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Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide A body lay on the floor which seemed to be uninjured. Apart from that and a shattered window, the room was untouched. But a very essential part to the room was missing... May. Yyu-kun fell to his knees, and put his face in his hands. She was gone, they had taken her. Yyu-kun wasn’t exactly sure who, but he knew they had to be related to the vampires. Who else would have gone through so much trouble to take her. If it was your common thief, why was nothing valuable taken. Sado walked in silently. He looked confused and sad. “Yuu-kun, I have called the cops, I didn’t know what else to do.” Yyu-kun remained speechless and remained kneeling. Sado looked at him one last time, then turned his back and walked outside of the room, trying to avoid the splinters of the door. Sado wandered the house looking for clues. He ambled toward the kitchen where his foot struck a dead body. Sado looked down to look at what he had hit. He then saw the dead vampire with the knife imbedded in his heart. He searched the pockets of his dark cloak. He found nothing. He pulled back the hood to get a better look. His hair was silver, his eyes were losing their brilliant red, his razor-sharp fangs were retreating into normal teeth. He had a pair of shining silver earrings which were pentagrams. Sado’s eyes drifted up the vampire’s face to his forehead where a sigil was branded on his skin. Sado’s eyes flashed, a flash of pain was sent through Sado’s skull. Then it was over, as if nothing had happened. “Just imagined it, you can imagine anything at a time like this”. Sirens could be heard rushing towards the house. Yyu-kun walked down the stares with a look of determination. “Sado, we are going.” “Going? Going where Yyu-kun?” replied Sado. “We are going to see a friend of mine., you coming?” asked Yyu-kun. “Of course I am coming, lets get out of here.” Sado tossed Yyu-kun a helmet and strapped on his own. Yyu-kun caught it in the air with one hand, and put it on quickly. Sado hopped onto the bike with Yyu-kun getting on behind him. Soon they arrive at the house in the forest thanks to Yyu-kun’s directions. Yyu-kun walked up to the door and knocked. “Rin.... I need your help...” The door opened, Rin stood fully equipped. Her silver hair flowing in the wind. She smiled. “I know Yyu-kun. So what is it you need help with?”. Yyu-kun responded, “It is my sister, they have taken her. I am not sure where they went, not even sure why they want her. Is it revenge?” “How about you come in, I will explain it more in there, your friend can come too, I suppose it is too late for him to turn back.” Yyu-kun walked in hesitantly, Sado followed behind silently. Neither of the two bothered to take off their shoes. “It is nothing big, just a little something the organization put together for me on short notice. We didn’t really expect her to be here.” “Who didn’t you expect to be here?” asked Sado. “And what is going on here? Those weren’t some petty thieves were they?” “We didn’t expect May to be here, the key. A lot of things are going on here, but I think you are referring to the incident. They weren’t petty thieves, they were vampires, and they discovered the key a little faster than we did,” stated Rin calmly. “The key? What is the key?” asked Yyu-kun. “The key? The key is your sister Yyuusei. The key, is May. And if we don’t hurry, there will be no chance of getting her back. The only chance of getting her back, lies with me. I know where she has gone, and I know how to get there. However, I will only take you there and help you on two conditions.” “Name them and they are done,” Yyu-kun exclaimed. “Be careful of what you say Yyuusei, you don’t know the weight of these conditions. First, you mustn’t leave before the day I say you are ready. Second, you must”- “I don’t care what it is I must do, I will do it for May under any condition,” interrupted Yyuusei. Rin spoke, “Sado, do you wish to help also? There are no conditions for you. You don’t apply to his situation.” Sado replied, “There is no place where Yyu-kun can go without me, and there is no place May will go that I wont follow.” “Ok then, lets get training!” exclaimed Rin. To be continued.... All done, PLEASE READ AND COMMENT =) |
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Great. One of the best, very mysteryous in the begining.
Ok I think it's not yet finished so how about to call episode 5 "Behaind The Shadows" because you should reveal their world in this episode... I was also thinking that next episodes should be called The Training , maybe to be expanded in more episodes... Anyways I'm glad that I helped whit the key yeah half-blood, may needs to open the portal. Am I right? Oh I just spoil it to everyone. |
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very nice episode i truly wonder what is going to happen in the next episode, also just to ask the "may spoke" part, did she really speak??
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wow this is a gud ep!
but just wonderin u hvnt explained wen or how he found out about vampires he just sort of became one and knew strait away! u just need to add maybe a chapter inbetween or extend one to explain how he came to know for sure wot he is, I dont think hed just say " oh iv chnaged I bet im a vampire" I doubt he even beleived vampires where real before this! other than that keep 'em coming they get better every time! ![]() Lol, thanks for the encouragment, and you are probably right about the whole vampire thing. Thanks. =) |
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But was it may that spoke in this sentence : May spoke, “Sado, do you wish to help also? There are no conditions for you. You don’t apply to his situation. or was it rin? |
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animejoy95 wrote: Exiting... But was it may that spoke in this sentence : May spoke, “Sado, do you wish to help also? There are no conditions for you. You don’t apply to his situation. or was it rin? thas rin mays not thr (anyone correct me if im wrong) |
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I think it was Sado thinking that.
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FallenAngel159 wrote: animejoy95 wrote: Exiting... But was it may that spoke in this sentence : May spoke, “Sado, do you wish to help also? There are no conditions for you. You don’t apply to his situation. or was it rin? thas rin mays not thr (anyone correct me if im wrong) Lol, Dang it! it happened several times throughout the story. I keep mixing up Rin And May, really sorry about that, going to fix it now. ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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stash77 wrote: very nice episode i truly wonder what is going to happen in the next episode, also just to ask the "may spoke" part, did she really speak?? Yeah... I answered that in the previous comment. ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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very good its getting more and more interesting as u go on cant wait 4 the next one
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nice episode Ichigo... very exciting XD
about the police part... loool, they left without informing the cops just 2 let u know =P but if it was part of their character 2 leave without talkin 2 them first thats kool and interesting. |
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CloudChaser wrote: nice episode Ichigo... very exciting XD about the police part... loool, they left without informing the cops just 2 let u know =P but if it was part of their character 2 leave without talkin 2 them first thats kool and interesting. yeah, Yyu-kun didnt want to wait around and talk about it. Be kinda hard to explain lol. So he figured he would do what he could to save May himself. The May "Arc" wont happen for like another 2 episodes |
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Ichigo-bankai wrote: CloudChaser wrote: nice episode Ichigo... very exciting XD about the police part... loool, they left without informing the cops just 2 let u know =P but if it was part of their character 2 leave without talkin 2 them first thats kool and interesting. yeah, Yyu-kun didnt want to wait around and talk about it. Be kinda hard to explain lol. So he figured he would do what he could to save May himself. The May "Arc" wont happen for like another 2 episodes o ok, that explains a lot XD... well can't wait to read the up coming chapters =P THE SUSPENSE IS KILLIN ME!!!! O.O |
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I think you did really well, but there is one word you need to change from worry to hurry.
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in a never ending cycle.....
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