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I spent a little time editing but basically I wrote this as i thought it up. I'd write more but i spend too much of my ideas on my book i'm attempting to write :/
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Posted 8/22/08

atatakakunai wrote:


Kujin-jump wrote:


atatakakunai wrote:

Anyone have any criticism? I not only take suggestions, I welcome them with open arms. How else is one to get better?


I..................that..................my gosh. Comparing yours to mine, i feel like some kinda........ameture.


I wouldn't say that! I love the stories I read from you!


Just got done editing the story to make it sound a little more 'professional' anyone please feel free to tell me whether you enjoyed this version or the old one better.

And thank you all for your input, I look further ahead with a grateful heart to any and all of the comments you can give :D


You...............do? Wow, i thought i was crap! But really? Me? Good? Well, even if it is true, i could never, EVER, compare to you! 2 darn good!
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pffft Im no good, just an average person trying to make my writing decent at least yours is more creative and outside thinking than mine.
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