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Posted 4/8/08
My heart
is a broken mirror
broken by lies
and
false promises
they all
showed me a smile
but
they all wher fake
but
beafore I could
escape
they broke me

Im not the one
i jused to be
Im a broken doll
trowed away
my fellings
I dont care about
anymore
I just know
that no one
love me
and
why then
shall I have fellings
when they
wont be accepted

Im just a shell
whit
a mirror inside
broken
and
my hands
whit scars
from trying
but
I have gived up

one day
ther was a boy
who came to me
he tride
to be friendly
but I
pushed him away
as so
many others
I will never
let myself
break down
like that again

but
everytime
he comes back
and
one day
I asked him
what he wanted from me
a girl
whit a broken mirror
as a heart

tears run
but I feel his
hand
caring
my cheek

"I will try to"
"put you together"
"agein"

as i looked at him
I could
see his hands
bloody whit scars
and
holding pices
of a mirror

that person
was you
and you showed me
that
ther was still hope

when I see
in my heart now
I see the girl
that I was
but
I see you ther to
holding
me close....

another poem ^^ hope you guys like it !
Posted 4/10/08

Yamira wrote:

My heart
is a broken mirror
broken by lies
and
false promises
they all
showed me a smile
but
they all wher fake
but
beafore I could
escape
they broke me

Im not the one
i jused to be
Im a broken doll
trowed away
my fellings
I dont care about
anymore
I just know
that no one
love me
and
why then
shall I have fellings
when they
wont be accepted

Im just a shell
whit
a mirror inside
broken
and
my hands
whit scars
from trying
but
I have gived up

one day
ther was a boy
who came to me
he tride
to be friendly
but I
pushed him away
as so
many others
I will never
let myself
break down
like that again

but
everytime
he comes back
and
one day
I asked him
what he wanted from me
a girl
whit a broken mirror
as a heart

tears run
but I feel his
hand
caring
my cheek

"I will try to"
"put you together"
"agein"

as i looked at him
I could
see his hands
bloody whit scars
and
holding pices
of a mirror

that person
was you
and you showed me
that
ther was still hope

when I see
in my heart now
I see the girl
that I was
but
I see you ther to
holding
me close....

another poem ^^ hope you guys like it !



I love it!! awesome poem yamira!! XD
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Posted 4/12/08
Awww, that was adorable >< Such a happy ending!! Very extremely good! I love it >< <3333
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Posted 4/12/08

Yamira wrote:

My heart
is a broken mirror
broken by lies
and
false promises
they all
showed me a smile
but
they all wher fake
but
beafore I could
escape
they broke me

Im not the one
i jused to be
Im a broken doll
trowed away
my fellings
I dont care about
anymore
I just know
that no one
love me
and
why then
shall I have fellings
when they
wont be accepted

Im just a shell
whit
a mirror inside
broken
and
my hands
whit scars
from trying
but
I have gived up

one day
ther was a boy
who came to me
he tride
to be friendly
but I
pushed him away
as so
many others
I will never
let myself
break down
like that again

but
everytime
he comes back
and
one day
I asked him
what he wanted from me
a girl
whit a broken mirror
as a heart

tears run
but I feel his
hand
caring
my cheek

"I will try to"
"put you together"
"agein"

as i looked at him
I could
see his hands
bloody whit scars
and
holding pices
of a mirror

that person
was you
and you showed me
that
ther was still hope

when I see
in my heart now
I see the girl
that I was
but
I see you ther to
holding
me close....

another poem ^^ hope you guys like it !


I love it Yamira!!!...I love all ur poems!!!...Very good!!!...u didn't fail with this poem
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Posted 4/13/08

david_k_belanova wrote:


Yamira wrote:

My heart
is a broken mirror
broken by lies
and
false promises
they all
showed me a smile
but
they all wher fake
but
beafore I could
escape
they broke me

Im not the one
i jused to be
Im a broken doll
trowed away
my fellings
I dont care about
anymore
I just know
that no one
love me
and
why then
shall I have fellings
when they
wont be accepted

Im just a shell
whit
a mirror inside
broken
and
my hands
whit scars
from trying
but
I have gived up

one day
ther was a boy
who came to me
he tride
to be friendly
but I
pushed him away
as so
many others
I will never
let myself
break down
like that again

but
everytime
he comes back
and
one day
I asked him
what he wanted from me
a girl
whit a broken mirror
as a heart

tears run
but I feel his
hand
caring
my cheek

"I will try to"
"put you together"
"agein"

as i looked at him
I could
see his hands
bloody whit scars
and
holding pices
of a mirror

that person
was you
and you showed me
that
ther was still hope

when I see
in my heart now
I see the girl
that I was
but
I see you ther to
holding
me close....

another poem ^^ hope you guys like it !


I love it Yamira!!!...I love all ur poems!!!...Very good!!!...u didn't fail with this poem


^///^thahnk you very much Im glad you like my poems!
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Posted 4/13/08

moonwarrior485 wrote:

Awww, that was adorable >< Such a happy ending!! Very extremely good! I love it >< <3333


Thank you! latly I just want to write happy endings xD
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Posted 4/14/08

Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:

Awww, that was adorable >< Such a happy ending!! Very extremely good! I love it >< <3333


Thank you! latly I just want to write happy endings xD


That's always a good thing ^^ Happy endings are really happy Lol
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Posted 4/22/08
that's really touching ^0^
I hope someone will come and help me...
like what the boy did
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Posted 4/22/08

kallitadasuki wrote:

that's really touching ^0^
I hope someone will come and help me...
like what the boy did


thank you^^
yeah lets hope there are some like him out there
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