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great ideas!But here is the second part of he orphan story i had earlier...I just want everyone to think wat its like and tell me if its good^^.

The young girl passes out first and her soul and mind end up in a dark place.Then she sees her self in the water(its an illusion).She thinks shes drowning and then she sees her friends walking on water.She asks them to help but then they disappear and a wave comes and then she ends up falling backwards(like Sora in kingdom hearts).Then the witch takes her and thinks that she is a tresspasser in the different world
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A fag ninja in an orange jumpsuit gets raped by a dead strawberry. They get married and have kids called narutards and bleachfags. THE END
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try one with a twist in it.....
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Now her is the other side of the story with Yumi and Kasen.

They pass out too and they have the same illusion as their friend(Yani).Then the witches ppl try taking them and taking them to the witch.But then a lady omes andhas a staff that uses light thatwards them off.She takes them and shows them her world.The kids get fascinted but remember that their friend is still gone.They ask the lady to help and she asks wat she looks like and her name.They describe her and say her name is Yani and the lady gets shocked and forbids them to go back home,find their friend,and leave her sight.They dont know y but they get worried.
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why dont u use the sign of horoscope.
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Hmm, i'm still considering the "other world" you mentioned eariler. I sounds a little "The lion, the witch and the wardrob" to me but what the heck.

For some reason i see the sky has a dusky hue. A blood splash of a sunset, never changing, time seems slow; almost an after thought. The condition of the world is a deep conflict of old and new. The buildings while modern to the kids, are in deep ruin. The first town the kids come to is a city (city has in buildings and parked cars) but everything is over grown with wild flowers and plants. Ivy covers more than half of all the streets.

That's all i got for now.
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Here is Yani's side of the story...

She ends up in some kind of bared cave and the witch said she will kill her.The girl cries and the tears of her r black.The witch sees them and apoligizes becuz she discovers that Yani is the girl that she kept watching for her heart.Yani said she wants to go home but the witch persuades her by telling her that she can make her more outgoing and stronger.And make her crush,Kasen, like her.Yani is tempted but she agrees.The witch says she would protect her but instead she turns her evil.She gets one of her kept souls and places it inside Yani.Yani's real spirit is locked in her own heart and she is "chained".Then the body of Yani is controled by another soul that obeys the witch.Then the soul thats inside Yani wields a staff that has a heart on top of it thats black.
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angeline_chong94 wrote:

why dont u use the sign of horoscope.


i did...It took awhile to draw horoscope people and zodiac characters^^Nice thinking tho^^arigato
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Joliame wrote:

Hmm, i'm still considering the "other world" you mentioned eariler. I sounds a little "The lion, the witch and the wardrob" to me but what the heck.

For some reason i see the sky has a dusky hue. A blood splash of a sunset, never changing, time seems slow; almost an after thought. The condition of the world is a deep conflict of old and new. The buildings while modern to the kids, are in deep ruin. The first town the kids come to is a city (city has in buildings and parked cars) but everything is over grown with wild flowers and plants. Ivy covers more than half of all the streets.

That's all i got for now.


nice^^but no its not related to the lion,the witch,and the wardrobe...
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Kureme_Notomashi wrote:


angeline_chong94 wrote:

why dont u use the sign of horoscope.


i did...It took awhile to draw horoscope people and zodiac characters^^Nice thinking tho^^arigato


welcome ^^
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Kureme_Notomashi wrote:

Im an author and comic drawer.I want new ideas...so can anyone tell me one?Just tell me some stories or wat u think about me writing^^It would be relly kind if u helped^^Arigato!


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