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Posted 4/18/08 , edited 4/19/08
Heh by me
inspired by my daily events i do to get the love of a girl

I often saw you alone, I rarely talked to you.
As I got to know you more, we become friends.
A friend so dear, to whom I'd give my life to.
As we grew more intimate with one another, I often wonder if that smile was really meant for me.
And now I wondered how you truly feel about me;
Am I too lame? Am I too Dumb? Or, am I not good enough for you?
I try feverishly day and night, trying to make you smile.
For your smile is always an event I look forward to everyday.
Our conversations are what make my day complete.
I couldn't succumb to the feelings at first, but now I understand,
That it is love that makes me feel attached to you.
When you were alone and needed comfort,
I did my best to cheer you up.
When you're feeling down, it darkens my day.
Do you feel that special spark, that lights my heart and makes it's mark?
Why can't I ask you out? Why can't I have you close to my heart?
I still don't know... Is it fear that makes me shy away from the circumstances?
I go by day to day, doing the same things, hoping you will notice me,
and love me for who I am. I care for you dearly, so much more than you will ever know.
I guess I was wrong in the beginning, when I first said I'd risk my life for yours, I now want to say
that along with my life, I want you to have my love.
As I hope that one day, you may feel the same way.

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Posted 4/18/08
wow .....if it was up to me id give you poet of the year. nothing else could so perfectly called to mind the sentiments of my past . i thought it was great in every way.
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Posted 4/19/08

Takumoto wrote:

wow .....if it was up to me id give you poet of the year. nothing else could so perfectly called to mind the sentiments of my past . i thought it was great in every way.


haha thanks =]
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Posted 4/23/08
Love can make you think of the more interesting poems in life. Nice poem, feelings do travel in there certainty.
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Posted 4/23/08

psyopslayerx wrote:

Love can make you think of the more interesting poems in life. Nice poem, feelings do travel in there certainty.


thank you =]
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