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**Poetry war!!
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Posted 4/22/12
Too long, I did not read;
So many words you do not need.
Don't take offence;
It was just a little dense.
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20 / F / Wales, UK
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Posted 4/22/12
no offence taken
i'll drink my tea in merryment
i wish i could see the world
through another persons eyes
don't you?
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Posted 5/1/12 , edited 5/1/12
I am tired from the days that turned into hours.
Whether there is light or if it is night,
I sat with my mind numb but my fingers' will still strong.
I want it to all end but this place is closed,
I guess I will take a walk back and continue where I left off.

The chill wind knits at my neck with an icy pain,
but welcome it, I do.
Walking down the street with many like me,
I see the hands ticking towards the two.
A chilly breath breathes into my body and for the first time, I feel alive.

The light flicks and dims as I walk past,
almost presenting its fear as a gift.
I see shadows that stalk quickly behind me,
only to see that it is they who are more afraid.

I reach my room and feel the chilling warmth.
My bed so cozy almost mocking me.
There is nothing to do, but to write,
and pour my life into meaningless ink.
I was no longer sane to feel the pain.

But thank the clock that ticks without care,
for now it is 24 hours since that deadly fair.
Such pains, I now no longer need to bare,
I want to know what tales will your eyes share.
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Sa Puso mo
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Posted 5/1/12
Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
He's for me
and not for you
If by chance you take my place
I'll take my fist and smash your face.
Posted 5/2/12
Your fist is my net
that I use to catch bugs.
Don't worry,
I only catch ones similar to you.
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19 / F / I'm lost
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Posted 5/2/12
What the hay? that did not rhyme.
What did you say? oh, there's not enough time.
Maybe you should wash your mouth, there's a bit of grime.
I'm going to go now, here, have a dime.
Posted 5/2/12
What the hay?
Someone doesn't know poetry that well.
What the hay?
Someone can't spell that well.
What the hay?
Thanks for the dime.
What the hay?
You want your dime back.
What the hay?
Your house is cheap.

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Posted 5/2/12
Roses are read
Violets are blue
This poem is irrelevant
Hippos
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20 / F / Canada
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Posted 5/3/12
hippos are like pickles
(that's all i got)
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Posted 5/3/12
I understand that's all you've got.
Now I will give this a shot.
It's my first time making a poem on the top of my head, you know,
But sadly, my brain is going slow.
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19 / F / I'm lost
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Posted 5/3/12
That's okay, not everyone is familiar with the wily ways of language
I know that for poetry, one must be very bright, at least a smidge
To be able to think on your feet, or take all the time in the world
We need imaginary minds, and the ability to allow our imagination to unfurl
For that other rude person, I spelled it as "hay" on purpose you twit
Now I'm going to bed, in order to regain my wit
But before I go, a question for the one below
Do you think it is possible for a human to glow?
whether it be physically or metaphorically, what do you know?
Propose an answer, give everyone a show.
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20 / F / Wales, UK
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Posted 5/6/12

sipping tea from a top cup,
i close my eyes a dream of you.
its a wonder to see your face behind closed eyes,
to wonder at all you are and will become,
i feel so unworthy loving you,
you deserve better than all i am,
all i could be.

when we meet what will you say?
tears fall silently, i taste there salt,
will i alone ever be enough for you?
the answer scares me still,
but your not mine to own,
i wish you well my love, i wish you well ~

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Posted 5/6/12 , edited 5/6/12


and i just had to tell you how much i loved this ^ ^ ~
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20 / M / (Unknown)
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Posted 5/6/12
I thank for your flattery,
but I prefer if you did not.
I type not for society,
but for the words that I've sought.

You share your privacy,
so I must exchange something I got.
My words are my currency,
to watch people gleam in thought.

There are no constrictions to poetry,
one's expression should not be mocked.
Each glow is a piece of pottery,
I am simply an observing idiot running amok.
Posted 5/7/12
Your flippancy is your balls.
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