Give me some ideas?
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Ok I have to write a poem for one of my class and it has to be love etc.

So here's what I have so far. Need advice and etc.

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Beyong the red, red dreams shaking and the two of us just had to meet.
Red scattered pieces of our hearts made up the sweet dreams.

The dreams that we build together are disappearing like the water was
evaporating. It broke my heart to see you with another guy laughing.

Girl, I love you and I want you to be with me, but your heart is changing.
I don't know what it takes to reach out for your heart without me crying.

The lonely nights without you here are hurting me deeply, and the wonderful
sweet dreams that I once had are slowly disappearing.....
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so baby come back or im gonna have to put a second hole in ur lovers ass.
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We are not here to do your homework for you. Do it yourself.
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Include (///_-) in your poem, its a sure +A.
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saiyukilover wrote:

We are not here to do your homework for you. Do it yourself.


It doesn't harm to give ideas.
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Kenshin1986 wrote:


saiyukilover wrote:

We are not here to do your homework for you. Do it yourself.


It doesn't harm to give ideas.


This is a personal thread > personal threads are against the forum rules. And homework is given for you to do, not for you to con others into doing.
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I'm asking for someone to do my homework for me?


Uhhh who's the one wrote all that? Me, thank you very much.


"We are not here to do your homework for you. Do it yourself."

You said it yourself but how come you are still here posting? hmmm.....
Posted 4/4/08
I agree . This is a personal thread. Thus you should DIY . If we give u some ideas , It won't be interesting anymore .
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saiyukilover wrote:


Kenshin1986 wrote:


saiyukilover wrote:

We are not here to do your homework for you. Do it yourself.


It doesn't harm to give ideas.


This is a personal thread > personal threads are against the forum rules. And homework is given for you to do, not for you to con others into doing.


ok thanks Inspector.
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As I sharpen the blades of regret with my foolish sentiments...
I dream of your porcelain white neck in your new found lover's arms...

Life may be fleeting but love is forever...
your happiness is all that means to me therefore...
In his arms forever you shall lie amidst the crimson silken sheets...
it won't be long before I myself will join you...

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Kenshin1986 wrote:


saiyukilover wrote:


Kenshin1986 wrote:


saiyukilover wrote:

We are not here to do your homework for you. Do it yourself.


It doesn't harm to give ideas.


This is a personal thread > personal threads are against the forum rules. And homework is given for you to do, not for you to con others into doing.


ok thanks Inspector.


You're welcome.


z19921003 wrote:

I'm asking for someone to do my homework for me?


Uhhh who's the one wrote all that? Me, thank you very much.


"We are not here to do your homework for you. Do it yourself."

You said it yourself but how come you are still here posting? hmmm.....


And you should finish it yourself. It's very good, you don't need our help. And while I'm here posting, I'm not doing your homework now am i? So it's not like i'm contradicting myself. I'm still posting because people are talking to me, and I feel obligated to respond.
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manzi wrote:

As I sharpen the blades of regret with my foolish sentiments...
I dream of your porcelain white neck in your new found lover's arms...

Life may be fleeting but love is forever...
your happiness is all that means to me therefore...
In his arms forever you shall lie amidst the crimson silken sheets...
it won't be long before I myself will join you...




Woah not bad dude. o_o

Anyway thread closed, haters these days.....

Don't be so stressed or else no one likes you. =P

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