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Posted 4/13/08
waaaa!!! so exciting! I love fan fics (no yaoi though). currently I'm writing one, but I think it won't suit the focus (Ran clan) too well. I'll see what I can do once I have the inspiration ^^ anybody like to try first?
Posted 4/22/08
a story i made between jyuusan , ryuuki , shuurei , n other ppl buh theyre not important . n i didnt mention places name bc i rarely kno any places in the anime n i forgot the places name . also if i have grammar errors not my fault because im jus 12 x_x . imnot sure if this fanfic is alright tho, since ryuuki n shuurei is in it n theyre not in the ran clan ?

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Nobody's POV

It was winter right now. Ryuuki was standing in front of the sakura tree where he and Shuurei first met. He stood there looking at the tree, remembering the first time when Shuurei was trying to reach the branch from the tree. Now, the tree was just branches covered in snow. He was just wearing his purple robe so he was quite cold.

Shuurei's POV

Why did this have to happen ? Everything in the beginning was running smoothly, and now Ryuuki needs to get married. I feel so awful, the council needs to know who he will marry 1 week from now. I lay down on my bed, staring at the ceiling, tears started to fall out, I'm so confused.

*knock, knock*

Who can be coming at this hour ? I quickly wiped my tears with the blanket and got out of the bed.

I opened the door, "Ryuuki, what are you doing here at this hour ?", I asked. He was just wearing his robe and it was winter, he must be very cold. His head was down, "Ryuuki ?"

He lifted his head, there were tear tracks on his face, I took his hand, it's so cold. "Are you alright?", I asked, still no answer. "Wait here and I'll go make some tea ."

I was about to go outside when he grabbed my hand, then he wrapped his arms around me. His whole body was cold. I'm not sure what to do, so I put my hands around his waist.

Ryuuki's POV

I couldn't say anything, because if I did I know that I will burst out sobbing. Shuurei took my hands off her, "Will you tell me what's the problem ?" , she asked, she was very concern. I still couldn't look her in the eye, "Sit on the bed, I'll go get some tea.", she said then went out of the room. I quickly wiped my watery eyes on her bed sheet. I feel so cold, I should have brought my cloak with me. Now I think I'm not going to cry .Shuurei came back, "Here", she handed me a cup of tea, "it will make you feel warmer." I drank the tea, "You really do like making tea huh ?", I asked. She didn't answer, "Tell me what's the problem now?", she asked. I looked her in the eye, "What would you do if I marry Jyuusan?" , I said, finally I got the question out of my head that's been giving me nightmares these past few days.

Jyuusan's POV

I walked around the streets, I hate being in the palace. If only Jin Shiba will love me back, I wouldn't have a hole left inside my heart. Snow was falling down, I love winter, it's so peaceful. I looked up in the sky, the moon is very beautiful tonight, I've always thought that- I was interrupted by some noises. It's like someone stepped on a tree branch. Now, I wished I would've at least bought a weapon with me, great now I need to go to Shuurei's house since it's just a few meters away. I ran to her house as quick as possible, the window was opened, I quickly climbed in and shut the window. I was about to enter Shuurei's room .

"Shu-", I was about to knock the door, wait someone's here talking to Shuurei.

"You have to Ryuuki, she's fit for you, and I'm still not ready yet." Shuurei said, so Ryuuki's here. They're probably talking about the marriage. "But I don't love her, well I like her as a friend, but not as a lover as how I feel for you", Ryuuki said. They're speaking so normal, I could hear them clearly. "Wait," Ryuuki said, "think someone's here." Damn! they caught me, I quickly jumped up to the wall and balance myself so I won't fall down. The door opened, Ryuuki came out, he looked to his left and right, he's quite dum, I thought he would've looked up. He went back inside to the room.

Nobody's POV

"I think we have to talk lower", Ryuuki said, "maybe a ninja or a spy or thief is here." Ryuuki took another sip of tea.


(Continuing later, my eyes are tired now x_x)
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Posted 4/29/08
This is my first time writing a Saiunkoku Monogatari fic so please forgive me for poor grammars. Please feel free to comment ...is it even possible to leave comments here?

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Jyuusan had always like his fourth brother, Ran Shuuei the best even though they have different mother. Mostly because she thought that out of all her brothers, he is the only sane one. She sighed at the remembrance of the triplets and her facial expression changes as soon the image of his fifth older brother came into her mind. She shivered as she’s aware that the deadly assassinating weapon will be Ryuuren’s flute playing.

She thought that his fifth brother weren’t so bad if it wasn’t because of his eccentric- ness and remembered that she was quite impressed by his fifth older brother on how peculiar he dresses when she was merely a small child. Who would ever wear a hat decorated with tomatoes and bamboo shoots and walked outside without being ashamed? She never thought it was peculiar until she is old enough to understand that the way of his fifth older brother dressing is unacceptable.

As she was lying on her bed, pondering on her thoughts about her fifth older brother, a disastrous sound came filling the whole place and Jyuusan had no choice but to groan and yell while rolling on her bead, with both hands covering her ears. The sound was getting louder that she thought the nightmare will never end and when the music stopped unexpectedly, Jyuusan slowly open her eyes and uncovered her eyes only to find Ryuuren’s face is right above her with very close proximity.

“Ryuuren-niisama!” she jumped at the sudden sight of him and Ryuuren backed away a little.

“What are you doing? Are you pretending to be strangled by bears?” he asked, staring straight back at his sister.

“Aaah…What are you doing here nii-sama?” Jyuusan decided it is better not to comment about his flute playing and decided to divert his attention away from her weird behaviour before. The instant that Jyuusan asked the question, Ryuuren’s face lit up and she knew she had dug her own grave.

Oh no!

“I am inspired when I was walking around and thought you would want to hear my new song. It is indeed a song that make everyone’s tears to fall!” he exclaimed with such enthusiasm and without waiting for his sister reply; he started playing his new song that he invented.

Every song you played will make everyone’s tears fall!

“Urgh! Nii-sama please stops it!” Ryuuren seems to pay no heed to his sister pleading as he did the same to the rest of them. His horrible flute playing continues and Jyuusan thought that the sound today is even more horrible than the rest of them if she can distinguish their horribleness. Jyuusan felt like crying and a few drops of tears can be seen at the corner of her eyes.

Ryuuren noticed that and with a smile on his face continue his finishing part of his newly invented song. Jyuusan’s tears rolled down from her eyes down her check and Ryuuren played the last note with a look of triumph on his face.

“It is true that this song is able to make people cry. You are the proof of it.” He smiled and wiped off his sister’s tears with his thumb. “If you enjoyed this song so much, should I play it to you again?” he asked innocently.

“No!” she shouted. “You should not only play for me alone. Why not you present it to Setsuna nii-sama and Shuuei nii-sama?” Jyuusan felt guilty for mentioning her favourite brother of all but she doubted Ryuuren-niisama is able to hinder her first three elder brothers.

“Ah! You are right. Such good song should be shared to all family members.” And he jumped out of the window to the yard and started playing the flute again. Jyuusan cringed at the sound and wailed.

Ryuuren-niisama’s flute playing is definitely the most deadly weapon in the world!





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Posted 4/29/08
wow! ur fanfic is cool thousandbirds! i like it!

Ryuuren sure is eccentric! LOL!

His flute is really scary!!! ^___^
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Posted 4/29/08

rikka_hime wrote:

wow! ur fanfic is cool thousandbirds! i like it!

Ryuuren sure is eccentric! LOL!

His flute is really scary!!! ^___^


Thank you for reading and commenting^^ and glad you like it.
Posted 5/1/08
I really love the fanfics here!!! sugoiii work, mina-san!!! I'm doing a ryuuren fanfic, but it's not done yet. please bare with me and it's not really easy to write about ryuuren, since he's a really ... errr... well, let's just say you never really know what's inside his head. I'll upload it once I'm done.
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Posted 7/10/08
Veeeeeeeeeery pretty guys! Realy beautiful works!
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Posted 2/1/09
amazing~!
Posted 2/11/09
I LOVE FAN FICTION. IN FACD I HAVE ONE MY SELF ABOUT THE RAN CLAN. YUKI RAN IS THE MY MINE RPC.
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