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Posted 4/11/08
This poem was actually an last minute assignment i did in like 5 mins.. :sweatingbullets:
I thought i would get a bad grade, but it was pretty good actually!
(btw, the topic had to be about ice cream for some reason....)
Choices, choices

So much ice cream
towering high!
Choose from so many?
Why do i try...?
Strawberry, chocolate,
driping all over.
melts in my mouth,
I wish it was over!

Choices choices,
It makes my mouth water,
so many to choose from
i'm about to fall over!
Banana, cherry, mosit to the touch,
some many to choose from,
oh why do I bother!
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Posted 4/12/08
i thought it was pretty cool ............................. and i love ice cream
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Posted 4/12/08

AshGrave wrote:

This poem was actually an last minute assignment i did in like 5 mins.. :sweatingbullets:
I thought i would get a bad grade, but it was pretty good actually!
(btw, the topic had to be about ice cream for some reason....)
Choices, choices

So much ice cream
towering high!
Choose from so many?
Why do i try...?
Strawberry, chocolate,
driping all over.
melts in my mouth,
I wish it was over!

Choices choices,
It makes my mouth water,
so many to choose from
i'm about to fall over!
Banana, cherry, mosit to the touch,
some many to choose from,
oh why do I bother!


its really good but why would the teach make u write about something?
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Posted 4/12/08
I'm not sure.. she rather an odd teach......
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AshGrave wrote:

I'm not sure.. she rather an odd teach......


my teachs do the same thing. its a little annoying.
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Posted 4/12/08
good poem.. nice topic.. especially since here its finally getting humid! I think this has inspired me to get a cone...
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Posted 5/8/08 , edited 5/8/08
thats a rather fun and enjoyable read of a poem, to write something about ice cream at that time you must have been craving it
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Posted 5/22/08
hahaha, yeah i was,..... yet... i still havent eaten any scince then....... hmmm..... *going to frezer*
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