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Posted 10/5/07
WELCOME :)



:) have a creation to share??
any creation would be fine...
for me, it would be a poem (if u can call it a poem..)
it was made when i was sad.
i found out that my frens who are lyk my own family are bein my fren bcz they wan my help..they r fake..

here is my poem..(though its nt sth special but i wrote it myself)
feel free to comment on it! :)



THE ABSOLUTE NOTHING

Nothing.
U know absolutely nothing bout me.
the pain and agony i went through
mean nothing to u.
Scary.
Absurd.
Ugly.
How it all happened.
And I still dont believe it.
But through it all
I realised.
Nothing is Absolute.

It all does not matter now.
Lies,hatred,envy have blindfolded your eyes.
There's nothing left to say
coz' its not words of apology i'm waiting for.
No,it's not girl.
I don't want any of it.
No, perhaps not.

My world is empty and ruined now.
But i'll colour it
with my own touch.
Slowly but surely.
Alone.
May be painful.
But i believe.
I have always believed.

One day, i'll stand high above the sky.
Seizing my dreams
and reaching for the stars!
It's all would be done without u.
I CAN LIVE WITHOUT U!
ABSOLUTELY WITHOUT U!

It's not envy or any of its kind.
Don't blame anyone now.
not even urself.
Ignore what people may say
coz nothing is absolute girl.
not even friendship.

This world is cold.
But let it spins round and round.
I may be cruel.
But, it's not your tears that i want to see.
No, it's not.
it's just too late.
There's nothing we can change.
Nothing is Absolute.
It may be our hatred
Or perhaps it's our passion that kills us all.
but i believe and have always believe.

One day, i'll stand high above the sky.
Seizing my dreams
and reaching for the stars!
It's all would be done without u.
I CAN LIVE WITHOUT U!
ABSOLUTELY WITHOUT U!
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Posted 10/5/07
Post Your Writings Here!
http://www.crunchyroll.com/showforumtopic?id=2034

Hehe. ^_^

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Show Off Your Art (Image Intensive)
http://www.crunchyroll.com/showforumtopic?id=19

Edit to below- Lol.
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Posted 10/5/07

xx_aznanime_xx wrote:

Post Your Writings Here!
http://www.crunchyroll.com/showforumtopic?id=2034

Hehe. ^_^

Edit-
Show Off Your Art (Image Intensive)
http://www.crunchyroll.com/showforumtopic?id=19


nah just forget about it...the thread below is the right one...i guess -_-
Posted 10/5/07
R.I.H. thread.(Rest in Hell)
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this thread was doomed from the start.. lol.
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Posted 10/5/07

ChrisOnline wrote:

this thread was doomed from the start.. lol.


XD
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ur poem is nice!! but the only thing i can say is "forget about it"
Posted 10/5/07
that is the longest 2nd title i've ever seen.
Posted 10/5/07
Darkness
I'm swimming all alone in a pool of darkness
and I feel like darkness is slowly pulling me under
I yell for help but no one is there to hear it
I begin to see the water at eye level
and I kick and flail
fighting to stay above the darkness
But the darkness won't let go of its hold on me
and I slowly begin to give in
to the feeling that lies below the water line
the waters starts to fill my lungs
the lungs that once held so much life
yet now they allow the murky water to replace that
I know that this path doesn't lead to happiness
But why doesn't someone grab my hand
pull me from darkness's grasp?
because no one knows I stand at the boundary
the boundary between light and dark
so I give in to the thing that holds me
All of the strength and all of the courage
that I once held in my heart
can't save me from the water
So I slowly slip below the world of conscientiousness
undetected by the occupants of that world
I don't want to fight anymore
I've given into darkness
Posted 10/5/07
The Cry of Our Hearts
The Cry Of Our Hearts
by Leanna
There is a great deal of depression that has overtaken my soul,
It floods deep within, into every inch that makes me whole.
I wonder and worry of thought throughout the day,
What is to come, to my dismay.
As a flood of tears pour out of me in all my expressions,
more and more comes, more and more depression.

I assure myself everything is ok!
But who am I fooling?
Then I burst into a spirit of rage.
I have questions, and there are answers.
But I'm afraid and much too weak,
When I try to explain,
I hear I'm hearing wrong and need to be meek.
But this is how I feel, there's no wrong or right,
But as I battle with myself, I always lose the fight.

I feel intimidated sometimes by others,
But as I said "This is how I feel"
The pain in me is very real.
I lose control, my thought go wild,
and here I am only a child.
If only you knew what I thought,
If only you knew what I fought.
I need my thoughts held captive.

Oh God, assure me I'm thinking normal
and you'll help me think positive.
I'm hurting, I need you!
Please don't give up on me!
One day I will always make you smile!
Love,
Your Child
Posted 10/5/07
Death Not Being the Way
I held the knife so close to my heart.
Like a foolish child I sat and I cried,
Didn't realize what I had done, what I had tried.
Tears mixed with blood, falling slowly to the ground.
Covered in blood, pulled myself up, in tears scribed:

"To those who don't care, to those who can't see,
Never Give up always thrive to be free."
Didn't know how many people would later cry.
"Tried to be free, yet I see this isn't the way."

Friend at the door, ran as fast as she could.
Too weak to say I'm sorry, otherwise I would.
In tears, looked at the blue sad day.
When you come and see this pool of blood and me,
This isn't the way my life was meant to be.
Posted 10/5/07
I feel so emo -_-
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Posted 10/5/07
^ nice pointless triple post, you should of posted those on the other threads. And in one post.

edit: my mistake quad post. Next time use the edit button.
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Creative Works Thread
http://www.crunchyroll.com/showforumtopic?id=3668

And use the edit button Gaurdian1.
Posted 10/5/07
I Can See the Pain
I still see your face in my dreams
It hurts and it doesn't help at all
I still want you in my life as crazy as that seems
I want you to catch me when I fall

I still remember the first time we met
There was something so different about you
Your friendship was something I wanted to get
That smile when you said hi to me was so new

Out of no where you called me on the phone
I wanted to sit there and talk to you forever
You were so new, so crazy and unknown
I just knew that our friendship would never sever

Two years and we are barely holding it together
What happened to the way this all used to be
I never wanted you out of my like ever
I sat there for a long time pretending not to see

We decided to go out and make it all all right
It didn't work out of course we knew it couldn't
We couldn't even really stand each others sight
It shouldn't end this way but it did and I shouldn't

I miss you and everything you were to me
Ten years from now we will look back on it all
We will be older and finally be able to see
That love will stand the test of time and never fall
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