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I Hate Boys!

Forgiven?
{still in karate}

Ko-chan: WHOA!!! HOW? DID U, WHEN?,…….(oh no…my head hurts) *dizzy*

Yoshi: well…..let me think, it’s kinda a long story but im very happy I got to see you *hugs her very tightly*

Ko-chan: HEY!!! What are u doing!!!!

Yoshi: KO-CHAN!!!! IM NOT DREAMING IAM???!!! Even if this is a dream, I hope it dosen’t ends

Ko-chan: I repeat this is a DREAM!!!!!!!!!! WAKE UP!!!!!! EARTH TO YOSHI!!!! Answer me

Yoshi: *snaps out of it* sooo this isn’t a dream?? Thank god …..im just so happy that I got to meet you again for such a long time ^_^

Ko-chan: ooo…..wait!!! u didn’t answer any of my question *still dizzy*

Yoshi: oh! Sorry, uhh…when u moved my heart was broken….i swear to find you when we grow up but I couldn’t wait any longer so i went to look for you.

Yoshi: before that I practiced karate so that I can protect the one I love (which is ko-chan) I want to be strong so that ko-chan will look at me again.


{Yoshi’s past}

Yoshi: *running to ko-chan’s car* WAIT!!! KO-CHAN!!!!!

Yoshi: *huff* *huff* ko-chan…..i will definitely find you when we grow up……*faints* (was sick)

{at yoshi’s house}

Yoshi: *wakes up* KO-CHAN!!! *huff*

Yoshi: I’ll find her no matter what, wait for me

Yoshi: (form now on I will work hard, so that one day I will meet u again I’ll be a guy you can rely on

{so form then, Yoshi worked very hard, practicing karate everyday, studying too.

[4 years later]

Yoshi:4 years of hard work, now it’s time to go and find ko-chan

Yoshi: Im coming (--___--) o wait….. I have no idea where she’s at…..

Yoshi: AAGGGHH!!!! Im soooooooo stupid I TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT THAT PART!!!!!!!!! (was to busy with training)

Yoshi’s dad: Were moving

Yoshi: HUH!? WHY??? I was just about to go find ko-chan

Yoshi’s dad: ko-chan?? That little girl ^_^ she was sooo CUTE!!!!!!!!!!, such a kind little girl

Yoshi’s dad: UNLIKE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!

Yoshi: hai hai…….(--__--) (he only likes girls)

Yoshi: (maybe I’ll fins ko-chan there…..) IM NOT GOING TO GIVE UP!!! I……..i miss you……so much……

(author talking: so then yoshi moves, and ended up in the same SCHOOL!!! as ko-chan!!)

{yoshi’s past ends}

Yoshi: that’s what happened…..

Ko-chan: o….im sorry…but I don’t really want to see you right now….

Yoshi:*grabs her hand* please ko-chan!! I came her all the way just to look for you………im sorry about what happened in the past but…you just misunderstood

Ko-chan: no I didn’t, >=(

Yoshi: yes u did, I’ll tell you what really happened

Yoshi: first Amy is just my friend, she told me she liked me back when I was 8 years old. I told her I didn’t like her, but she still wouldn’t give up on me. She came by the school to meet me, that time I had you with me, but I didn’t want to tell you….sorry

Yoshi: I didn’t want you to hate me I told her I didn’t like her ….but then u came and saw her kiss me,

Yoshi: you went off running, and I went after you, but I couldn’t find you anywhere

Yoshi: I looked for you for hours, your mom call and said they found you

Yoshi: I was really happy but I couldn’t visit you because I got sick, before I got better you were already moving. I only got a chance to a little talk with you…..

Ko-chan: ok I get it…… you can stop

Ko-chan: im sorry……

Ko-chan: shall we start again? BUT! Just as friend ok? (I’ll guess I’ll be his friend….i feel really bad)

Yoshi: YOU FORGIVE ME??!!! im soooo happy!!!! *hugs her again* thank you ^_^

Ko-chan: *blush* w-what!! are u doing??? We are just FRIENDS!!!! Let go

Yoshi: im sorry….im too happy =)

Ko-chan: I only forgave you because my friend said she felt bad for you when I told, and i…..didn’t hear you side of the story…..

Yoshi: yes u didn’t!!!! it made me really mad for a long time!!! I thought I was going to die

Ko-chan: im said I was sorry!!! >.<

Yoshi: and I said I forgive you too =)

Yoshi: u got cuter =3

Ko-chan: eh?....thank you *blush*

Ko-chan: u looked different I didn’t recognize you until I had a good look on your face

Yoshi: yea….i did change a lot

Ko-chan: this is very exciting I have my childhood friend back!!! >.< im very happy that you’re here (totally forgave him, and is very happy right now)

Ko-chan: come on!! I want you to meet my other friends!!! ^_^

Yoshi: ok, hey slow down!! (she’s just like before, forgets being mad, I still like you just like before…..)

Ko-chan: Mayu, Miki-chan!!! I want you to meet my child hood friend he’s name is Yoshi

Miki-chan: EEEHHH!!!!???? Isn’t he that guy who cheated on you???

Ko-chan: *punches miki* no he didn’t, it turns out it was my fault…..ehehee….

Miki-chan: I knew it all along…..ouch *glares at ko-chan*

Mayu: *looks at yoshi* (he’s cute) HI!!! Nice to meet you my name is Mayu *bumps ko-cha out of the way*

Yoshi: it’s very nice to meet all of you *irresistible smile*

Miki-chan and Mayu: (OMG!!! He is sooooo handsome!!!!) (>.<)

Mayu: ahm…(but not as handsome as kazuki)

Ko-chan: I want u to meet my other friend…..he saved me countless of times…..ehee….

Yoshi:….i see (so she has a guy as her friend too)

Ko-chan: KAZUKI!!!!!!!!!!!! Where are you???

Kazuki: stop being so noisy old hag im trying to sleep

Ko-chan: kazuki this is my childhood friend ^ ^ I hope you two get along

Yoshi: nice to meet you my name is Yoshi

Kazuki: *opens one eye* go away your noisy too (a guy??!!)

Ko-chan: KAZUKI!!!!! Be more nicer geezz it’s not going to kill you

Kazuki: your already killing me…..inside…..

Ko-chan: HUH!!!??? (what a weird guy)

WILL kazuki get along with yoshi??

Or will they fight?

See you in the next chapter!!! >.<
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OMG i wonder wat will happen when Kazuki find out tat yoshi is ko-chan ex
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i luv this chapter cany wait for the next it a mystery!!! >.<
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i love it keep writing!
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OMG i wonder wat will happen when Kazuki find out tat yoshi is ko-chan ex


yea me too!!! (even though im the creator....) i'll try to hurry up ^^
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sasukeluverforeva15 wrote:

i luv this chapter cany wait for the next it a mystery!!! >.<


haha yea, im going to write it rigth now...what should i do?? hehee
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anime1022 wrote:

i love it keep writing!


THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!!~ for posting your comments i luv to read them!! >.< and thanks for reading it again
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That was so gd! I wonder what might happen when he finds out he's ko chan's ex boyfriend plus he still likes her!! Cant wait for the next chapter!
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omg cant wait to read they next chapter! what will happen! eehhhh!
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THANKS AGAIN!!! MY GROUP BUDDIES!!! >.< FOR READING IT AND ACTUALLY LEAVING A COMMENT
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wow!! omg omg im getting so excited, im burning up inside!! hehe Kazuki might get jealous xD
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Kazuki is SO going to get jealous...and so is Yoshi!! And then they're going to fight it out, with Ko-chan on the line! And then Kazuki will win and confess his undying love for her <3 heheh lol
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wow!! omg omg im getting so excited, im burning up inside!! hehe Kazuki might get jealous xD


haha =D thanks for reading it again
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moonwarrior485 wrote:

Kazuki is SO going to get jealous...and so is Yoshi!! And then they're going to fight it out, with Ko-chan on the line! And then Kazuki will win and confess his undying love for her <3 heheh lol


I KNOW!!~ >.< SOOO TRUE!!!
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