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Okay, okay, I'll put more. X__x
Gimme a few minutes after I'm done with my other post... X__x;;

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(Behold...Part 10.
Also...
The Kanazuki twins make their appearance here, I wonder if anyone will figure out their secret? )


-Part 10-


-10 minutes later-
"Where are we now?" Tatsuya asked, the sign outside had said, 'Kanazuki print shop'. So they must've been a print shop....obviously...
Hikari raised her finger index finger, "Thou shalt be introduced to your allies." She gave a simple answer. "Kei, might I request thou assist me in seeking out Ohba and Michuru."
"Okay." Kei took the handle bars of Hikari's wheel-chair, than started wheeling her around the store...it was a pretty big store...for a print shop...? Before the two went out of sight, Kei said, "Don't wander off....it's easy to get lost around here."

Tatsuya stood off to the side, "I don't see the point of being here? Shouldn't I be working on the manga?" He was talking to himself in particular, he sighed a great sigh of all sighs. "Hey, Chizuru, I think Hikari wants me to meet the Kanazuki twins." Wow, what a genius...he figured it out. Anyone could've done that. I'd face palm myself right now, but no one would be able to see it.
"Don't worry," Chizuru giggled, "Those two are nice...a little strange...but nice." She smiled at Tatsuya.
Tatsuya returned that smile, he liked seeing Chizuru smile...it gave him a warm fuzzy feeling...in his heart..... maybe his pants? Nah, I'm just kidding, he's not that perverted.
"Hey, Tatsuya, can I ask you a favor?" She unleaned against the wall, walked in front of Tatsuya, than finally tuned to face him. "Do you mind if I stay at your house for a while?" She asked with her hands folded behind her back.
......
A moment of silence as Tatsuya contemplated.
......
More silence, Tatsuya was REALLY lost in thought.
"Tatsuya?" Chizuru questioned, she waved her hand in front of his face.
"Are you kidding?" Tatsuya asked, he wanted to make sure.
"Where else can I go?"
Tatsuya turned around, he placed his hand over his chin...his thinking pose. Yay, a thinking pose.
'Well, I can't exactly throw her out now can I? That's just not like my character, she's fun to be around and it won't feel as lonely at my house...so...I guess it's okay to let her stay. Plus, I think this may be a flag moment that leads up to the 'true love' ending? Tatsuya decided, he didn't even hear the sounds around him while debating inside his mind.
He turned back around, expecting Chizuru, but instead...saw no one there? "What the?" It was than that he heard sounds...happy sounds.
He looked down at his feet.
.....

He stood there, mouth wide open, staring at the event before his feet.

Chizuru had been literally, super glomped by twin girls. They wore a variation of the seifuku, the color scheme was basically black and red...two very awesome colors. Oh, they were also wearing aprons...for...something...like...not getting their uniform dirty?
Since they were twins they're faces looked alike, both of them had different colored hair, one emerald green, the other, navy blue. But they wore their hair in the same style: side-ponytails. The one with navy blue hair had slightly shorter hair than the other. There eyes were an ice-blue color.
"Chizuru-chan!" They both said with joy. "Where've you been, we haven't seen you in so long!" It was amazing how they could speak at the exact same time...kinda odd too.
"Michuru, Ohba." Chizuru greeted, at the same time she was trying to get out of the glomp attack.
"Where've you been?!" Ohba (The one with the navy blue hair) asked with a shine in her eyes.
Michuru pushed her sister out of the way, "Why haven't you tried to contact us?!"
Ohba picked up her sister and tossed her over her shoulder, "Chizuru-chan! We've missed you so much!"
Michuru tackled Ohba, the two than began to wrestle each other.

Tatsuya just stood there. "...." He pulled up a seat...that...just happened to be there and sat down on it. "This is better than television." He watched them wrestle...he really should stop them...but this really is better than television...

(Sorry this one's so short. I'm all storied out for today... X__x ...Been writing since this morning...So...much...wiriting...brain...spiraling...

PS: I remember hearing the word Kanazuki before, but I can't...oh wait...now I remember. .__. )
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Ah, before I forget.
I'm curious...

Here's some voting topics:

-Out of my 3 stories which one is your favorite?
(This one - Still nameless)
(Transcendent)
(Dawn of Wolves and Blades)

-Whose the most badass character I created so far?
(You decide)

-Which girl is the hottest?
(You decide)

-Which dude is the coolest? *Dies a little inside.*
(You decide)

-Do you think I'll ever go over the PG-13 rule?!
(yes)
(no)
(Random option, Fish.)



I'm open to suggestions of other votes.
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Posted 6/6/08
next part plz!!^-^ can i not take ur quizzy? me cant decide!! >.<
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Sure. You don't have to, it's just my own curiousity.

Also, I have been wondering something...
To those of us who've been writing for a LONG time, while you're writing do you ever feel like the parts you're writing could've been better...? Like...you could've added more details, or, made the characters seem more alive in some way?
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Posted 6/15/08
I've been wanting to add a title onto this, but it's still difficult. X__x;;
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Today, I got in trouble at school. I drew a deleted scene in a manga I was working on, like...months ago. Someone found it. They only see the gun, and they think I'm dangerously unstable. And than they show it to the headmaster. -__-
So, now, someone's gonna be coming in later to 'examine' my mental status. -__-

That drawing was meant for comedy purposes. -__- ... *sigh.*
The character in the mini-comic is searching for someone who she's supposed to kill. And she gets lost while chasing him. People take things way too seriously...THEY DON'T EVEN KNOW THE ENTIRE F***ING STORY!!!
In the end the girl ends up saving the dude's life from other people who want to kill him. -__-
However, the examiners will probably only see that I'm a teenage dude, who been playing video games since he learned how to walk, watched Animes since he was born, read comics all his life, and the fact that I'm anti-social to levels where I'll stay inside 24/7. -__- ... *sigh.* They probably won't even listen to what I have to say about the story the drawing is based on.
In fact, a central theme in the story is: "Whatever you've done in the past, there will always be someone out there who accepts you."
And also, "Protect the ones you love."
So, I'm a little annoyed now...

Other than that stuff...I'll be back later to post the next part. Just need to gather my thoughts and play some games.
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O_O wow that was harsh. That happens to me. Once during a parent teacher interview at my school there was a little folded up and crunch paper and my principal who was supervising classes time to time found this a the foot of my desk and she read it. Sometimes i like to write quotes or these random lines that pop into my head out of nowhere like that and if i think about it for a while i'll be like "yeah! that's good for my story!" and then i write it down. -.- the next i was called to the office and she asked me if i was mentally unstable. i just stared back at her. ¬_¬ seems like she's the one with problems these days.
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(Yep, life sucks...
Hopefully, this next part won't suck...

Also, Tatsuya's elder brother will make an appearance later... Once I get his character cool enough. )

-Part 11-

After the wrestling match, Ohba and Michuru were now greeting Tatsuya. "Welcome," They said in perfect synchronization, like they had one mind...which was also sort of creepy at the same time. "So, do you have anything to print?" They asked once again, in perfect synchronization...honestly, now it was getting really creepy.
"Not yet, but, I will soon." Tatsuya answered honestly, but also felt a little awkward for being here and not having anything.
"Oh I see," It was Ohba who said this, she grasped onto Tatsuya's hand. Staring at him with her eyes in a way that was saying, 'I want you.'
Or something along those lines, this wasn't an H-game so things didn't exactly happen like that.

"Hey, come with me to the back room." Ohba started guiding Tatsuya, "I'll be out in a little while, Michuru." ...Okay...apparently, it DOES work like that. Too bad Tatsuya didn't know what I, Chizuru, Hikari, Kei, and Michuru knew....he would find out the hard way...like so many others...

Hikari and Kei appeared, "Hey, Tatsuya." Kei began, but saw that Ohba was leading Tatsuya away. "...." He said nothing.
Hikari didn't even know.
Michuru pouted, and walked off in another direction.
Chizuru merely watched Tatsuya being led away, with a smile on her face. "Perverts will get what's coming to them."
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Now in the back room, Tatsuya watched Ohba climb a ladder. Resisting the urge to look up...because she said she'd kill him if he did, and he kinda liked having his head turned not being turned around.

"Here it is," Ohba said at last after rummaging through some stuff. She started climbing down the ladder, with a slip of paper in her mouth. She spit it out and handed it to Tatsuya, "That's the print shops number on the top." She placed a finger on her lip, "And that's...my house number." There was a number written on the bottom.

"Uhhhh..." For Tatsuya, a guy with very little female experience, this was kinda embarrassing for him...in a way. He hardly knew Ohba, for one thing.

Ohba leaned against Tatsuya, "...Hey, what if I said I wanted to kiss you?" She asked in a cute-like voice. This chick moved fast.

"Wh-Wh-wh-what?!" That...was the only reaction Tatsuya gave. It was to be expected, I couldn't possibly turn this into an H-story...could I? ...Nope...definitely not...

-End-
(Short end because my creative drive is shifting to violence now. So... *Goes off to type the next part in a more violent story.* )
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Posted 6/17/08
I Like your story a lot but now um its kinda getting a little boring no offense
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Posted 6/17/08 , edited 6/17/08
It's okay.
Everyone can say what they have to.
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(Because I don't feel like doing this project I'm supposed to be doing, I'll post something...before I forget.
Also, I want to see people puke out their insides uncontrollably when they know Ohba's secret...

For the record, what happens in this post does NOT mean anything about my personal preferences...I just did it because it was hilarious to me. )

-Part 12-


"Heh," Ohba touched Tatsuya's lip with her index finger, "Shhhh..." She made Tatsuya quiet, "Just sit back." She moved in closer. "And fall into it." She pressed her lips against his, it was a kiss...

Tatsuya couldn't say anything, because he was kinda being kissed here. So, what else could he do? But accept it...even though he had no idea who exactly he was kissing.

Eventually, Ohba pulled away. "How'd you like that?" She asked.

"...." Tatsuya couldn't say anything at all. Something...felt weird about it...? Obviously it would because Ohba is-

"Than, lets step it up to another level." She placed her hands on the ends of her uniform...OKAY THIS IS MOVING WAY TOO FAST!!!

Do something you moron! Or you'll see a very horrifying secret! "W-Wait!" Tatsuya steadied Ohba's hands, "This...sort of thing! You can't just...give it to me so quickly! We just met and..." Tatsuya was trailing off... "Wait, aren't you technically jail-bait?" That was true too.

"Tee-hee." She laughed, "Relax, you're very cute, and I like you. Though I won't force you either." She kissed his cheek, and giggled.

"Hey, Ohba." Michuru called from the backroom's door, "....You did it again didn't you...?" She could already guess her sister's habits.

"Tee-hee." Ohba laughed, "Relax, I actually like him." She turned to Tatsuya and smiled.

"Honestly, Ohba, don't you have any problems with this?!" She protested in a raised voice.

Ohba cleaned out her ear, "Not really." She responded simply...
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When coming out of the print shop and saying their good byes to Hikari and Kei, Tatsuya and Chizuru were now heading home.
"By the way, Tatsuya, you seem kinda happy?"

"Do I?" Tatsuya smiled to himself. "I guess I do."

"...You got kissed by Ohba didn't you?" She guessed, because she knew Ohba well enough.

"Eh?!" Tatsuya turned chibi and stepped away, "How did you know?!"

Chizuru turned Chibi too, "Because you're not her first kiss...though...because you're happy I assume she didn't go all the way, or you just like that sort of thing." She spoke of Ohba as if there was some sort of horrible secret. "Though, your lucky Michuru got there."

"What do you mean?" Tatsuya's face said he didn't know. "Something wrong with those sisters?"

"...Sisters?" Chizuru looked at Tatsuya like he was crazy. "You really don't know?"

"Know what?"

Chizuru nearly burst out laughing....and she did...falling on her back, holding her sides with her legs kicking in the air. "You kissed Ohba and you didn't even know."

"No..." Tatsuya felt like...there was something he should know. "Know what exactly?"

Chizuru stopped laughing long enough to explain, "Michuru and Ohba...aren't sisters...They're sister and brother!" Chizuru continued laughing, now rolling on her sides.

Tatsuya turned to stone with a crack down the middle, his face was like: 'WTF!!!'
He shakingly pointed to Chizuru, "Pl-Please tell me that Ohba is the sister..." Though that was unlikely...

Chizuru responded with an even louder laugh, that meant 'no'...

Tatsuya was now completely turned to stone, the wind blowing by him...he...had...fallen into...a trap...

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When Tatsuya got home, he spent all his time in the bathroom...but they don't make water hot enough to scrub away the taint of being caught in a trap...

(I hope some of you vomit while reading this like I nearly did half-way into writing this. Or laugh your asses off. Still, if I ever draw this or find someone to draw it, it should have accomplished it's comedic goals...)
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lolz^-^ next part :]
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Posted 6/20/08 , edited 6/20/08
I was able to draw characters, and even though I was the FIRST person at the scanner, other people kept cutting in front of me, so I didn't even get to scan my hard work.

So now, if I don't find a scanner this weekend, I have to go BACK to school to use the scanner there.
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awws...dont u have 2 pay 2 use da skools scanner? :[
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