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Heh by me
inspired by my daily events i do to get the love of a girl

I often see you alone, I rarely talk to you.
As I get to know you more, we become friends.
A friend so dear, to whom I'd give my life to.
As we grow more intimate with one another, I often wonder if that smile is really meant for me.
I wonder how you feel about me;
Am I too lame? Am I too Dumb? Or, am I not good enough for you?
I try feverishly day and night, trying to make you smile.
For your smile is always an event I look forward to everyday.
Our conversations are what make my day complete.
I couldn't succumb to the feelings at first, but now I understand,
That it is love that makes me feel attached to you.
When you were alone and needed comfort,
I did my best to cheer you up.
When you're feeling down, it darkens my day.
Do you feel that special spark, that lights my heart and makes it's mark?
Why can't I ask you out? Why can't I have you close to my heart?
I still don't know... Is it fear that makes me shy away from the circumstances?
I go by day to day, doing the same things, hoping you will notice me,
and love me for who I am. I care for you dearly, so much more than you will ever know.
I guess I was wrong in the beginning, when I first said I'd risk my life for yours, I now want to say
that along with my life, I want you to have my love.
As I hope that one day, you may feel the same way.


Posted 4/18/08
Aww so cute
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azndisaster wrote:

Heh by me
inspired by my daily events i do to get the love of a girl

I often see you alone, I rarely talk to you.
As I get to know you more, we become friends.
A friend so dear, to whom I'd give my life to.
As we grow more intimate with one another, I often wonder if that smile is really meant for me.
I wonder how you feel about me;
Am I too lame? Am I too Dumb? Or, am I not good enough for you?
I try feverishly day and night, trying to make you smile.
For your smile is always an event I look forward to everyday.
Our conversations are what make my day complete.
I couldn't succumb to the feelings at first, but now I understand,
That it is love that makes me feel attached to you.
When you were alone and needed comfort,
I did my best to cheer you up.
When you're feeling down, it darkens my day.
Do you feel that special spark, that lights my heart and makes it's mark?
Why can't I ask you out? Why can't I have you close to my heart?
I still don't know... Is it fear that makes me shy away from the circumstances?
I go by day to day, doing the same things, hoping you will notice me,
and love me for who I am. I care for you dearly, so much more than you will ever know.
I guess I was wrong in the beginning, when I first said I'd risk my life for yours, I now want to say
that along with my life, I want you to have my love.
As I hope that one day, you may feel the same way.




Awww....that was adorable >< I hope you get the love of the person you like ^^
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moonwarrior485 wrote:

Awww....that was adorable >< I hope you get the love of the person you like ^^


thanks, i appreciate it =]
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azndisaster wrote:

Heh by me
inspired by my daily events i do to get the love of a girl

I often see you alone, I rarely talk to you.
As I get to know you more, we become friends.
A friend so dear, to whom I'd give my life to.
As we grow more intimate with one another, I often wonder if that smile is really meant for me.
I wonder how you feel about me;
Am I too lame? Am I too Dumb? Or, am I not good enough for you?
I try feverishly day and night, trying to make you smile.
For your smile is always an event I look forward to everyday.
Our conversations are what make my day complete.
I couldn't succumb to the feelings at first, but now I understand,
That it is love that makes me feel attached to you.
When you were alone and needed comfort,
I did my best to cheer you up.
When you're feeling down, it darkens my day.
Do you feel that special spark, that lights my heart and makes it's mark?
Why can't I ask you out? Why can't I have you close to my heart?
I still don't know... Is it fear that makes me shy away from the circumstances?
I go by day to day, doing the same things, hoping you will notice me,
and love me for who I am. I care for you dearly, so much more than you will ever know.
I guess I was wrong in the beginning, when I first said I'd risk my life for yours, I now want to say
that along with my life, I want you to have my love.
As I hope that one day, you may feel the same way.




Awww its really cute!
you really explains the felings for the person in this poem really great work^^
good choic whit the pic I have readed the manga xD
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Yamira wrote:

Awww its really cute!
you really explains the felings for the person in this poem really great work^^
good choic whit the pic I have readed the manga xD


haha thanks, this poem is really about me though. xD
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Yamira wrote:

Awww its really cute!
you really explains the felings for the person in this poem really great work^^
good choic whit the pic I have readed the manga xD


haha thanks, this poem is really about me though. xD


well then you really did a good job describing your felings! ^o^
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Yamira wrote:

well then you really did a good job describing your felings! ^o^


and again, thank you =]
Posted 4/19/08
That's a really sweet poem! Great job on it!
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BreezyBlossoms23 wrote:

That's a really sweet poem! Great job on it! :)


heh, thank you. I was thinking about my own personal things going on in my life when i wrote the poem x|
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kagura4 wrote:

Aww so cute :)


heh, thank you =]
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moonwarrior485 wrote:

Awww....that was adorable >< I hope you get the love of the person you like ^^


thanks, i appreciate it =]


You're welcome...^^ Best of luck
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