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I Hate Boys!

Moving

{ko-chan’s room}

Ko-chan: (did I really get my first kiss??…) *blush* (NO WAY!!!) maybe it’s just a dream…NO! it can’t be I was right there then…KYAA!! >.<

Ko-chan: my first kiss!!! *happy*

{school}

Miki-chan: ko-chan ohiyo

Ko-chan: *day dreaming and smiling at the same time*

Miki-chan: (scary..) ko-chan??...KO-CHAN!!!!! *shaking her*

Ko-chan: o, miki when did u get here??

Miki-chan: I was here 5 minutes ago, calling ur name!!

Ko-chan: ehehe…sorry miki-chan

Miki-chan: …why are u so happy today?? *suspicious*

Ko-chan: EH!? it-it shows??? *touching her face*

Miki-chan: of course!, you’d been smiling in space for so long (--___---)

Ko-chan: *blush* well…..uhh..how to say it....*nervous*

Miki-chan: just say it! *dosen't have patients*

Ko-chan: ok! *blush* I had my first kiss!! >.< *said it really fast*

Miki-chan: that’s it?

Ko-chan: u-u mean u had ur first kiss before??!!! *surprise* *pointing at her*

Miki-chan: nope

Ko-chan: really?? you sounded like u had before..

Miki-chan: it’s only natural that u get ur first kiss in this age that’s all

Ko-chan: guess who kiss me *happy*

Miki-chan: who?

Ko-chan: GUESS!!!!

Miki-chan: kazuki..(was just guessing)

Ko-chan: yup!~ ^_^

Miki-chan: *falls of chair*

Ko-chan: miki-chan?? (I guess it was to much for her to handle..)

Miki-chan: are u serious?? *trying to get back up*

Ko-chan: yup!~

Miki-chan: WOW!!! your finally processing >.< it took sooo long (my hard work has pay off) *crying*

Ko-chan: (miki-chan is acting weird) …..thank you?

Miki-chan: *still crying* ur very welcome!! *patting her back* good job!!!

{lunch}

Ko-chan: ne, miki-chan where is mayu??

Miki-chan: she went on a vacation with her family

Ko-chan: really?? Where are did they going???

Miki-chan: Kyoto, she’s meeting her grandma up there

Ko-chan: wow!! I always wanted to go there >.<

Miki-chan: ne, ko-chan isn’t kazuki moving??

Ko-chan: *just remembers* yea…...

Miki-chan: OMG!!!

Ko-chan: what?

Miki-chan: THE BET!!!!

Ko-chan: what about it?? *confuse*

Miki-chan: it’s the same day, when kazuki is moving

Ko-chan: eh??!!

Ko-chan: WHAT IAM GOING TO DO???!!!

Miki-chan: nothing, just act normally (it’s kazuki’s weakness hehe)

Ko-chan: ok….(is that really going to work?….)

{after school}

Ko-chan: *blush* (just talk to him normally) uhh…kazuki

Kazuki: what?

Ko-chan: do u like me??

Kazuki: *shock* …….i can’t tell you *blush*

Ko-chan: eh? why?

Kazuki: I’ll tell you when I want to

Ko-chan: (weirdo) ….are u really moving??

Kazuki: yea

Ko-chan: why?

Kazuki: my dad found a good job at New York

Ko-chan: that’s so far away…..

Kazuki: I know….and im moving tomorrow

Ko-chan: WHAT? That soon??? *shock*

Kazuki: my dad wants to move early, and get used to his job

Ko-chan: *crushed* (be, BE happy!! KO-CHAN!!!, IT FOR KAZUKI!! >.<) im glad your dad found a good job ^_^ (im doing the right thing right?)

Kazuki: *shock* yea…

Ko-chan: well….call me when u get there ok? ^_^ I’ll be waitng for your calls, DON’T FORGET!!

Kazuki: I won’t *hurt*

Ko-chan: ok bye bye!~ ^_^ (NO! my tears are coming out!!) *runs out*

{2 minutes larer}


Kazuki: ko-chan....i really do love you…..

Ko-chan: *crying* (Im doing the right thing, I can’t be selfish) *running*


OMG!!! Kazuki is moving!!!! >.< NOOO!!!!

What will ko-chan do??

See you in the next chapter!!~ =D

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OMG i NEED next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sniff sniff this is sooo emotional!!!
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Awwww, that's soo sad...poor Ko-chan...and Kazuki!! Unspoken love </3 *sniff* I hope everything turns out alright
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I love this so much! Plz post the next chapter soon!
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awww so sad hes movin! i hope everything turns out fine!
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OMG i NEED next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sniff sniff this is sooo emotional!!!


thanks >.< i will try to hurry
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Awwww, that's soo sad...poor Ko-chan...and Kazuki!! Unspoken love </3 *sniff* I hope everything turns out alright


me too ^ ^ lets hope so
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I love this so much! Plz post the next chapter soon!


i will!!
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awww so sad hes movin! i hope everything turns out fine!


me too TT~TT
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I Hate Boys!

Moving

{ko-chan’s room}

Ko-chan: (did I really get my first kiss??…) *blush* (NO WAY!!!) maybe it’s just a dream…NO! it can’t be I was right there then…KYAA!! >.<

Ko-chan: my first kiss!!! *happy*

{school}

Miki-chan: ko-chan ohiyo

Ko-chan: *day dreaming and smiling at the same time*

Miki-chan: (scary..) ko-chan??...KO-CHAN!!!!! *shaking her*

Ko-chan: o, miki when did u get here??

Miki-chan: I was here 5 minutes ago, calling ur name!!

Ko-chan: ehehe…sorry miki-chan

Miki-chan: …why are u so happy today?? *suspicious*

Ko-chan: EH!? it-it shows??? *touching her face*

Miki-chan: of course!, you’d been smiling in space for so long (--___---)

Ko-chan: *blush* well…..uhh..how to say it....*nervous*

Miki-chan: just say it! *dosen't have patients*

Ko-chan: ok! *blush* I had my first kiss!! >.< *said it really fast*

Miki-chan: that’s it?

Ko-chan: u-u mean u had ur first kiss before??!!! *surprise* *pointing at her*

Miki-chan: nope

Ko-chan: really?? you sounded like u had before..

Miki-chan: it’s only natural that u get ur first kiss in this age that’s all

Ko-chan: guess who kiss me *happy*

Miki-chan: who?

Ko-chan: GUESS!!!!

Miki-chan: kazuki..(was just guessing)

Ko-chan: yup!~ ^_^

Miki-chan: *falls of chair*

Ko-chan: miki-chan?? (I guess it was to much for her to handle..)

Miki-chan: are u serious?? *trying to get back up*

Ko-chan: yup!~

Miki-chan: WOW!!! your finally processing >.< it took sooo long (my hard work has pay off) *crying*

Ko-chan: (miki-chan is acting weird) …..thank you?

Miki-chan: *still crying* ur very welcome!! *patting her back* good job!!!

{lunch}

Ko-chan: ne, miki-chan where is mayu??

Miki-chan: she went on a vacation with her family

Ko-chan: really?? Where are did they going???

Miki-chan: Kyoto, she’s meeting her grandma up there

Ko-chan: wow!! I always wanted to go there >.<

Miki-chan: ne, ko-chan isn’t kazuki moving??

Ko-chan: *just remembers* yea…...

Miki-chan: OMG!!!

Ko-chan: what?

Miki-chan: THE BET!!!!

Ko-chan: what about it?? *confuse*

Miki-chan: it’s the same day, when kazuki is moving

Ko-chan: eh??!!

Ko-chan: WHAT IAM GOING TO DO???!!!

Miki-chan: nothing, just act normally (it’s kazuki’s weakness hehe)

Ko-chan: ok….(is that really going to work?….)

{after school}

Ko-chan: *blush* (just talk to him normally) uhh…kazuki

Kazuki: what?

Ko-chan: do u like me??

Kazuki: *shock* …….i can’t tell you *blush*

Ko-chan: eh? why?

Kazuki: I’ll tell you when I want to

Ko-chan: (weirdo) ….are u really moving??

Kazuki: yea

Ko-chan: why?

Kazuki: my dad found a good job at New York

Ko-chan: that’s so far away…..

Kazuki: I know….and im moving tomorrow

Ko-chan: WHAT? That soon??? *shock*

Kazuki: my dad wants to move early, and get used to his job

Ko-chan: *crushed* (be, BE happy!! KO-CHAN!!!, IT FOR KAZUKI!! >.<) im glad your dad found a good job ^_^ (im doing the right thing right?)

Kazuki: *shock* yea…

Ko-chan: well….call me when u get there ok? ^_^ I’ll be waitng for your calls, DON’T FORGET!!

Kazuki: I won’t *hurt*

Ko-chan: ok bye bye!~ ^_^ (NO! my tears are coming out!!) *runs out*

{2 minutes larer}


Kazuki: ko-chan....i really do love you…..

Ko-chan: *crying* (Im doing the right thing, I can’t be selfish) *running*


OMG!!! Kazuki is moving!!!! >.< NOOO!!!!

What will ko-chan do??

See you in the next chapter!!~ =D



why did ko chan lie?????
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hey plz hurry up with the next chapter n is the story ending soon cuz it fell like it?
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hey plz hurry up with the next chapter n is the story ending soon cuz it fell like it?


me too!!! TT~TT i really like it too....but it can't go on forever but im going to make another story too ^_^ it's going to be just as good as this one!! plz read my other one when im done writing i hate boys!
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ahlor wrote:

I Hate Boys!

Moving

{ko-chan’s room}

Ko-chan: (did I really get my first kiss??…) *blush* (NO WAY!!!) maybe it’s just a dream…NO! it can’t be I was right there then…KYAA!! >.<

Ko-chan: my first kiss!!! *happy*

{school}

Miki-chan: ko-chan ohiyo

Ko-chan: *day dreaming and smiling at the same time*

Miki-chan: (scary..) ko-chan??...KO-CHAN!!!!! *shaking her*

Ko-chan: o, miki when did u get here??

Miki-chan: I was here 5 minutes ago, calling ur name!!

Ko-chan: ehehe…sorry miki-chan

Miki-chan: …why are u so happy today?? *suspicious*

Ko-chan: EH!? it-it shows??? *touching her face*

Miki-chan: of course!, you’d been smiling in space for so long (--___---)

Ko-chan: *blush* well…..uhh..how to say it....*nervous*

Miki-chan: just say it! *dosen't have patients*

Ko-chan: ok! *blush* I had my first kiss!! >.< *said it really fast*

Miki-chan: that’s it?

Ko-chan: u-u mean u had ur first kiss before??!!! *surprise* *pointing at her*

Miki-chan: nope

Ko-chan: really?? you sounded like u had before..

Miki-chan: it’s only natural that u get ur first kiss in this age that’s all

Ko-chan: guess who kiss me *happy*

Miki-chan: who?

Ko-chan: GUESS!!!!

Miki-chan: kazuki..(was just guessing)

Ko-chan: yup!~ ^_^

Miki-chan: *falls of chair*

Ko-chan: miki-chan?? (I guess it was to much for her to handle..)

Miki-chan: are u serious?? *trying to get back up*

Ko-chan: yup!~

Miki-chan: WOW!!! your finally processing >.< it took sooo long (my hard work has pay off) *crying*

Ko-chan: (miki-chan is acting weird) …..thank you?

Miki-chan: *still crying* ur very welcome!! *patting her back* good job!!!

{lunch}

Ko-chan: ne, miki-chan where is mayu??

Miki-chan: she went on a vacation with her family

Ko-chan: really?? Where are did they going???

Miki-chan: Kyoto, she’s meeting her grandma up there

Ko-chan: wow!! I always wanted to go there >.<

Miki-chan: ne, ko-chan isn’t kazuki moving??

Ko-chan: *just remembers* yea…...

Miki-chan: OMG!!!

Ko-chan: what?

Miki-chan: THE BET!!!!

Ko-chan: what about it?? *confuse*

Miki-chan: it’s the same day, when kazuki is moving

Ko-chan: eh??!!

Ko-chan: WHAT IAM GOING TO DO???!!!

Miki-chan: nothing, just act normally (it’s kazuki’s weakness hehe)

Ko-chan: ok….(is that really going to work?….)

{after school}

Ko-chan: *blush* (just talk to him normally) uhh…kazuki

Kazuki: what?

Ko-chan: do u like me??

Kazuki: *shock* …….i can’t tell you *blush*

Ko-chan: eh? why?

Kazuki: I’ll tell you when I want to

Ko-chan: (weirdo) ….are u really moving??

Kazuki: yea

Ko-chan: why?

Kazuki: my dad found a good job at New York

Ko-chan: that’s so far away…..

Kazuki: I know….and im moving tomorrow

Ko-chan: WHAT? That soon??? *shock*

Kazuki: my dad wants to move early, and get used to his job

Ko-chan: *crushed* (be, BE happy!! KO-CHAN!!!, IT FOR KAZUKI!! >.<) im glad your dad found a good job ^_^ (im doing the right thing right?)

Kazuki: *shock* yea…

Ko-chan: well….call me when u get there ok? ^_^ I’ll be waitng for your calls, DON’T FORGET!!

Kazuki: I won’t *hurt*

Ko-chan: ok bye bye!~ ^_^ (NO! my tears are coming out!!) *runs out*

{2 minutes larer}


Kazuki: ko-chan....i really do love you…..

Ko-chan: *crying* (Im doing the right thing, I can’t be selfish) *running*


OMG!!! Kazuki is moving!!!! >.< NOOO!!!!

What will ko-chan do??

See you in the next chapter!!~ =D



why did ko chan lie?????




she lie because she didn't want kazuki to be sad, if she cries kazuki will be sad too and she's trying her best to be happy for him

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xBlackRosex wrote:

hey plz hurry up with the next chapter n is the story ending soon cuz it fell like it?


me too!!! TT~TT i really like it too....but it can't go on forever but im going to make another story too ^_^ it's going to be just as good as this one!! plz read my other one when im done writing i hate boys!


dont worry i will cuz u have a great ideas 4 story
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