Post Reply ICHIRUKI chapter 1
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Posted 4/19/08
many of my friends in friendster really like it.. i dont know if u like it or not
Ichigo and rukia's date:(while walking) [RUKIA]:"ichigo..so... where is our destination"
[ICHIGO]:"just follow me..you'll see" *grin* (rukia quickly follows ichigo .walk beside him)..(ichigo glance a little to rukia and when he look at her hands ,he suddenly hold it)..(rukia was suprised at first ,she stare at ichigo for a while and smile..(they arrived at their destination)........[RUKIA]:"the theater?...so we gonna watch a movie?"..(ichigo is speechless and blushing hard ..rukia wondered why..she run to see wat movie is it [RUKIA]:*suprised* "a love story?!" (looked at ichigo with a teasing grin).....[RUKIA]:" i never knew dat ur so romantic side.....[ICHIGO]: (0_oIII) "i forgot dat the sci-fi movie was a week ago..very well (sigh) "were here so lets just watch it "...(after watching the movie they step out from the theater).....[RUKIA]:"dat was a very good movie isnt it?" *wiping tears* ...[ICHIGO]: *denying look at his face*"its boring".[RUKIA]:"dont deny it..i can see the look at ur face dat u liked it"...[ICHIGO]:"shut up!" *turn around hiding his blushing face* "lets go to the restaurant im hungry!" [RUKIA]: *half round eyes* changing the subject *whispering* .......(after eating to the restaurant there next destination is the zoo)...[RUKIA]:"look at the monkey its looks funny" *laughing* [ICHIGO]:"yeah" *smile a little* (ichigo is silent while rukia is enjoying looking at diff animals)
im glad she's having a good time her thoughts away from hollows,deathgod jobs,she deserves some rest from it (ichigo was thinking deeply about it..ichigo look around when he saw a familiar face..he recognized him.... its rukia's brother hiding beside the wall. looking at them like a hungry wolf [ICHIGO]:"bya~ bya~kuya!".....[RUKIA]:"wats the matter?" (ichigo looked at rukia den look where byakuya is.. he's gone)..[ICHIGO]:"no..nothing" *grab rukia hands pulling her to the exit* [ICHIGO]:" we've better go home" *face full of sweat ,looking everywhere* (rukia's face is clueless)
walking back home the clouds suddenly become dark and it rain hard ..it took a while before they find shelter..[ICHIGO]:"man! it rain all of the sudden?!" (ichigo notice rukia is shaking)....[RUKIA]:"so~co..cold *she whispered breathing heavily* (ichigo cant stand watching rukia .....so he suddenly hug her tight)... to be continue
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Posted 4/19/08
this story have love story ..comedy and battles

this is a preview (highlights of the story)

the smoke were cut in half side ways when the ice wings began to unfold..HITSUGAYA:"Ban~kai..Daiguren Hyorinmaru!" Ice also forms into a dragon's head around his sword hand, encasing it up to the hilt. His left arm is covered fully until the wrist where it then spans into claws, leaving his hand and fingers free. Hitsugaya's feet are encased in ice in a similar manner to his left hand.

BYAKUYA:"this is a very rare situation (he let go of his zanpakto.his zanpakto slowly decend to the ground The sword passes through the ground) .".behold i'll show u weaklings creatures...BAN~KAI!" two rows of giant blades rise up from the ground behind Byakuya

BYAKUYA:"senbonzakura kageyoshi"

KENPACHI:"wahahahaha" looking at all of the giant arrancars

KENPACHI "this will be fun" kenpanchi massive reiatsu comes out from his body

RENJI:"BANKAI!...hihio zabimaru!"

and more characters..... at the last part of this preview



dats all for now..

post comment if u want to continue the story..so dat i have inspiration and i will know who read this story..i can inform them when the new chapters come out

and also wat u think about the preview.
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