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^^^^^^^^^^^^^nice quote czarina-chan ^^

Minna-san, I'm gonne post a fanfic now ^^ [omg So scared...I've never done this before >.>;;]

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It was a quiet, windy day in sunny south california. The birds were chirping exceptionally louder throughout the rich beachside neighborhood. A man was mowing his lawn in his boxers while his children were playing in the swings in the backyard. The mainstreets were empty and shadowed by over grown trees on the sidewalks. A boy was flying his kite in a nearby park. The kite went higher as he let loose the string that was attached to the kite, the only way the kite wont be flown away by the wind.

It was a normal day, but it was the day that would change the life of a girl named Sakura Kinomoto. A girl, who has lived in this quiet suburban neighborhood for her entire life, and has never seen anything but beauty around her, will go through a lfe changing experience.

As she woke up in her bed on this sunny day, Sakura felt more lively than normal. She was a pretty happy girl, but today she felt the wind was blowing more than usual, as if to tell her that her life had just blown into town.

Sakura yawned loudly and looked across to the clock on her table by the window.
"are you serious!?!?!!??!" She jumped off her bed and ran past her table to her closet. the time read "8:00," school began promptly at 8:30.
'how can I be late on the first day of school?? GODDAMMIT WHERE ARE MY SHOES?!' she thought as she bolted downstairs faster than normal. "dad!!! Where are my new shoes??? Did Touya take them?? I'll kill'im!" Sakura shouted in anger as she looked around for her new shoes.
"ah..sakura..i told you last night that your shoes were in the closet. You're so forgetful.." A man in his 40's called out in a slightly amused tone as he flipped a pancake professionally in their rectangular kitchen. His brown eyes twinkled as he saw sakura run to the closet by the doorway.
"oh shit! I forgot completely. Well, i'm off. No time for breakfest dad!" Sakura called to her father as she grabbed her bag and ran out the front door.
She jumped on her bike, and rode onto the sidewalk. A present from her brother on her previous birthday. Her bike was custom made, colored black and designed with pink stars all over. A large two wheeler that would originally be used in mountain biking, but, now that school had begun, Sakura decided it would be a quicker way to get to school, rather than her skates, which she had out grown quite fast.

She was half way there when sakura realized that she had reached the cherry blossom trees that only bloomed during the spring. 'so pretty.....i have to come back after school and take tons of pictures...,' sakura thought as she zoomed by, realizing she was going to be really late if she didnt speed up.

A boy quietly watched as the girl rode quickly past him. His amber eyes, cold and distant, flickered with interest at the sight of her. 'not bad..,' he smirked and continued in the same direction as Sakura.

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so what do you guys think? I know I have spelling and punctuation errors, but I just wrote it quickly cuz I can't stay online for long. I messed up the story pretty bad, but I'm trying to lear away from the magic sort.
Should I write more?
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I think u should!! but could u please lower the level of ur exclamatory words? i'm not allowed to read stuff with those.......

Here's a quote,

"Wisdom is supreme; therefore make a full effort to get wisdom. Esteem her and she will exalt you; embrace her and she will honor you."
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I also have composed a story last summer... It's actually going to be a novel when I am done with it... I'll just post the 1st chapter... As of now, it already has eighteen chapters... Wanna read it? I'll also post my short story I made for my English project last year... I hope you like them both!
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The True Identity

Chapter I: Island in the Sun

Rachael Ashleigh Hart turned out to be a famous singer at the age of 22. She had met many popular people and most of them became her close friends. But behind her beauty that can lure any guy to her and her smiles to the cameras, she mourns deeply because of the loss of her one and only true love. Her dreams just shattered and it’s like her life was completely useless. Every time she walks to her room, she shuts the door, sits down at the side of her bed, and tears just come running down to her cheeks as she stares at the picture of her beloved. His name was Jeff Williams. Jeff was a happy-go-lucky kind of guy who always looks at the bright side of life. He was her boyfriend since high school. It was said that he died on a car crash near the cliff but his body was not found. Rachael was just so miserable but she still decides to pursue her dreams and that will be the way to fill her grief. As of now, she is at age 24 and it has been six years since Jeff’s death.

Suddenly, she heard someone knocking at the door. She immediately wiped her tears and slowly opened the door. She glanced outside her room and saw a tall and handsome man wearing an elegant suit with blonde hair neatly fixed. His name was Randy Kilmer. He is a famous actor and he has won many awards. He is two years older than Rachael. He has been dating her for almost six months. Rachael thought that having another boyfriend will help her move on from that tragedy that had happened six years ago. Nine months is long enough for a good relationship but it still didn’t remove the sorrow from her. Her love for Jeff was true. It was passionate. It was unlike any other relationships she had before. But even though she was not yet successful, she is willing to drive her sadness away and tries to learn how to love Randy like she did to him.

Randy suddenly noticed Rachael’s swollen eyes. He knew she was crying but he didn’t know what the cause is. Then he asked, “Hey baby! … Huh!? Were you crying? What happened?” Then she replied with her head slightly bowed down with shyness, “Oh… My eyes were just… Irritated.” Then she looked at him in his eyes and smiled a bit. It made him become relieved. He sighed then said, “Ok then! I just wanna ask you out if you do not have any projects you need to deal with. Is that ok?” Then she said, “Oh, sure! I’m free tonight. Where do you wanna go?” Then a smile just appeared in front of her and said, “Well, since it’s already summer, I was thinking of Bennie’s Grill near the beach! It’s cool, yet romantic!” The she responded, “Hmmm… I think that’s nice! Ok… See you there!” Then he said, “Yeah, sure thing!” Then he leaves as she stares at him from a distance.

At night when Rachael prepares herself for the date, an elegant Bentley Arnage roamed by the street and stops in front of her house. Randy steps out of the car and proceeded to the door then he knocked on it. He wears a shirt and long shorts with sandals which is a very popular summer look. As the door opens, he saw Rachael wearing an elegant outfit that is very trendy. Randy was stunned by her look. He just wanted to kiss her lips but he knows that it is not yet the right time. He took Rachael’s hand and escorted her to his car.

Since Rachael and Randy are one of the most famous couples, it is not advisable for them to go out on their own without any protection. Even though Randy is strong, it is still not enough for him to handle all the paparazzi that were eager to take their pictures and add them on their editorial magazines. They need someone who can handle them all without being afraid of being captured by the camera. Someone might also be planning of kidnapping them for ransom or kill them because of the jealousy for their wealth and fame.

While walking at the beach hand in hand, they were talking about Rachael’s songs that were about to be recorded. Then he said, “I heard that you were about to create a new album.” Then she replied, “Oh yes, we are planning to start the recording on the twenty-first of September! Why did you asked?” Then he said, “Well, I just saw some of your writings. I kinda like the previous album you made but these new songs that you created were… different! They seem to be very sad and I don’t really understand why you created such songs!” Then she chuckled and said, “Well… Yes, I have already reached my all-time dream but it doesn’t mean that there is no reason for me to get sad and sentimental.” He was a bit confused and starts to wonder what made Rachael become so maudlin and starts to think about writing these kinds of songs that deal with a person’s broken heart. He didn’t really know about Rachael’s past boyfriend because she didn’t want anybody to know about it. She just wants it to keep it for herself and tries hard to forget about it. He thought that Rachael will never get a broken heart because every guy will do everything for her just to make her happy and none of them would even dare to break her heart because they will all be feeling lucky when they had her.

Confused and a bit worried, he said, “Rachael, if you have any problems… Do not be afraid to approach me ok? You know that I don’t want you seeing like this!” Then she heaved a sigh and answered, “Randy, I know that you’re a bit worried but I’m fine! You do not have to go over the top because of the songs I write. You may think that these songs are not me but it doesn’t always have to be! It’s life and everybody changes. You just have to deal with it.” Then Randy gave her a hug and kissed her forehead lightly. Suddenly, something just flashed right to their faces. A group of paparazzi came and took a picture out of them. Randy tries to cover their faces then they ran away. The groups of people were so desperate to take their pictures and they followed them. Out of the blue, a mysterious man appeared in front of them and helped them escape from the paparazzi. They followed him to the narrow path between two cottages and headed to the abandoned beach house. Inside the house were only piles of wood and water puddles. It was said that this beach house was destroyed during the last typhoon. The owners of the house just left it and did not return anymore. By the time they entered the house, the man closed the door slowly as he was measuring their distance from the people. As he slowly turned his head to them, his face was slowly revealing. They didn’t notice his face clearly because they were thinking too much on how to escape from the people.


Rachael just saw a familiar face in front her. She became emotional and suddenly asked tensely, “Je… Je… Jeff?” The man looked like her ex-boyfriend. He had these eyes that were brown and deep like His. He has his exact look but more mature. He also had a different haircut. His hair was brushed up. He is wearing a black t-shirt and blue tight jeans. He acted out as if he was confused as he heard the name coming out from her mouth. Randy on the other hand also got confused. The name he heard was just new to him. But he knew that that person was someone special to her but he is afraid that he was one of her past boyfriends. Then the man said, “Huh? Ha… Have we met?” The man pretended that he didn’t really know her. Yes, he is Jeff and he was her boyfriend. Since there was now body found in his conked out car, it may mean that it is possible for him to be alive.



Wanna read chapter 2? Please comment after reading... Thanks!
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oooooo interestingg I want more
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gsb_fairy wrote:

I think u should!! but could u please lower the level of ur exclamatory words? i'm not allowed to read stuff with those.......

Here's a quote,

"Wisdom is supreme; therefore make a full effort to get wisdom. Esteem her and she will exalt you; embrace her and she will honor you."


haha ^^ okay I'll try to make it more pg. but thanks for your comment =D
btw, nice quote! ^^
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What Lies Behind
And What Lies Ahead
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To What Lies Within
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^^^^^^^^^^awsome quotes minna-san! I'm happy to see students actually taking the time to visit the library ^^;

has anyone read a good book lately?
I just finished THE GREAT GATSBY by Fitzgerald
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good fic sensei... demo its more like an "episode" type fic than a fanfic.. but its great!
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Has anyone read my story? What do you think?
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Has anyone read my story? What do you think?


I read it!!! hehe It was interesting and I want more!! ^^
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BurningMaiden wrote:

Has anyone read my story? What do you think?


I read it!!! hehe It was interesting and I want more!! ^^


Wow! Thanks sensei! I'll post the chapter 2 next time...
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yay ^^

okay so anyone read anything good recently?
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OMG TODAY IS MEH MOM'S BIRTH DAY (VERY IMPORTANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

also:

its hitler's birthday (say happy b-day to our favorite crazed dictator)

AND its marijuana smoking day (yay! marijuana)

as for good stories: none, i switched from novels to mangas lolz
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lol
happy birthday to your mom ^^

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