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Posted 4/8/08 , edited 4/8/08
It was a rainy night on the cold streets of New York city. Inside a butcher's shop gun shots were heard.
"Who are you? And why are you doing this?!" said a bleeding man with wounds from a gun shot in his abdomen.

"You really don't know who I am?" said a girl wearing a black suit and carying a gun. "Why you ask? I want you to suffer of course!" said the girl while laughing.

"What have i ever done to you?!" said the bleeding man in agony while trying to stop the bleeding.

"Did you really forget? 3 years ago you killed the head of the a mafia family." said the girl while reloading her gun.

"And what about it?! I've killed more people than you ever will!!!!!" said the man.

"What about it? What about it!" said the girl while grabing the man's head and pointing the gun. "That man you killed was my father! You bastard!!" said the girl.

"What?! You're that spoiled little brat aren't you?!" said the man with shock in his eyes.

"i was that spoiled brat, now i'm the head of the family. And guess what? Daddy's little girl is out for revenge. hahaha!!!!! said he girl.

"Wait! Don't kill me, I beg of....." before the man could finish his sentence, the trigger was pulled and a bullet went straight into his head.

"Pity? A worm like you doesn't deserve it!" said the girl while looking down on the lifeless corpse which was once the man that killed her father. "Clean this up, I have a date tomorrow. hahahaha" said the girl as she walked away from the bloody scene.
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Posted 4/8/08
this story is still incomplete......
Posted 4/9/08
............What is supposed to happen? She got her revenge. o.o
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Posted 4/25/08
brvo revenge what a nice angle I love a happy ending don't miss I am hoping you would continue with the story and I think what will happen to the end of the story but it's all up to you hahahahahahaha
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