybody hates those
who likes to sit there and strike a thinking pose
but me me me me.
its always about me.

omg i can't do poetry for shit

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67 / In the gutter.
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Posted 12/27/07
On the contrary,
Handing out compliments is my specialty
I'm pretty bored as hell now,
But I think I'll just stop here and take a bow.
So, to the next person,
Come up with something new,
But make sure whatever you write is true.
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26 / M / Oakland
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Posted 12/30/07

please012 wrote:

Hey I was writing what came into my head.
..........regretting it now.

no need for regrets! ur poem was really good.
Im just 'above average' when it comes to talkin shit.
Now get your ass back on this thread!! (;-)


DaPatient1 wrote:

'All truth prevails?'
please012, where u from...?
cuz where I lay my hat,
'The Face Of Truth' is a Bum!
and whatever things occur,
wether good, wether bad,
I KNOW it can be altered,
cuz I been there, done that...






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26 / M / Oakland
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Posted 12/31/07
Want sumthin true?
well here's a known fact-
Im on 'Hokage' status
when it comes to talkin smack-

Im also known to be
the coolest cat in every city-
Reason being, Im as real
as itty-bitty titties-

Another true fact?
My real name is 'Patience'-
But please dont get it twisted,
cuz I do have my limits-

My love is unlimited
and also unconditional-
For family and my circle of friends
here on Crunchyroll-

So now its official,
war is declared!!!
Poetic soldier known as Patience
with some 'real' shit to share...



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