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oh and also Kouta-kun maybe the next part should be about Tatsuya explaining his story to Hikari or something like that <_<; it's not MY story so i'm not an expert in that domain
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to try to make Hikari's speech better you just hafta go back on Shakespeare. He'll give you an example i'll tell you that much.


Oh yah...in fact, I think I actually have a manga where their speech is the same...only now do I remember. *Goes to read it.*
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Okay, I think I what to do next...
I need to gather my thoughts first, so...I'll start writing in a couple minutes. Hopefully, I'll have the next part up by today...if not...sorry...
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ok but i can't wait

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(Okay, I hope this next part makes sense.
It'll lead up to something, so no worries... And more comedy....YAY COMEDY!!!
Sorry if my skills are lacking today...Someone pissed me off while I was writing this so now I'm mad and sad.....
Sorry it's not finished yet, I couldn't focus today.

5/16/08
Okay, I'll continue now...)

As the two friends, reunited at last talked and reminisced about old times. Tatsuya sat on the porch, watching... "She seems really happy." Tatsuya mumbled to himself.
"They were best friends." Kei was leaning against the wall nearby. "However, Chizuru broke all ties...by the time I realized my mistake, Chizuru was gone. I didn't know where she was, but apparently she knew where we were all along." He scratched the top of his head...
Tatsuya looked up at him, "Broke all ties?" Tatsuya remembered the conversation earlier. "Hey, what exactly happened to Hikari anyways? Somethings wrong with her arms, she's blind, and...the way she walks...is weird." Basically, there was something wrong with Hikari's entire body. It wasn't hard to see...
Kei suddenly grew serious, he crouched to Tatsuya's level and stared at him without blinking.
"....." Tatsuya felt a little uncomfortable. "What?"
"The incident...is something that only Hikari and Chizuru know of. What I do know, because of it...Hikari has never been the same. And now, I shall warn you...Chizuru will tell you when she wishes it. But...Do not ask Hikari of it, for if you do...than you will unleash a terror within her beyond my help."
Tatsuya moved back a little, "What does that mean?"
He shook his head and sighed, knowing he'd have to spell it out...but he wouldn't. Not with Hikari so close. "Trust me...you don't want to do it." Before Tatsuya could ask more questions, Kei had stood up than made his way inside the house.
Tatsuya didn't follow, he just continued to watch Chizuru and Hikari. He was mostly focused on Chizuru however, his eyes widened in interest as he watched Chizuru. 'She looks...really happy...' A light smile appeared on his face, there was a very odd sense of joy when seeing others happy...to evil people, it's weird.
Tatsuya leaned back, with his eyes staring into the sky. 'Still...if I can't learn from Nagi Yuki, than...I guess...I'm on my own. I need some practice.' However...with the prize so close, the only way he could get enough practice is if he was motivated enough. The only way that would happen is if he knew someone was expecting to read it. Same with me, the god of this story, who is lazy. If nobody reads them, than despite how much you want to, you aren't motivated. Most of us need to be seen writing, otherwise it doesn't feel right......I should write that down! I hope someone's reading this.
Suddenly something square, light , and floatable hit Tatsuya in the face... "What the hell?!" He said while the object muffled his speech. Eventually, he gained enough brain power to actually take the thing off his face before he suffocates. It turned out to be a flier, someone probably found it and threw it away and than it ended up here, I wonder what's on it? If he would turn it over than maybe I could-
Tatsuya suddenly fainted...wait, what? He actually fainted...what's on the flier?
.........
It says: "Amateur Manga Artist contest." and than some detailed followed afterwards......Theres some words to describe this situation. Odd convenience or something. Lets check on Tatsuya......Uh-oh...

-about 2 hours later-

"ugh." He was finally stirring, than slowly sat up...he had been lying on the couch. 'Familiar feeling of a couch.' Though the thing his head had been touching felt a little different...it's amazing he didn't notice it. Hands had touched his face and pulled him back down. He was looking up at Chizuru... "Huh?" He wondered if something happened while he had been out...?
"You suddenly fainted in the backyard, stay like this for a little while...I don't want you to faint again."
"S-Sure." Lucky enough, he was able to see Chizuru's chest from a great angle. 'They really are big.' He noticed...
WHACK!!!
"Ow!" Tatsuya reacted to the sudden pain in his forehead. Caused by a karate chop from Chizuru...
"You were thinking something perverted." The eyes of women see all the perverted thoughts of men.
"Sorry." Tatsuya apologized...he had enough courage to admit he was...earning him another smack to the head. Sometimes it's better to stay quiet.
"Tatsuya..." Chizuru showed the flier to Tatsuya. "I found this next to you." There was an odd silence between them. "You're going to do it?"
"Sure, why not?" He said simply.
"...." Chizuru knew that she couldn't say anything to make Tatsuya change his mind...because Tatsuya wouldn't listen anyways. Besides, it's not like Chizuru had any authority to tell him not to. "In that case, we have to prepare you."
"Prepare...we?" Tatsuya didn't get what she meant by those words. He titled his head in confusion. "Kei will help..but...I'm not sure about Hikari. I accidentally read the flier out loud and when she heard it she went straight to her room, haven't seen her since than."
"...." Tatsuya had an idea, hopefully it wouldn't backfire on him like oh so many things in the past... "Where's her room?"
...........................
Tatsuya had been led to Hikari's room, on the wooden door was a sign shaped like a frog with the words: "Hikari's room."
Tatsuya raised his fist to the door, he was about to knock, paused and pulled back a little...hesitating...wuss...finally, he gained the courage to do it. He knocked on the door once, twice, three times.
"Enter." Came Hikari's voice from inside.
Tatsuya opened the door, slowly. The inside of the room looked the same as the downstairs living room...but with the exception of a bed in the top right corner of the room. And a window right next to it, Hikari sat on a chair in front of the window. She had not turned to face Tatsuya, "Thou wishes to draw?" She asked, in an unreadable tone.
"Yah." Tatsuya answered honestly.
"What reasons have thou?"
"...The reasons?" Tatsuya looked down at his trembling hands, "My reasons are..." His memory flashed to when he was but a mere a child. In a hospital room, where doctors surrounded a single bed, the young Tatsuya stood off to the side. He could hear the beeping sound rapidly increasing, until...it suddenly made one sound, the rapidly moving line on the screen went flat. He dropped the book in his hand.
Tatsuya returned to reality, "My reasons are my own...I do not wish to go into it." It was a sad experience to him that he did not wish to relive.
"Is that so?"
"Yah." Tatsuya answered, he looked back to Hikari, he laughed nervously... "Sorry if I brought up some bad memories." Tatsuya apologized, he turned around seeing as how he couldn't figure out what Hikari wanted...?
"Hold!" She called out,
The command in her voice made Tatsuya stop in his tracks, with his hand on the door knob.
"...I..." She faltered, "I wish to watch where thou path will lead."
Tatsuya looked to Hikari, "Really?"
"Aye...However, I am unable to aid thee. Only watch." Hikari heard foot steps. "Kei." She knew he was there.
Tatsuya looked into the door way, no one was there.
"Hikari." A voice spoke from Tatsuya's left.
Tatsuya jumped 2 ft. in the air and 6 inches back, in shock, "Are you some kinda ninja or something?!"
Kei looked over to Tatsuya from the corner of his eyes... "...maybe..."
'What the heck is that supposed to mean?' Tatsuya didn't want to say it out loud.
Kei slowly walked towards Hikari.
For some reason, Tatsuya felt a very odd tension in the room.
Kei was only a few inches away from where, Hikari sat. "I heard already, is that your decision."
Tatsuya felt that something very dramatic was about to happen...
"Aye." She answered without hesitation.
Kei raised his hand.
Wait a minute! What the hell?! O.O
Kei pat the top of her head, phew...that turned out better than I thought. "If that is your decision, I will stand by it."
She reached out for Kei's hand and rubbed her cheek against it. "Thou hath my gratitude." She spoke warmly.
This scene was causing Tatsuya to feel...a little jealous...the mood had changed so suddenly. Tatsuya felt a very odd feeling behind him... 'A killing instinct?' He slowly turned around......There he saw Chizuru with a very annoyed look on her face.
-_- She groaned...
As the main character, Tatsuya must be completely oblivious to the obvious of things.....no matter how much we want to state the obvious...

(This one isn't my best. Oh well...my creation drive isn't working as well as it should right now.
I'll try to get the next one up when I feel a little better...)
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itz going great!!^-^ i actually fell 4 da part where i thought nagi yuki was dead^-^'
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Hey, guys. Just posting to say...
I won't be able to work on my stories this week...There's...something that requires my immediate attention...
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Me too I fell for it you got me there I thought she was dead and your story is great and I cant believe your just a NORMAL HIGH SCOOL student your work is so cool and I think if you submit this to a manga company or someting thell accept it and thisll be a great manga
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i agree with u roxanne-chan!!^-^ okie kouta-kun!! we will wait until ur something iz done^-^
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My something isn't done yet...But, I might as well post the next part...
Gimme a few minutes...
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(Unless my math is off...this should be...
Part 9)

-later that same day-

Originally, Tatsuya was going to pick up some supplies...his own were running low. And the event was soon, so Tatsuya would have to get right on it.
However, it was weird now...because... "Why are you guys following me?!" He turned around to face the three add-ons: Chizuru, Kei, and Hikari. He first pointed at Chizuru...
"You have the keys and I don't know my way home from here." She laughed, despite the fact that Tatsuya didn't know the way back either.
"Next." He pointed to Hikari in the wheel-chair.
Hikari smiled, "Thou requires my assistance when securing provisions and resources." A good answer, meaning...she was gonna help Tatsuya pick out stuff.....how...that's a mystery.
"And finally." He pointed to Kei pushing the wheel-chair.
-__- Kei just stood there, "Because Hikari is going." The simplest of answers.
"Okay fine." Tatsuya just gave up, they all had a valid reason for being there...except Kei. But Tatsuya had a feeling Kei had ninja skills.
The first stop on the list was...the art store. Tatsuya was running low on ink and draft paper, so this was the place to go. Kei and Hikari went in, but Chizuru hung back.
"Chizuru?" Tatsuya waited in the doorway for her.
Chizuru shook her head, "I don't think I'm allowed in here, just go in. I'll be right here when you get back." Chizuru said in a sad tone.
Tatsuya didn't get it, but, oh well. He went inside anyways...he missed the flag moment... -_-

As Tatsuya looked around for what he was looking for, he heard the wheel chair come up behind him.
"Have thou discovered what thou sought?"
"No really? I'm looking for a kind of ink...hmmm...well whichever is cheapest." Tatsuya said as he checked the shelves.
"Thou must not!" Hikari said suddenly.
The result of which caused Tatsuya to jump in surprise...he gets surprised a lot...
"If something doth not cost as much as another, that doth not necessarily mean it is better." She shook her head, she than pointed. "If memory best serve me, at the top doth be Pallet's Special Ink. Make due with that one."
"Ah...yah." Tatsuya obeyed what Hikari said...she was a veteran after all. He reached up to the top, and just like she said...it was there. "Got it." And it wasn't too expensive either, that was good too.
"Now for draft paper."
"If thee would allow me to pose a suggestion?" Hikari asked, pointing to herself.
"...." Hikari had been helpful so far...so why not? "Okay, what's your suggestion?"
"If memory best serves, it may be best for thee to test multiple pens and papers with that ink."
Tatsuya scratched the back of his head, "Are you sure that's alright?"
Hikari nodded, she pushed herself to the front counter.
"....." Tatsuya just watched. He got bored, so he started looking around the store...something that caught his eye was Kei, he was shopping for the same supplies. "Why's he shopping too?"
"Kei shall be thou competition." Hikari's voice said, she was right behind him.
This time Tatsuya didn't jump, "You mean...he'll be competing too?" Tatsuya would have to put his work up against Kei. And the look in Kei's eyes as he scanned his supplies....Why did Tatsuya feel...fear? This overwhelming pressure...Kei was of a higher league, he could feel it...wait...this is a story about mangakas?! Why does it seem like a battle manga?! Will the mangas suddenly turn into powerful beings where the best drawn will be the most powerful and...actually...that would be awesome! ....Too bad that's not what happens here...

(That's the end. I'm aware that Chizuru didn't get a lot of screen time...sorry, Chizuru fans. I'll put more of her later. )
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kay just continue when ur available cause l just keep chekin if u rote something
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Posted 5/29/08
yay! awesome~ -.- i shall restrain myself, from exploding
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Posted 5/30/08
more more more more more!! >.<
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whoa looks good
your drawings are like better than I can draw
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