Post Reply A New Love
Posted 4/18/08
I want to say I love you
But it seems we drift apart
I can’t seem to reach you
You’ve gotten a head start
As I chase after you
I seem to realize
The facts that I never knew
Just start to materialize
I don’t really know you
Just a fantasy, a dream
Yet these feelings still grew
You were blurred by a gleam
I never saw the real you
Or knew what you were all about
So can these feelings of mine be true
That’s what I begin to doubt
But I don’t want to forget you
Not without knowing you at all
Cause even if I don’t have a clue
You still caught me in your thrall
So I’m staying by your side
To get to know you a bit better
So that for you I can provide
A love that lasts forever

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Posted 4/18/08
oo , nice poem =] i really enjoyed how you stated the hardships of getting love
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Posted 4/18/08

kagura4 wrote:

I want to say I love you
But it seems we drift apart
I can’t seem to reach you
You’ve gotten a head start
As I chase after you
I seem to realize
The facts that I never knew
Just start to materialize
I don’t really know you
Just a fantasy, a dream
Yet these feelings still grew
You were blurred by a gleam
I never saw the real you
Or knew what you were all about
So can these feelings of mine be true
That’s what I begin to doubt
But I don’t want to forget you
Not without knowing you at all
Cause even if I don’t have a clue
You still caught me in your thrall
So I’m staying by your side
To get to know you a bit better
So that for you I can provide
A love that lasts forever



Awww, that was absolutely adorable!!! I loved it!!! >.<
I hope their love lasts forever <333
Posted 4/19/08

azndisaster wrote:

oo , nice poem =] i really enjoyed how you stated the hardships of getting love


thanx X3
Posted 4/19/08

moonwarrior485 wrote:


kagura4 wrote:

I want to say I love you
But it seems we drift apart
I can’t seem to reach you
You’ve gotten a head start
As I chase after you
I seem to realize
The facts that I never knew
Just start to materialize
I don’t really know you
Just a fantasy, a dream
Yet these feelings still grew
You were blurred by a gleam
I never saw the real you
Or knew what you were all about
So can these feelings of mine be true
That’s what I begin to doubt
But I don’t want to forget you
Not without knowing you at all
Cause even if I don’t have a clue
You still caught me in your thrall
So I’m staying by your side
To get to know you a bit better
So that for you I can provide
A love that lasts forever



Awww, that was absolutely adorable!!! I loved it!!! >.<
I hope their love lasts forever <333


Aww, thanx X3
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Posted 4/22/08
Amazing!! u're really great in making poems!!
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