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It's true. I'm not technically a pro. I haven't had anything published..........yet....
I wonder if anyones even awake right now? .-.

Yah, there are some things even I miss when writing. XP
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(I'm awake like at 5:00am writing this since 2:00am. Man I have no life.
Anyways, part 4! Just because I like you guys, I decided to put it up early!

And I forgot to mention it earlier. Chizuru is NOT yuri! Though if it helps, think of her as bi.
Chizuru: *Spits out milk!!!* I'm bi?! So I like girls too?! D>
Nope.....people just think of you as bi.
Chizuru: Oh okay I guess that makes sense.

Now without, further ado...onto the part 4!!! )

-At Chizuru's house-
"...." Tatsuya was staring in awe at the house. Of course he was, it was the first time he was in this kind of situation: Alone with a girl...a pretty girl...in her house...at night..........as I write this, I get pissed off at this lucky S.O.B.
Chizuru plopped herself on the couch, "I'm sorry I made you come here, Ryuzaki-san. But, just to be safe." Chizuru stretched.
"That's great and all, but what was all that back there? They seemed like they knew you and-"
Chizuru had begun taking off her jacket.
O-O!!! "WH-WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!" Tatsuya the pervert had thought of something erotic just from that.
"What?" Chizuru showed her jacket, it was full of tears and rips, not to mention it was dirtier than a wet raccoon. "It got damaged, so I'm taking it off." The shirt Chizuru had been wearing underneath was a plain black sleeveless one with shoulder straps.
"Okay, but...shouldn't you be a little worried about that?"
Chizuru was still bleeding from the head. "What're you talking about?" ....Either she was ignoring or...she really didn't notice that she was bleeding. Not to mention her cheek was also bleeding.
"Here, let me." Tatsuya reached into his bag. He carried around a first-aid kit...what...? It just means he's prepared...like...why don't you carry a first aid-kit in your bags?! >_>
Tatsuya took a seat next to Chizuru, there was a soft cloth in his hand. "Here, I'll clean you up a bit." Tatsuya started wiping the blood away. Afterwards, he put a bandage on her cheek. "Next..." He took a roll of bandages (for lack of a better word) than started wrapping around Chizuru's head, mainly around the bleeding area.
Chizuru stared at Tatsuya intently. Probably thinking that from an outside view, this would've been a very cute and adorable moment between the two.
However, just to spoil the warm, fuzzy mood...Tatsuya kept stealing glances at a certain area. From his angle it was a perfect view. He nearly got a nosebleed from it. "O-Okay, all done!" Tatsuya started wiping the remaining blood away. "That should do for now." Tatsuya really didn't know crap about medical procedures.
"Y-" Chizuru stuttered, "You didn't have to do that for me." Chizuru's cheeks were bright red.
"So, you would've left them like that?" Tatsuya asked.
"Those were minor wounds, they'd have recovered on there own."
'A blow to the head is minor?' Tatsuya knew it really wasn't...but for this girl, it probably was. He still couldn't believe this girl took a steel rod to the head and was still standing here today...of course it would be hard to believe, go try hitting your friends over the head with a steel rod with enough force to knock them across a counter-table and see how many of them wake up? >_>
It was than, at that moment...Tatsuya saw that Chizuru's hands were bandaged up. (In case many of you were wondering what happened to that ribbon back in part 2. ) He wondered if there was a specific reason for it? Of course, there was! Otherwise I wouldn't have pointed it out! D< However, to be evil, I won't tell you, the readers, what it means.
And than, Tatsuya realized that he had not finished his conversation with Chizuru earlier. "By the way, before the incident...you were saying something about Nagi Yuki?"
Chizuru tensed up at the sound of the name, she looked down at her hands with sorrowful eyes. "I...know them..."
"You do!"
"But..!" Chizuru paused.
"Huh?"
"You came here...to learn to draw manga from them?" Chizuru wanted to confirm.
"Y-yah...that's right." Tatsuya wondered why she asked.
"That person...Nagi Yuki...can no longer draw manga, or even use her hands anymore."
"Huh?!" Tatsuya stood up suddenly. "What do you mean 'they can't draw anymore'?!" Tatsuya said it with a raised voice. "Did I come all this way for nothing?!"
"YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND!!!!!!" Chizuru suddenly shouted at the top of her lung. She stood up, "This girl, Nagi Yuki, I know her well. She can't draw anymore...and she will not take on an apprentice either!"
Tatsuya was startled by the sudden change in Chizuru, 'Chizuru?'
"Because...Nagi Yuki is-!" Chizuru paused in mid-speech. Her eyes had suddenly widened...as if seeing something that Tatsuya could not.
Tatsuya saw that she was looking past him, he looked over. But all he could see was a wall? "Nankyou-san?"
She wasn't moving just staring.
"Nankyou-san?!" Tatsuya placed his hands on her shoulders and started shaking her. "Hey, Nankyou-san? What's the matter?! Nankyou-san.......Chizuru-chan!" Tatsuya suddenly called without really thinking.
"Eh?" Chizuru seemed to snap back to reality. Without saying a single word, she turned on her heel, jumped over the couch and started bolting up the stairs.
"Huh?" Tatsuya was utterly baffled by Chizuru's strange behavior. "What was-" Suddenly something came crashing through the windows! When it impacted the ground, it caught fire! "Holy s**t!!! What do you call those? Flaming bottle thingies. Wait, why am I wondering that! I gotta put it out!" Suddenly more started crashing through the windows. O.O!!! "Holy shit! The house is on fire!" Tatsuya rushed to the foot of the stairs. "Chizuru! The house is on fire!" Tatsuya had stopped using the honorific.
"....." No answer.
"Chizuru!"
Chizuru came rushing down the stairs with a bag and......something long wrapped in a cloth. Chizuru looked to the spreading flames. "Ah! I didn't think the flames would spread so quickly!"
"Chizuru, is there another exit?!"
"Only one."
"Great, lets use it!"
"Okay!" Chizuru turned towards the wall. She turned her body to the left, she placed her right hand against the wall. She took a deep breathe and clenched her fists. She punched the wall with her left hand. But the impact was only with the bone in her hand between the knuckles and elbow tips. Not even a second after impact, she rolled up her hand into a fist. A hole in the wall appeared, big enough for them to escape from.
Tatsuya stared at Chizuru's deed, mouth agape and eyes wide in shock; 'She's superhuman!!!' It's true...she was...not literally...but might as well have been.
Chizuru was the first out. She looked to Tatsuya, "Hurry up! Or you'll be burnt to a crisp!"
The house was going up in flames, and Chizuru didn't need to say it twice. Tatsuya was out of there...!
"Quickly, lets escape this place." Tatsuya took Chizuru's hand than started running as far away as he could.
And finally, after running a fair distance away, Chizuru stopped, which caused Tatsuya to stop. "Chizuru, we have to get away from here or-"
Tatsuya could see Chizuru was crying, as she looked back at her burning home.
"Chizuru?"
"It's all gone, everything...has...gone up in flames..." Chizuru started feeling light-headed. She began to feel familiar with the ground (she fell, for those who don't get it) her vision started to go blurry. The last thing Chizuru remembered hearing before everything went black was Tatsuya's worried voice and than the words; "Hang on."
'Why...?' Chizuru wondered as she sank into darkness. 'Am I...not meant to live a free life?'

(-End of part statements-

And there goes part 4. XP
This took me about 2-3 hours to write.
Some things won't make sense here and there...I hope you can forgive me for that.
But on the bright side...nobody wants to mess with Chizuru now that they know she can punch a hole through a wall!
Chibified Chizuru: *Eating ramen.* Hm? Fear me! o(^u^)o
Fear has never been so adorable.

Ironically, the technique Chizuru used IS something I've used on people before...it really hurts if done correctly.

To those asking: I am NOT pro-writer in disguise.
I'm just an average high-school student, whose a reclusive shut in that writes a lot because I have an overactive imagination. Hell, the really dramatic traumatizing stuff hasn't even happened yet! When that happens, if I'm at my 100%, some of you may cry...in fact...I'll be aiming to make some of you cry!!!

Also, like I said, I might draw some illustrations later. Maybe...
And if you're lucky, and I've got enough motivation points. I'll get at least one up by about Tuesday...maybe... So don't get your hopes up. Also, don't expect anything too cool...I'm a WAY better writer than an artist.

Chizuru: So...when is part 4 finally concluded?
In about 5, 4, 3, 2, 1...0...)
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haha...yayyness~ im the first one to comment^^
wow..chizuru is real strong! haha..
this is getting more interesting.. chizuru and tatsuya are eloping next~~ haha
cant wait for the next one...kouta~ thanks for ur story too
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eh....i'm not in highschool yet...

(inner thought:what does that have to do with anything?!)

but, even though you're not a pro-writer(inner thought:YET! me:sorry), you are pretty talented.
Keep it up!

(me:I LOVE GOOD STORIES!!!!!!inner thought: please excuse her, she would be much werider if I wasn't a part of her...)

But try to get good sleep! It's not good for you if you push yourself.

(inner thought:look who's talking. me:ok, ok, but I'm trying not to...)

That's all for now, bye folks!(I.T.: See ya next time, if this idiot doesn't get herself thrown over a shark-infested tank later.)
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*Checks the view counter.*

109 views....... *Faints.* X___X
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noo! *fans Kouta frantically* come on Kouta, it's not that bad! [I.T. Come on, even you've got to admit that's more than he could've bargained for. me: no! he didn't bargain for anything! I.T. ...] Kouta, wake up!
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wa!! good story!! cant wait 4 da next part!! sry 4 not reading it until now hehe^-^' well lyke ppl said,u r a good writer!!^-^ lolz!! imoto-chan i'll help u!!^-^ *waves a donut 2 kouta's nose* XP
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*Awake.*
What happened? *Checks the counter again.* OMG, IT'S RISEN AGAIN!!! *Faints again.* @__@
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lolz!! hee hee! dat means ur page iz popular!!^-^
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haha..minkychan..let niisan help fan him..ill go get the table fan~ and some hot water^^ that ought to wake him up..hehehe

dn worry bout it kouta~ ur page is really nice..so keep it up^^
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There, I posted a drawing on the 2nd post. XP
don't know when the next ones will come.
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Kouta_XIII wrote:

There, I posted a drawing on the 2nd post. XP
don't know when the next ones will come.



O.O?
where?
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Kouta_XIII wrote:

There, I posted a drawing on the 2nd post. XP
don't know when the next ones will come.



O.O?
where?


Its on the first page, around the 2nd story post.
I don't like the way it came out.....too small... -_- *Shall fix eventually.*
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Posted 5/6/08 , edited 5/6/08
Screw it, I took it down. -__-
I'm gonna retry it...or at least draw something else...if anyone wants to see it anyways, I'll send it to you or something.
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Okay there, two pics now. I like these two, so I'll keep them...
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