Post Reply SACRIFICE (PART 2)
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Posted 4/18/08 , edited 4/18/08
finally.....

free at last

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"daddy is just angry, I don't really mean that" her father said crying
"lets go home sunshine" her mother said grabbing her sunshine's arm but she pulled away, both her mother and father look at each other

"whats wrong sweetie?" her father ask

"I don't want to go, you will hurt each other again" she shouted

"That won't happen anymore" her mother said, already worried to what will happen
"NO!" sunshine ran behind one of the police man

the police witness the problem and agreed with the parents to solve this problem on the court, after a while sunshine will be put in the children's care (I just made that ) they also agreed that her parents will be given 1 month to continue explaining to their daughter the situation in the past

3 days before the trial

"i just got tired, uhm stress and that i became angry" her father still trying to explain hoping to convince her daughter

"daddy got tired at sunshine" sunshine said, still confuse

"no, what your father mean is that, when people become tired they easily get mad... and because your father got tired is because of his work" his mother said

sunshine is speechless

"we promise you sunshine that it won't happen anymore" her father said

sunshine is still speechless and her saw her face became pale

"i'm sorry daddy, i want you and mommy to be happy"
"we won't be happy without you sweetie" her father said

sunshine did not say anything anymore

in the court

after another explaining to their daughter

"what is your decision?" the judge ask

"WHAT DID WE DO WRONG!" her father said in rage

"are you sure about this?" the judge ask sunshine

"yes"

" the decision is final!" the judge said "sunshine pearl will be put in the custody of the children's care and will be decide upon to where she will be put....

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ouch that really hurts,..... hehehe love a bad ending joke....

surprise... i have a surprise
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Posted 4/18/08
aww...
sunshine will go to the children's care...

what a sad ending
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Posted 4/20/08

kawaiimayako wrote:

aww...
sunshine will go to the children's care...

what a sad ending


well true, this is the ending of "sacrifice" but their is another short story to continue this sad ending

hehehe

sacrifice: the orphanage
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Posted 4/20/08
omg, you can really write touching stories. T_T i'm so anticipating the continuation~ ^_^
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Posted 4/28/08
really?
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Posted 5/5/08
sad ending are the best ^_^
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Posted 8/19/08
your the best angel_prophecy
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