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I Hate Boys!

Im Falling for you…

{at school}

Miki-chan: this is the plan, we’ll meet ko-chan and yoshi there, I’ll keep yoshi busy and take him away ok?

Kazuki: this is stupid I don’t even want to go there...

Miki-chan: are u sure?, ok then I’ll guess yoshi and ko-chan will be together, all alone TOGETHER!!!!!!!

Kazuki: FINE!!! (I hate this girl)


{at zoo}

Ko-chan: come one YOSHI!!!! Hurry hurry *very excited*

Yoshi: im coming…..*out of breath* (she's too energetic, today)

Ko-chan: WOOOOAAHHHH!!!!! *sparkling eyes* I NEVER SEEN THAT ANIMAL UP CLOSE BEFORE!!!!

Yoshi: that is a dolphin, touch it ^_^

Ko-chan: *touches dolphin’s head* wow!!! It feels sooo smooth =D

Miki-chan: huh!!?? KO-CHAN!!! YOU’RE HERE TOO!!! (pretending)

Kazuki: *cough*

Miki-chan: (opps, i forgot...eheh) kazuki here too

Ko-chan: (eh? why would kazuki be here with miki-chan???.....why does my heart hurts?...) what is he doing here???

Miki-chan: (uh oh….didn’t think about this) uhh………..

Kazuki: were on a secret date *looking away* (trying to make ko-chan jealous)

Ko-chan: (WHAT!!!!!??? I DIDN’T KNOW!!!! why would they do this behind my back…..) o I see so u guys are dating?? How come you guys didn’t tell me?? *trying to sound happy*

Miki-chan: (EHHHHHH!!!!??? THIS ISN’T PART OF MY PLAN!!!) umm….well…..

Kazuki: *angry because he thought ko-chan was happy about them dating* that doesn’t concerns you

Ko-chan: o sorry……(I just want to cry right now!!!) T~T

Yoshi: eh? miki, kazuki you guys are here too ^_^ *looks at ko-chan* are u okay?? Ko-chan? you don’t too look well

Ko-chan: im okay ^_^ im just a little hungry for running

Yoshi: I see…..(she has been running a lot…) lets go get something to eat ^ ^

Miki-chan: *have a idea* no it’s ok ko-chan can rest she looks tried, I’ll go with you, yoshi ^_^ (heheh my plan will work!!) *gives kazuki the signal*

Yoshi: uh…sure

[kazuki and ko-chan alone]

Kazuki: umm…..it’s not true that me and miki are going out…*nervous*

Ko-chan: EEEHHH!!!!???? I thought you guys were just now???

Kazuki: it was a lie…….

Ko-chan: why did you lie???

Kazuki: *blush* uuhh…..well…..*super nervous now*

Ko-chan: well??? *looks at him straight in the eye*

Kazuki: *glances at ko-chan* umm….it’s because i-i…….

Ko-chan: i?

Kazuki: shut up, lets just go!! *super red*

Ko-chan: wait!, we have to wait for yoshi and miki

Kazuki: don’t worry they’ll not even back yet, we’ll just be right there *points*

Ko-chan: well…..iam getting tried of waiting…….LETS GO!!!! *grabs kazuki’s hand and starts running*

Kazuki: *blush*

Ko-chan: look!! you can see the monkeys and the PANDAS!!! ^_^

Kazuki: yea

Ko-chan: (im going to go get cotton candy hehe)

Kazuzki: ko-chan??…….

Cotton candy man: that would be $1.50

Ko-chan: here, yay!! Cotton candy, KAZUKI!!!......eh?....where is kazuki?? (oh uh...i think i got lost...)

Kazuki: geezz!!! Where did that idiot go to!! *starts looking all over for her*

Ko-chan: KAZUKI!!!! *yelling his name* WHERE ARE YOU???!!! (I knew I shouldn’t have gone to eat the cotton candy…) TT~TT *looks for kazuki*

Pervert: hey girl are u alone?? *snicker* why don’t u paly with me??

Ko-chan: uhh…...(i think he's a bad guy) NO!! GO AWAY!!! *throws candy cotton at the pervert* *runs*

Pervert: HEY!! COME BACK HERE!!! *grabs her arm*

Ko-chan: LET GO OF ME!!!! *struggling*

Kazuki: *punches pervert guy*

Everybody near them: *looks at them fighting*

Kazuki: DON’T EVER TOUCH HER!!!! BASTERD!!!!

Ko-chan: kazuki…….*thump* *thump* (he saved me again...I think…Im falling for kazuki....)

Kazuki: KO-CHAN RUN!!! *grabs her hand and starts running*

Ko-chan: eh? wait don’t run to fast!! (IM TRIED!!!)

Kazuki: *huff* *huff* we should be save here, are u okay???

Ko-chan: *blush* uh……yea (he looked cool when he saved me)

Kazuki: WHAT WERE U DOING???!! DON’T JUST GO OFF ON YOUR OWN!! IDIOT

Ko-chan: sorry…..im sorry kazuki I won’t do it again (im causing trouble for him again...)

Kazuki: (oh uh….i think I made her feel sad…) it’s ok….even if u get lost I’ll be there and find you wherever you are…

Ko-chan: UN!!!~ thank you for saving me ^_^ you looked cool back there =D

Kazuki: *red* BAKA!! All u could think about was me, looking kool back there while we were in trouble!! (he’s actually very happy)

Ko-chan: but you were very kool!!~ ^_^

Kazuki: come on lets go…..*holds her hand, so she won’t get lost*

Ko-chan: *looks at kazuki’s and her's* (I guess I do like you after all…..kazuki is a good guy) ^_^ *blush*

[while all that happened]

Yoshi: I think we already went here miki *pant*

Miki-chan: no we didn’t (her plan, making yoshi go around the circle)

Yoshi:…..are u sure???

Miki-chan: u don’t trust me?? *making a sad face*

Yoshi: no, no that’s not what im saying

Miki-chan: good ^_^ were going this way

Yoshi: (we already went that way!!! Like 50!!! TMES ALREADY!!!, KO-CHAN WHERE ARE YOU!!!! TT~TT)

And so yoshi and miki went around the zoo 50 times!!!!

While ko-chan and kazuki already went home…..

See you in the next chapter!!!! Bye bye!~
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OMG this is sssssssssssssssssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooodddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i cant wait till next chapter!!!!!!!!!! hurry, good luck, you can do it!!!
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that was funny!
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lol so fuuny and gd! ^^ gd luck with ur next chapter! cant wait!!
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i want more n poor yoshi
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Haha, lol, poor Yoshi >< Miki is soo funny! This was a funny chapter ><
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haha kawaii!!! XD cant wait for the next chapter
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that was really funny at the end
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fashionme37 wrote:

OMG this is sssssssssssssssssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooodddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i cant wait till next chapter!!!!!!!!!! hurry, good luck, you can do it!!!


THANKS SOOO MUCH!!~ >.< i will try to hurry up
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anime1022 wrote:

that was funny!


thanks for reading it and commented it =)
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cheekychristy wrote:

lol so fuuny and gd! ^^ gd luck with ur next chapter! cant wait!!


hehe ^ ^ i'll try to post up the next ch. (but im not even done with it yet...TT~TT)
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xBlackRosex wrote:

i want more n poor yoshi


i know....-__- he had to walk around the zoo soo many times
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moonwarrior485 wrote:

Haha, lol, poor Yoshi >< Miki is soo funny! This was a funny chapter ><


thanks ^ ^
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fusiongirl50 wrote:

haha kawaii!!! XD cant wait for the next chapter


im going to work on the next ch. right now
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