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Posted 5/4/08
I think it's a cosplay too. ^^
Btw, your fanfic is very very good!
I'm sorry i hadn't reviewed for so lang time, but i hadn't seen that there were more chapters!
Posted 5/4/08
Anwer: It's a play, Cinderella changed version. Congratulations to everybody, and specially to MissGabbe who was the one that was the closest to the answer.

The School Festival

School festival is near. All the students started talking about what they could do this year. But they couldn’t agree what to do. So the teacher decided to write all their ideas in small pieces of paper and put them inside a box and then she’ll pick one without seeing and that’ll be what they are going to do. The teacher picked acting. Then she said that she wanted them to perform Cinderella.
Stud: but teacher, how are we going to choose our rolls?
Tea: that’s right. Ah! I know, let’s do the same as we did with the decision we made before. I’m going to write all the rolls in small papers and each one will pick one and then they will perform what they picked
Stud: that’s a good idea, teacher
Tea: so, let’s begin!
One by one went to pick their rolls. After that, each one showed their small pieces of paper to the teacher and she wrote them on the board and saw which one had which roll. After she finished with the small rolls, she said.
Tea: so let’s see, who has the main rolls? Who has the Princess roll?
Higu: Me. I’m the Princess
Fuji: Yeah! So you’re going to be my Princess, right?
Higu: what’re saying? I’m the Princess of this performance.
Fuji: you’re right! You’re this performance Princess. That means you’re my Princess, because I’m the Prince.
Hitsu: ( what?!)
Higu: eh? You’re the Prince?
Tea: so, we have the Prince and the Princess. But I think that is missing one.
Hitsu: <_<; yeah…Me. I’m the Fairy Godmother.
Everybody was extremely surprised when he said that he had the Fairy Godmother roll.
Tea: so, we know all the rolls. Let’s start our rehearsal tomorrow. By the way, I almost forget. Who is going to be the writer?
Mina: Me.
Tea: so, everything is settled. Work hard.
Stud: yes!!!
Mina: Yes!. I’m going to write an amazing story that will touch everyone’s heart. We have not much time, I have to hurry and start writing. By the way, teacher can I change the story?
Tea: Eh? What do you mean?
Mina: I don’t want to write the same Cinderella story. I want to make some changes
Tea: M…it’s a good idea, because everybody knows that story. If we change the story it would make it more interesting. Ok, but make sure to write a touching story, ok?
Mina: thank you. I’ll work hard.

What kind of changes Minamino is going to make?
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i think minamino is going to make whity-chan the fairy godfather fall in love with the princess instead of that one other guy. xP i keep forgeting his name but they should makie it more interesting like the prince being mean and whity-chan saving her xP
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i think minamino is going to make whity-chan the fairy godfather fall in love with the princess instead of that one other guy. xP i keep forgeting his name but they should makie it more interesting like the prince being mean and whity-chan saving her xP


You have a lot of imagination. I think you should write a fanfic, too
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A: hmm.......probably everything is gonna go topsy-turvy! like the "prince charming" will become the "prince not-so-charming" and the princess will be mean and all...... lolz
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moonlit_angel wrote:

i think minamino is going to make whity-chan the fairy godfather fall in love with the princess instead of that one other guy. xP i keep forgeting his name but they should makie it more interesting like the prince being mean and whity-chan saving her xP


You have a lot of imagination. I think you should write a fanfic, too

really? but i have no that much imagination to come up with like a fanfic...but do you really think so?
Posted 5/5/08

moonlit_angel wrote:


fantasy4ever999 wrote:


moonlit_angel wrote:

i think minamino is going to make whity-chan the fairy godfather fall in love with the princess instead of that one other guy. xP i keep forgeting his name but they should makie it more interesting like the prince being mean and whity-chan saving her xP


You have a lot of imagination. I think you should write a fanfic, too

really? but i have no that much imagination to come up with like a fanfic...but do you really think so?

Of course why not? Everyone has imagination. They could write fanfics if they want to, you can, too if you want to.
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moonlit_angel wrote:


fantasy4ever999 wrote:


moonlit_angel wrote:

i think minamino is going to make whity-chan the fairy godfather fall in love with the princess instead of that one other guy. xP i keep forgeting his name but they should makie it more interesting like the prince being mean and whity-chan saving her xP


You have a lot of imagination. I think you should write a fanfic, too

really? but i have no that much imagination to come up with like a fanfic...but do you really think so?

Of course why not? Everyone has imagination. They could write fanfics if they want to, you can, too if you want to.

but it's hard... i can't think about stuff like that
Posted 5/6/08
Answer: She used two Princes instead of one Prince

The performance (Part 1)

A week later, Minamino finished the story. She talked about it in the classroom.
Mina: so everyone. After many days of work, my masterpiece is finally finished. Right now, I’m going to tell you the changes that I made. First, there won’t be a Prince in the story.
Stud: Eh?! What?
Mina: there will be two Princes
Stud: eh? Awesome.
Girl: so who’s going to be the second Prince?
Mina: of course it will be Hitsugaya-kun
Fuji: why does it have to be him?
Mina: that’s because it reminds me of the real life. Both of them are fighting because of Yukiko-chan.
Girl: but, he has the Fairy Godmother roll
Mina: I know, that’s why I’ll take that roll
Fuji: I don’t agree. I won’t let him to be the second Prince. Higurashi-san is mine
Higu: wait a minute, I don’t belong to anyone!!!
Hitsu: that’s right. Perhaps you’re afraid to lose to me again.
Higu: ( Shirou-kun…)
Fuji: Anyway. Minamino, can you show me the script?
Mina: sure.
Fuji read the final of the story, and then he changed his face.
Fuji: Minamino, what’s the meaning of this?
Mina: eh? What do you mean?
Fuji: the final, why doesn’t it say whose going to end with Higurashi-san?
Mina: Because I couldn’t decide who’s the one who’s pairing with Yukiko-chan, so I prefer to let the public decides that
Hitsu: the public?
Fuji: what do you mean?
Mina: our performance is going to be in two parts. We’ll act the first part and then we’ll ask the audience which Prince does they liked the most, and that one will be pairing with the Princess
Hitsu: so, the final part is in our hands
Mina: No, I said in the audience’s hands
Hitsu: I know, but they decide based on what we show to them. If I show to them that I deserve to be pairing with Yuki, they’ll decide to choose me.
Mina: Mmm…yeah you can say that.
Fuji: Yes! I won’t disappoint you, Higurashi-san
Higu: ( Why should I be disappointed?)
After they practiced for many days, the day they were waiting for finally came. They wore their costumes and stood in the stage.
They raised the curtain and the performance started.
P1 (Fuji): Steve, my parents told me that I need to get married. Can you organize a party and invite all the people of the city?
Ste: of course, My Prince. I’ll start immediately
Meanwhile in Cinderella’s house, Cinderella is working.
Cind: why do I have this kind of life? I’d like to meet someone and get married, so I won’t have to do this kind of tasks. Why dad? Why did you leave me alone?
Mot: stay quiet and continue cleaning
Cind: yes mom.
A few minutes later, a messenger came with an invitation to go to the palace.
Mot: dears, we were invited to go to the party in the palace tomorrow, so make sure to impress the Prince, ok? It could be that one of you will be marrying him
Daus: Yes mom
Cind: can I go, too?
Mot: if you can leave the house cleaned before leaving, you can go
Cind: really?
Mot: <_<; ah
Next day, Cinderella woke up very early to clean the house. In the afternoon, she had finished.
Cind: Mom, I finished
Mot: <_<; you’re right
Cind: so can I go?
Mot: you don’t have clothes
Cind: you can lend me a dress
Mot: <_<; why should I?
She saw them leaving, and then she started crying. Suddenly a Fairy Godmother appeared
Fai: why are you crying?
Cind: who are you?
Fai: I’m your Fairy Godmother. Tell me what’s wrong
Cind: they didn’t let me go, they teased me saying that if I finished my work they’ll let me go.
Fai: don’t worry, I’ll help you
Cind: how?
Fai: I’m a Fairy, I can use magic. I’ll give you a beautiful dress, heel, and a horse car, too. But I have a condition, the magic only lasts until twelve, so make sure to come back before that time, ok?
Cind: thank you.
Cinderella went to the party, when she came in, everybody was looking at her. She looked beautiful. She started walking around, suddenly she met the Prince. When he saw her, he fell in love in the first sight. He invited her to dance. They started dancing.
P1: You’ll be my Queen
Cind: eh? Are you forcing me to?
P1: You can say that, but I’m very confident that you will love me after we get married
Suddenly the clock rang, saying that it was already twelve. She got out there desperately, the Prince went after her. She was in such a hurry that she left her heel on the stairs. She wanted to come back to pick her heel, but the Prince was behind her. She got to the horse car. The horse car started running and running, but there was no more time, the magic disappeared, she fell down from the horse car and hit her head, she was unconscious.
Next day she woke up. She figured out that she was in an unknown place. The room was big, pretty, and there were many maids around her. She was scared then. Suddenly a good looking guy entered to the room. She was charmed by him. She didn’t know what to say.
P2 (Hitsu): are you ok?
Cind: yes. Thanks for saving me
P2: why were you in such place?
Cind: I was looking for something, and then I fell down from a cliff.
P2: I see. Would you like to stay and live here?
Cind: eh? What do you mean?
P2: when I found you, I knew that you were the person I was looking for
Cind: what do you mean?
P2: I would like you to be my Queen. Would you accept me?
Cind: eh?! ( Shirou-kun… This isn’t the moment to think about that) Are you serious?
P2: of course. A Prince never lies.
That was the first part of the performance.

Question: what's the reason that makes Cinderella to pick her Prince?
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i don't really understand the question this time o_O
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i don't really understand the question this time o_O


I mean, based on what (appearance, money, personality, etc) she is going to choose the Prince
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personality (uh if it can be mor than 1 personality and appearance but if only 1, personality!)
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moonlit_angel wrote:

i don't really understand the question this time o_O


I mean, based on what (appearance, money, personality, etc) she is going to choose the Prince


she's going to choose the prince because of his personality but...whity-chan's cute >.< but she can't ONLY like him because he's cute....i like his personality and how cute he is >///< but that one other guy he's just annoying
Posted 5/10/08
Answer: His personality

The Performance (Part 2)

Mina: Ladies and gentlemen. Which Prince should Cinderella choose? Please write it down and put it in the box that my classmate is carrying with.
After a while they counted the papers and the one they chose was the second Prince, Hitsugaya. According to what they chose, they showed the second part.

Cind: But first I have to return home and inform it to my family.
P2: Ok. I’ll go with you
Both of them went to Cinderella’s home riding a horse. When they arrived there, they found a horse car outside the house. There was a man carrying a heel, the heel that she left behind when she was running down the stairs.
Ste: do you live here?
Cind: yeah, what do you need?
Ste: My Prince asked me to find the girl that left this heel while she was leaving the party, so could you please try to use this heel?
Cind: It’s not necessary, because I know that it belongs to me
Ste: really?
Cind: yes.
Ste: But anyway you have to try it and let me see, so I can believe you
Cind: it’s not necessary, because I’m getting married with this person.
Ste: eh? But how? It was just 2 days since the party. Did you love him before meeting the Prince?
Cind: No, I met him when I left the party. He saved me.
After she said that, the first Prince entered the house. He looked around and asked.
P1: where’s the girl that left the heel?
Cind: I’m here.
P1: You? It’s impossible. You’re not the person I’m looking for.
Cind: It looks like you’re that kind of person that only looks appearances
P1: Now that I look carefully it’s really you. I see. So you’re choosing him instead of me, right?
Mot: But why are you choosing her, if I have two more daughters?
P1: <_<; I’m not interested in your other daughters, I just love her.
P2: I’m sorry for you, but she’ll marry me
P1: Ok. I understand, but at least, can you tell me why did you choose him?
Cind: because he saw the real me. He met me as I am, wearing this kind of clothes, even so he loves me. But you, you fell in love with me, because you saw me beautiful, you were looking my appearance, you weren’t looking the real me, the one inside. Besides that you were forcing me to marry you just because you’re a Prince, you think that you can order a person to feel a way, but this Prince, he asked me if I wanted to be his Queen, he didn’t order me to do it. That’s why I prefer to marry him.
P1: You’re right. I’m a person who looks only the appearance of people. I haven’t seen them as they are. I’m glad to be able to meet you. You showed me my mistake. I know what to do since today thanks to you. Congratulations for marrying such a good guy. I wish you to have a happy life with you’re husband.
Cind: Thank you.
Cinderella and the second Prince got married and lived their lives happily.
The performance ended and everybody was very happy. They stood up and clapped their hands so loudly.

Question: the next chapter is Promise, what kind of promise Shirou-kun made to Higurashi? Find it next chapter.
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>.< a promise to protect her and stay by her side forever >.<
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